I Created a Wizard

It's well written and the subject matter is good, but it's too white.

Attracted by the title but dissuaded by the comments 🤫

Let's learn from Next Door. The protagonist doesn't use the system and doesn't travel through Golden Finger. He relies on his own knowledge and a lot of experiments to create a wizard.

In the eighty-odd chapters, the protagonist completes the wizard plane like a rocket, and then completely travels through the planes to earn merit, and immediately starts over again. Looking at the catalog, it is Xianxia, ​​swordsmanship, and there is no such thing as a wizard.

It's getting more and more poisonous. It's a running account written by an elementary school student. The subject matter is rare but actually nothing new. The characterization is the same as the individual 💩

The author must have read books on low-dimensional games and then suddenly thought of writing this book. According to my estimation, the author should be a middle school student, probably. The reason why I say this is, firstly, that there are some oversights such as person switching, which can be seen to be written in fragmented time, and the fragmentary ideas are relatively complete but the long-term ideas are average; secondly, the author's ability to describe and render the plot is too weak, and it seems that the literary foundation is not very deep; thirdly, the author pays too much attention to the connection of the plot but ignores the in-depth characterization of the secondary characters. The image of the protagonist is also relatively vague, and many things are mentioned in one stroke. My humble opinion as an old bookworm, if it is helpful, I hope you can improve it, the author. If you can improve your writing skills in the future, or if you have a good idea, you can consider pursuing it.

[Bookworm Review] The author probably read books on low-dimensional games and then suddenly thought of writing this book. According to my estimation, the author should be a middle school student, probably. The reason why I say this is, firstly, that there are some oversights such as person switching, which can be seen to be written in fragmented time, and the fragmentary ideas are relatively complete but the long-term ideas are average; secondly, the author's ability to describe and render the plot is too weak, and it seems that the literary foundation is not very deep; thirdly, the author pays too much attention to the connection of the plot but ignores the in-depth characterization of the secondary characters. The image of the protagonist is also relatively vague, and many things are mentioned in one stroke. My humble opinion as an old bookworm, if it is helpful, I hope you can improve it, the author. If you can improve your writing skills in the future, or if you have a good idea, you can consider pursuing it.

It's been a failure since the beginning of Kendo World. I suspect the author has run out of inspiration.

Completely devoid of emotion, a running account, many loopholes, and inconsistent with principles. . . . . .

I read the novel about Recasting the Wizard and then read it, but I was very disappointed. This book is far inferior to Recasting Nothing. If the biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist's form is hazy and foggy, which is inappropriate when written in a novice style. Well, overall, the writing techniques still have a lot to be desired.