Tai Xuan Is Like a Dream

It is inevitable for a newcomer to write a new book to make mistakes. I hope you will bear with me and welcome your comments and better suggestions! Thank you!

Introduction. . But he accidentally got involved in a grudge between monks. Since then, there has been no heroic hero in the world, and there is an ant in Tianshu who is struggling to survive. This sentence is what persuades you to quit.

... No more flattery, this is rare. I found a small flaw - that is, the 'subject' vocabulary in a customary paragraph is slightly repetitive, making it a bit more tacky. Although it is necessary for coherent logic, one or two can be omitted. It is not necessary to be so rigorous in not missing the subject, predicate and object in every sentence transition. In this way, the writing style should be more casual and romantic. However, it doesn't hurt!

Although there are not many words, it can be seen from the existing chapters that the author is still very good.

With your unique ideas and your rich literary skills, you will definitely succeed 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹😄😄

I am from the village next to yours, and I have read a few chapters. I haven't finished it yet, so I will say a few words for now: You are a newcomer to Qidian, but you are by no means a newcomer to writing. Your book is the only one on this list that I appreciate. You're just not familiar with this damn place's broken rules, like me.

Today's recommendation ticket is here~~~

The process is always more important than the result. I support you greatly, come on~~

The author's subtitles for each chapter make people feel the poetic situation. I look forward to the titles of each chapter, and I also like the ancient poems that appear from time to time.

I read the first dozen chapters carefully and in detail, which reminded me of the feeling I had when I was in middle school, watching Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties alone at home. The author's skills are really good, he uses a lot of allusions, and his choice of words and sentences is very comfortable. I just don't know if this style will be accepted by many readers. I don't know why, but I feel that the sense of substitution is relatively weak.

Sometimes appropriate description of the environment can make the emotions of the characters more abundant, so this aspect has been greatly enhanced.

Reading this book, it feels like seeing another world. The disputes there make us marvel. This book is a masterpiece.

I prefer one-on-one, and the male protagonist is single-minded. This is what I prefer to watch. Come on!