A Door from the Start

Considering the silent majority of online novel readers, comments in the book review section represent less than one percent of the total, and most people are quite satisfied. Revising the book based on these reviews would offend most readers. Therefore, any opinion that hasn't appeared more than a hundred times can be ignored.

I think after the Luo Tian Grand Ceremony, the protagonist should rush to Biyou Village to help Ma Xianhong complete his Body Refinement Furnace before the temporary workers' attack. Divine Refinement is arguably the easiest of the Eight Extraordinary Skills to acquire. In the original story, if the temporary workers had arrived a few days later, Ma Xianhong's Body Refinement Furnace would have been completed.

After reading the first three chapters, a woman suddenly appears wanting to take the protagonist as her apprentice—that's a bit too much! I'm outta here. I hope the author writes better later on (it would be best to revise the first few chapters; they're too toxic).

There's practically no plot; it relies entirely on its creativity to keep the story going. Just like how the Marineford arc is the ultimate test of whether a One Piece fanfic is good or not, the Luo Tian Grand Ceremony is probably the best example of what makes an Under One Person fanfic appealing, because the main character's presence becomes too strong later on! Anyway... Let's hold on for a few more chapters.

After reading a dozen or so chapters of this book, I succumbed to the poison and died. If you're like me, someone who pays particular attention to detail in books, then I wouldn't recommend this one; it's a bit of a trap.

Lord Marquis. Not Lord Marquis! There's an extra vertical line in the middle.

Is this a sign that the story is going to be a disappointing ending? ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

The protagonist is a member of the orthodox Quanzhen Taoist sect! Why would he go and acknowledge his ancestors? He has absolutely no connection to anyone else! The protagonist is a free spirit from beyond the heavens; ordinary people would never dare to take him in! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

The author's handling of romance feels rather clichéd. If the romance were well-written, it wouldn't be a problem, but forcibly lowering Chan Yinsha's rationality—is that really a good thing? Xiao Sang in *A World Worthy* is so much better! If the author can't write good romance, it's better not to touch it at all.

I haven't read the Yang Shen novel, but I hope the author can add more plot elements from Chinese animation.