A Door from the Start

According to the silent majority of online novels, less than 1% of the people in the book review area have spoken, and most people are quite satisfied. If it were changed based on book reviews, it would offend most readers. Therefore, if an opinion appears more than a hundred times, it can be ignored.

I think after the Luo Tian Dajiao, the protagonist should go to Biyou Village first and help Ma Xianhong complete the self-cultivation furnace before the temporary workers attack. The Shen Ji Bai Lian can be said to be the best to obtain among the eight magical skills. In the original work, if the temporary workers had arrived a few days late, Ma Xianhong's self-cultivation furnace would have been completed.

After reading the first 3 chapters, a woman suddenly appeared and wanted to take the protagonist as her disciple. It was a bit poisonous, and she left. I hope the author will write better and better in the future (it is best to change the first few chapters, it is too poisonous)

There is basically no plot, it all relies on creativity. The most important test of whether a Pirates fanfic is good or not is the battle on top. The same person under one person should be Luo Tian Dajiao, because the main character in the back has such a strong sense of presence! Anyway... Just hold on for a few more chapters

After reading more than ten chapters of this book, I couldn't bear it and died of poison. If you are like me, you are a person who pays special attention to the details of books. So I don't recommend you to watch it, it's a bit poisonous.

Mr. Hou. Not Mr. Hou! There is an extra vertical line in the middle

Is this a hint that the ending is going to end?ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

The protagonist is an orthodox Taoist Quanzhen sect! Go and recognize your ancestors? The protagonists who worship other people are incompatible with them! The protagonist belongs to Tianwai Sanshu and most people would never dare to accept the protagonist ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

I feel like the author's writing about emotions is very cliched. It would be fine if he writes about love well, but is it really good to forcefully lower Chan Yinsha's rationality? Xiao Sang in "The Lord of the World" is so well written. If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, it is better not to touch it. Otherwise, I am afraid that this article will become a harem stallion + a brainless idiot, and finally become a romantic drama about harem house fighting. I have all kinds of worries. I hope the author will write it carefully and never kill himself or escape into the palace.

I haven't read the Yangshen novels. I hope the author can add more plots to the Chinese comics.