Salary Renewal

Similar to the ancient background, get a cheongsam. Is this the braided dynasty? Bad review

The account is too low-level and the comments are slight. I didn't want to post it. However, it's the first time I've seen someone who writes a book about feelings. I support it spiritually. Let me share a few points. 1. There are too many shadows of the fight at the beginning. Although the ending of the divorce is different later, the ending feels like a forced twist and is unnatural. It's best not to do it. Today's readers all have preconceived opinions. It's better to tell a straightforward story with a similar beginning. 2. It is best to use less personal pronouns in the book, such as I, Qi, Er, etc. This type of personal pronoun is not in line with the environment setting of this book. It has a feeling of being neither ancient nor modern, and it will not feel immersive when reading. 3. If possible, use less explanatory text. The author has obviously put a lot of thought into the introduction of the sects in the book. However, if he mentions too many sects at once, the readers will not be able to remember them and will not appreciate them. The most important thing in a novel is the characters and plot, and the readers are most concerned about the characters. The storytelling is followed by the writing style. If the story is smooth and the writing style is simple, most readers can accept it. However, too much explanatory text will affect the advancement of the plot. Readers cannot see the plot and only have a bunch of explanatory text, which greatly affects the viewing experience. If you really want to explain it, it's best to write it separately. Introduce it to readers bit by bit.

It's rare to find a real author who doesn't write a book for money and is willing to put in the effort to revise the previous text. To be honest, no matter how good the book is, I admire this kind of author, because I can't do it like her. It's not just me, but everyone in the comment area can't do it. Can't you give some respect to those who persist with their heart? I believe this book will get better and better. Come on, author, don't give up.

Rubbish novel, so much nonsense. Sales are all based on tips, it's disgusting. If you don't think about the novel, just reading it will do the trick. There is as much nonsense as a river. You think you are the Chen Dong from before. The routine is so old and has nothing new at all. This kind of book is full of nonsense and has no new ideas. At first glance, it looks like a book written by a cute newbie. If you write it like this, it will make readers even more disgusted. Readers are not fools…

Wow, Bai Mengshu is already a eunuch? Get the money and run?

This is... Amazing. It's my first time to write a book, and I only have 280,000 words. This is such a powerful network. . . . .

The autumn wind is bleak, and it's that cold time of year again. When Xiao Lizi got up early in the morning, he felt a chill in his belly. He suddenly felt sad and couldn't help but sigh: Alas! If we hadn't been forced to make a living back then and had too few things to do, our family wouldn't be a eunuch.

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What the hell is this writing about? There are actually hundreds of alliances? Is this the so-called return to the rich in full and the common people to be divided equally?

Activity Post Bai Ling——is the Monster Emperor Ghost Whale, with a total length of 500 meters and a snow-white body. It was named Bai Ling by Monkey Two. She has a gentle and kind temperament, does not like fighting by nature, and dreams of living in a place without fighting. She strayed into Penglai due to injury and was rescued by Hou Er and Yiyi. Although they didn't get along for a long time, she gradually fell in love with it and began to secretly love Hou Er! Maybe the decline of the Imperial Whale population made her more eager for family and friendship. In order to cherish the relationship with Hou Er and the others, she would rather remain silent and not want to hurt them. Unfortunately, the good times didn't last long. The monsters attacked Penglai and when Monkey Er and the others were in a critical situation, Bai Ling finally let out a loud roar - the unique curse sound of the Emperor Youwhale family. Then he risked his life and rushed into the battle to invite Monkey to rescue him! After this incident, Bai Ling's mentality changed. In order to stay with Hou Er for a long time, he had to strengthen himself. After that, he went out to practice and finally became the demon king, taking on human form and wearing white clothes. But Monkey 2 was captured in Lingshan, and Monkey Commander rescued them all. Bai Ling and others were left behind in Penglai, but in the end Monkey Brother escaped to the lower realm. What will happen next for Bai Ling and others is yet to be determined... Bai Ling's kindness is pitiable, and I don't want her to be mentioned in the article so hastily. I hope there will be more descriptions of her later. I feel that although Hou Er escaped to the lower realm and met Chu Xu, returning to his original strength cannot be achieved overnight! I remember that the previous article mentioned that Monkey 2 stole Yiyi's colorful wing fruit and could be found wherever he went. Maybe this is a clue that can be used to pave the way for what follows. All the monsters who went to Lingshan to rescue were wiped out. Bai Ling and the others who stayed behind in Penglai may have felt something bad happened and fled before the Buddhas could kill them. Maybe Yiyi felt that the breath of Monkey Two was still there, so she and Bai Ling started a journey to pursue the Monkey Brothers. But under the world, there is a huge sea of ​​people, and just a trace of breath is like searching for a needle in the sea, but Bai Ling and the others never gave up. After all the vicissitudes of life, they finally found the second monkey brother and helped Chu Xu rise step by step. However, Bai Ling and Yiyi would inevitably become jealous of each other in order to compete for the second monkey, and staged scenes that were both laughable and hilarious! Well, on the occasion of the Chinese Valentine's Day, I won't give readers a bunch of dog food here! The story of Girl Qianqian has been greatly revised, and the original shortcomings have been corrected as much as possible. I hope everyone can continue to support him! I also hope that everyone can witness how Chu Xu rises step by step...

Sure enough, if you have money, you will be awesome. The 250,000-word eunuch novel actually entered the Hall of Masterpieces.

However, I couldn't find the salary renewal story.

The starting point is only about profit, whether it is a good book or a bad book, so good books can only perish!

This book! It was a bit boring at first, but the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The author's ability to control the plot is astonishing, the author's historical knowledge is even more astonishing, and the author's writing style is amazing! The ordinary reveals greatness, and greatness is inevitable. It is not artificial, makes people think deeply, and makes people reflect. It can definitely become a literary work.           ，，， I am definitely not a sailor, just click on it if you don't believe me! What is commendable is that the author combines his reasoning with thinking about society and exploring human nature. He is truly the first literary master at the starting point. This book is a mystery novel that combines crime and reality. There are ordinary farmers with great wisdom and foolishness, a cunning fortune teller, a policeman with extraordinary wisdom, and the tragic experience of a beautiful woman. The fat policeman shouted loudly: There are no genius criminals, only stupid policemen. If they can catch you once, they can catch you a second time. Don't talk about China without reasoning, who wouldn't praise Song Ci for thousands of years?

When I read the title of this book, I thought of Chuanhuo

I am a warrior. The assassin who is capable of breast-feeding lives in unparalleled glory. Able to sneak guard a mage who only knows flash. Can use all spells to cover the priest driving the Light Hammer. But it's too difficult for me. Now hunters, summoners and druids also come to me and ask me to learn how to catch babies to help hunters fight monsters. Learning the summoning technique helps the summoner hide that his pets only have weak girls. The most hateful thing is that I have to learn the art of transformation and pretend to be a druid to help the druid seduce the black dragon so that the druid can pick up the dragon girl. It's so difficult for me😭

This is a money-stealing book written by a ghost eunuch

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Miscellaneous talk about Qingque The new chapter is called "Blue Bird", which has quite an ancient meaning. "When you make friends with your mulberry husband, there will be an oriole with its feathers." Well, I found this. In fact, I don't know how to memorize it. I probably know this sentence. However, if Qingque refers to the three blue birds, then many people should know it. There are many in ancient poems and articles. Well, the above is all nonsense. To be honest, the first thing I thought of was that fat guy Li Tai 🤭, because I just finished reading the old thief's book that I had saved, and I was deeply impressed. He is also a great person. Closer to home, the setting of Qingque is still a bit interesting, especially the way it absorbs spiritual energy and infuses it into its tail feathers. The image is very strong and I can praise it! As for Qingque's release, it probably has something to do with Chu Rou. After all, her master is Queen Mother Qing and the headmaster of Kunlun, so there is no way to avoid the connection. Therefore, the conclusion is that the blue bird may be a leftover variant of the three blue birds! Use the post as proof. If there is anything wrong, delete the post immediately!

I also wrote the book at the starting point, but the author's opening remarks touched me very much. Isn't a dream just about flying with a load? Maybe as light as a swallow, it can't fly farther, but she can fly higher, and it seems very comfortable to overlook the whole world. There are very few authors that I read (of course there are a lot of people who look down on me). Most of the works on the Internet are full of gimmicks, but have little meaning. Many people forget the value of a writer's existence, but I know that a book without a soul cannot last long. Maybe you will hide in the mud and sand for a long time, but eventually countless gold diggers will come and become famous. Gold has value. It's not that many authors have no dreams or pursuits, it's just that most people lack a kind of persistence. I hope the author can persevere, and my recommendation vote will be given to you...

The further I read, the more mature my writing skills become, the plot becomes more compact, and the characters become more vivid and lifelike. Just when she was feeling relieved, Qian Qian's writing suddenly changed, and the scene was brought to Penglai, the East China Sea. This sudden turn was unexpected, but I believe Qian Qian would not hit the target casually, there must be a purpose! Read on with a curious attitude. The ups and downs of the plot and the deep emotions of the characters are amazing and fascinating. The brotherhood of Monkey Big and Monkey Two, the brotherhood of monsters sharing life and death, Bai Ling's loneliness and kindness are lovable, and the renegade of the Buddhas is annoying... This short story contains too much, and it is sweet to savor it carefully. Qian Qian boldly depicts a splendid world of immortals and demons in simple language. Although it borrows elements from the classic Journey to the West, it also takes a different approach and has its own unique features! For example, demons are affectionate and righteous, and immortals and Buddhas are ruthless. This overturned my understanding of traditional immortals and demons. I wonder who is the demon and who is the Buddha? The Monkey King smashed the Five Elements Spirit Pearl and broke out of the Buddha's Kingdom in the palm of the Tathagata. Is this still the familiar saying "You can't escape from the Buddha's Five Finger Mountain"? Learn from it rather than copy it. There are many strange things in the mutated Chinese continent, and the inherent boundaries between immortals and demons are no longer clear. Who does not admire the sincerity of the demons, and who does not feel cold-hearted when the Buddhas in the sky turn against them! In the space passage, the vows made by Hou Da when he fought his way out of the siege echoed endlessly, but what will happen when he comes back? Who will reshape this chaotic world? All the gods and Buddhas chase me to the end of the world, and the five elements of longevity fight with me; Subvert the authority of the unruly wind and sand, and fight in the three realms to continue my myth. What entanglements will the successful escape of Monkey Dahou Er cause with Chu Xu? Will they continue to write another story in the Chinese Federation? Can Hou Da regain his cudgel and wear a red cloak to avenge his brothers? Can Chu Xu successfully take over the inheritance responsibility? Everything remains unknown, just wait for Qianqian to break it down for everyone...

Congratulations to Baimeng, the author has prepared women's clothing in Mengqun

Discussion on the plug-in of the protagonist in "Renewal of Salary Fire"! Throughout the Qidian fantasy books, basically the protagonists have their own unique plug-ins. With powerful plug-ins, the protagonists can defeat the sky, the earth and the air, and finally achieve great dominance! So what is Chu Xu's plug-in? That guy Er Qian only updated to chapter seventy-two three months after opening the book. There is no one left, and even the plug-ins are not fully used. Now let's take a look at Chu Xu's cheats so far! First, Li Shangjing! At present, it seems that the mirror that followed him through time is Chu Xu's biggest trump card. Even if he returns to the original world, he will eventually land on this mirror. But what's the secret behind the mirror? Er Qian didn't explain it at all. When it was mentioned in the text, it was mentioned in a few strokes, which made people very uncomfortable! Second, Monkey Big Monkey Two, this is by far the most powerful trump card and plug-in for Chu Xu. Although in a sense, Chu Xu is the shit shovel of the two monkeys, but not everyone can be the shit shovel of the Gold and Silver Saints. Third, Chu Rou! There shouldn't be any objection to this, right? A pretty boy who feeds on soft food will not even have a smooth journey in martial arts without his fiancée. Fourth, Xiaolian! Although she was Chu Xu's maid before, now that she has a great opportunity, she will naturally become famous and become famous. You can look forward to the maid card plug-in! Fifth, Tan Jue! Without someone's protection, the protagonist probably wouldn't even be able to get out halfway. Sixth, half immortal. It is said that this is a hole, but when to fill it depends on when Chu Xu encounters a big crisis. Counting over and over again, Chu Xu is just a rookie, and he will probably go further and further down the road of being a "white face"... I don't know how Chu Xu offended Er Qian, it's so pitiful. Finally, I habitually complain: Hum hum, someone said that they are going to break the news, and the tone is even louder. Why are you trembling? Mortals, tremble... In the end, there were only two more chapters, which really scared me to death... It's simply embarrassing [cover face]

About salute Regarding the salute mentioned in the article, I couldn't help but chat a few words. Of course, this is just a sporadic personal impression. I have not studied it systematically or verified it carefully. It is just for discussion. Please do not criticize it if it is not appropriate. The formal rituals of Han Li include bowing and bowing, as well as the daily hand-over ceremony. Let's talk about cupping your hands first. Generally speaking, it should be "putting your hands together and standing with your hands cupped." There are no other movements, and there is no need to clasp your fists, just stand still. But since the Qing Dynasty, it has gradually evolved into cupping hands and shaking back and forth, ugly! Let's talk about the formal etiquette of bowing. The hands are joined together to form a bow. Whether it is a deep bow or a shallow bow, it is a solemn ceremony in formal occasions. In today's terms, it has a sense of ceremony. Many other rituals evolved from the bow ceremony, such as the woman's bow ceremony. By the way, a woman's sideways salute is not actually a salute with her hands at her side. Han etiquette pays attention to the center, and her hands must still be placed in front of her body. It's just that it is inconvenient for women to face each other face to face when they first meet a stranger, so when they salute, they turn their bodies slightly sideways instead of putting their hands by their sides. The most important of the Han rituals is naturally the salute, and the three basic types are Jishou, Dunshou and Kongsou. The bowing of the head is the most respectful gift, and the requirement is to bow the head to the ground. This is the ritual for ministers to pay homage to the emperor. Of course, they can also pay homage to their elders. In ancient times, there were kings who bowed to their ministers to show special respect. The second step is to pause, which is to stand up after a slight pause of the head. This is what we usually call kowtow and kowtow. This is a gift of respect. This is evidenced by the fact that the pause was often used as an honorific at the beginning and end of letters in ancient times. Again, the head is empty. The empty head means that the head is not touching the ground, just reaching the hand. This is a gift of thanks, often used when men meet each other or when they are talking to each other. The rest of the prayers are all changes from these three prayers, and I can't remember the details. However, the ritual of three bows and nine knocks enacted by the Man Qing Dynasty must have misinterpreted the Han ritual. The nine obeisances of Han Li are nine types of etiquette. Choose one of them and perform the obeisance. When praying, you often pray again, that is, twice, and sometimes three times to show more respect. This is the so-called triple prayer. That's all. Before the Qing Dynasty, there was no such thing as three bows and nine knocks. In China, the beauty of military uniforms is called "Hua"; the great etiquette is called "Xia". Etiquette is indispensable!

Girl Qian's new book has been published since mid-May and is almost one month old now. It has been followed all the way to give everyone endless joy and reverie. It not only carries his own dream of being a writer, but also entrusts everyone's expectations! "June 1st" is not only a festival for children, but also a big day for book friends who have continued their salary, because on this day, they have finally reached a hundred alliances. I would like to congratulate Qianqian again, and I can't help but shout "Qianwo is mighty". This is the result of everyone's hard work and everyone's achievement! Although everyone is still immersed in the joy of Baimeng, we have to remind everyone that the story of renewing salary has just begun, and the rest of the story is still exciting. Everyone sits tight and waits for the protagonist Chu Xu's upcoming legend... When I first looked at the title of the book, it seemed that the protagonist of the story wanted to inherit something. I read it carefully with inexplicable curiosity and gained some insights. Although the girl Qian is new to writing, her writing style is acceptable, her descriptions of characters and scenes are subtle, and her language is so humorous that she can't help but laugh at times. Perhaps out of caution, the beginning of the chapter is not majestic, but uses a straightforward narrative. Some readers may complain about this, but I can completely understand the girl Qian. After all, writing for the first time focuses on a stable word. If the beginning of the chapter is so shocking that it will destroy the nine heavens and ten earths, this is impossible, and it is not what he can control at the moment. In the end, he may end up imitating others and painting a tiger instead of a dog. This is not what he wants, and it is not a respect for the readers! From this point of view, we can see that Girl Qian has a responsible heart for herself, this book, and the readers, and I can completely understand it! Furthermore, the main and secondary lines are clear. While the protagonist Chu Xu embarks on the path of cultivation, the story of the monkey brothers is interspersed with it, deliberately laying the groundwork for the following chapters. At the same time, it once again emphasizes that this fictional world has been corrupted, the Buddha is not a Buddha, and the monster is not a monster. One person needs to step forward and pass on the secret fire to reshape the righteous path of the world! Who? Chu Xuye... Although the second volume is an interlude, it is obvious that the girl Qian's intentions are clear, whether it is the lovableness of Bai Ling, the emperor's ghost whale, or the brotherhood of the monsters, or the unparalleled domineering power of the monkey king, or the shameless faces of the Buddhas... The portrayal is so lifelike and fascinating that I can't help but admire it several times! Finally, maybe the previous leading transition is about to end, and the monkey brothers unexpectedly meet the protagonist Chu Xu. Does this mean that the main line of the story is about to accelerate? It seems that the Monkey Brothers forgot something when they passed through the time and space tunnel, and they can't remember their past. Do you still remember the heroic words of Monkey King when he successfully escaped? Can Chu Xu help the monkey brothers take revenge? What exciting stories will Chu Xu and Monkey Dahou Er stage in the future? ...... All this has to wait for the girl Qian to explain it one by one to the readers. The white jade has slight flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. The girl Qian uses her own way to explain the fictitious story in her heart. Although she seems immature, her writing style is delicate and full of whimsical thoughts. She narrates various deeds in the story with modern, concise and pleasing affixes, which is novel but not obtrusive! The combination of modernity and tradition, the collision of reality and fantasy, makes readers sometimes happy and sometimes sad, and follow the protagonist Chu Xu's "renewal of salary" with a relaxed mood... The most important piece of advice: Girl Qian, can you try harder? Not enough🤭

A brief discussion on Volume 2: The Demons' Feelings Just when Chu Xu was about to take Song Ba Dao to Qingsongzi for medical treatment, the article suddenly turned to two flowers, one on each side, telling an interesting story about gods and demons. Was the sudden turn of events intentional by the girl Qian, laying the groundwork for the rest of the story? Or do you do it on a whim? With some doubts, I drank tea and read carefully until I turned to the last page. I couldn't help but sigh: "Although it describes the changing and sudden things, there are also explanations every time, making the gods and demons humane, and the charms are also wise. The end of the world. Suddenly, the stars are changing, the Buddha is not a Buddha, the demon is not a demon, and the world does not exist, how can it be enough to teach outsiders! In such a world, one person needs to stand up, pass on the fire, establish the right path, turn the world around, and reshape the bright road! " Although it borrows passages from the classic "Journey to the West", the girl seems unwilling to do so and fictionalizes many character stories on her own, making the book both familiar and boldly innovative. Any literary work is a reflection of a certain social life. Maiden Qian fabricated this story with rich and unique artistic imagination, vivid and tortuous plots, lifelike characters, and humorous language, and the whole story runs through this core theme very well. The protagonist of the story, Hou Da, has infinite abilities, is not afraid of anything, and has an unyielding spirit of resistance. From him, we can see the triple qualities of "human nature, monkey nature, and divinity" - the extraordinary magnanimity of a great hero, and his affection for his brother Monkey Er and all the monsters. Being righteous, witty, courageous, and humorous is human nature; having a monkey face and a thunderous mouth, and calling me the king of Penglai Island is monkey nature; if I become a Buddha and kill all the demons, if I become a demon and fight all the Buddhas, and the world is unkind, and I resolutely return to heaven, that is divinity. This is different from the traditional setting of the Monkey King, which makes the whole story more vivid and flesh-and-blood! What moved me even more to tears was Bai Ling, a kind-hearted emperor whale. Because of the decline of her clan, she longed for family and friendship. Her silence did not mean that she was cold and unapproachable, but that she had love and longed for love more than anyone else. He kept silent just because he didn't want to hurt innocent lives, just because of the unique curse sound of the Emperor Nether Whale family. Until Monkey Er and the demons were facing life and death, she let out a loud roar, risked her life and rushed into the battle to notify Monkey for rescue! Such a kind-hearted Bai Ling is lonely. His voice of attachment to his mother's love when he fell into a coma made me burst into tears. Mother's Day just passed, and it reminded me to cherish my mother's love even more! In the end, Monkey Two was trapped in the Lingshan Mountain, and the monsters asked Ying to go with them. The Buddhas did not believe what they said, and then they chased and killed them. The monsters had no choice but to fight to the death for Monkey Da and Monkey Two. The final result can be imagined. After reading this, I sighed and said: "Is this a monster? It's just like this, living and dying together with sincerity, and there are so many people in the world who are worse than that! Buddhas behave like this, with high-sounding words, and go back on their word. Are you ashamed?" Thinking about all kinds of reality, it is not like this, but I laughed at myself. In reality, how many "monkeys" and "monsters" are there? ! Sad... After reading this, I feel something in my heart, so I will briefly talk about it. Although this story is wonderful, looking back at the full text, it is a bit abrupt, but I believe that the girl Qian will not be aimless and will definitely have other uses! Although he was interested in asking, he was unwilling to reveal the mystery prematurely, so he had to hold back his curiosity and wait for the girl Qian to answer everyone's questions...

After reading the update, I felt a little emotional and had a few chats. First of all, the face of a certain religion seems to be relatively consistent in many articles. Anyway, if you are not a believer of me, your heart will be different, and if you don't join my sect, you will die! The paranoia of a fanatical believer comes upon you. Here too, when you start talking nonsense, you put your hat on it first, use the moral high ground to strengthen your beliefs, and put on beautiful emperor's new clothes for your various shameless actions. In fact, it is just the same party as against those who are different. Let me tell you an interesting anecdote. When I was a child, I listened to cross talk and there was a couplet that left a deep impression on me. The first couplet is: If you say you can do it, you can do it, and if you don't, it's okay; the second couplet is: If you say no, you can't do it, and if you do, you can't do it; Horizontal comment: If you don't accept it, you can't do it! In fact, it is very suitable to be used here in a certain religion. Anyway, whether you are a demon or not is just a matter of words. As for the welfare of the common people, it is an object to be represented, and it is arbitrary. Secondly, I don't quite understand the Qing San Dou Shu that Qian Qian mentioned. Because there is a friend and his wife who are obsessed with Ziwei Dou to a certain extent, so I don't dare to get to know him. Taoism has always had the ritual of "ritual fighting" because they believe that people are illuminated by the Seven Stars of the Big Dipper. Whether it is to prolong life or eliminate disasters, it is all under the control of the Big Dipper. Each of the twelve zodiac signs has its own guardian star. For example, as a person born in the year of Yi Mao, I belong to the Xuan Ming Wen Qu Niu star in the Fourth Heavenly Palace of the Beidou. Then the Big Dipper revolves around the North Star. The ancients compared the sky to a funnel, and the North Star is the spire, so the North Star is regarded as the emperor star, which is extremely important in numerology. It is said that the first creator of the North Star was the Sui man Yizi. The Yizi invented the rope rubbing and called it Xuan, so the North Star is also called Xuan Palace. Zi is the synonym for Xuan, and it is also called Zi Palace. Another name for North Star is Ziwei Palace, which comes from the ancients dividing the starry sky into three walls and twenty-eight constellations. The middle wall is Ziwei Yuan, so it is also called Zhonggong and Ziwei Palace. After a long talk, it was said that Zi Wei's origin was roughly the origin of Zi Wei Dou Shu. So, Qianqian, what does your Qingsan have to say? Of course, as for online articles, it's okay to just make up nonsense without thinking too much about everything. 🤭 I really don't understand Ziwei Dou Shu. I heard that it was created by Mr. Xiyi, but I don't know the details of the 12th House. Anyway, Ziwei Star is the first of all stars, so that system is called Ziwei Dou Shu. It is said that Ziwei Dou Shu is more popular in Hong Kong and Taiwan, while Bazi theory is the mainstay in Mainland China. They are almost the two most prominent schools of contemporary numerology. A little random thought, written casually, please forgive me for any inappropriateness. 🙏

Come on Qianqian! Qidian Literature is a big family. It wants to raise each new baby to grow up, and it will experience children, teenagers, and youth! We should help new authors grow up, guide them, be tolerant, and even more need to care for them carefully! Please also allow the author to grow slowly! No one is born an adult, and I am very grateful to the readers who support Qian Qian! Thank you for your strong support, encouragement and help to the author! I believe that the author will repay everyone's expectations! At the same time, I also hope this book can help Qian Qian meditate! I wish you grow up soon! Come on!

After reading these two chapters, I wanted to chat a few words. The name of the mirror, Li Shang, naturally has a story. The original meaning of "shang" is death, and "li" naturally means abnormal death caused by separation. Since ancient times, sentimental feelings have hurt the separation. Even if there are thousands of styles, who should I tell them? Thousands of miles of lonely tomb, no place to speak of desolation. Look at the goddess in the mirror again. Her red lips are protruding and her teeth are bright. Could it be that she is Concubine Mi? Fuxi's daughter, this is interesting when compared with the introduction! The Monkey Brothers are "born with the ability to speak" as soon as they wake up. It should be noted here that many people misunderstand that it is the Yellow Emperor who is "born with the ability to speak", but this is not the case. "Historical Records: The Chronicles of the Five Emperors" says that the Yellow Emperor was "born as a god, weak but able to speak", which means that he could speak in his infancy, not as soon as he was born. The one who was truly "born able to speak" was Gao Xin, also known as Emperor Ku, the great-grandson of the Yellow Emperor. "Gao Xin was born as a god and spoke his own name." He said that he called out his name when he was born. This is "born to speak". Of course, there is no way to verify that period of history, and Tai Shigong only heard about it, but now it is still relatively recognized by more historical records. Let me tell you a few more words. The Wu region where I am located originated from "Taibo went to Wu". Ji Li, the third brother of Tai Bo and Zhong Yong, had a son named Chang (King Wen of Zhou). The protagonist of the Red Bird Incident was Sheng Rui, so King Zhou Tai planned to pass the throne to Chang. The Tai Bo brothers were forced to go to Jingman and call themselves "Gou Wu". Taibo had no children, so Zhongyong succeeded to the throne. When his great-grandson Zhou Zhang was on the throne, King Wu successfully defeated Zhou and searched for Taibo Zhongyong's descendants. When he found Zhou Zhang, he still granted him the title of Wu, and granted his younger brother Yu Zhong the title of Anyi, the former site of the Xia capital, which was the state of Yu. Wu finally fell in love with her husband and became a negative example of someone who sacrificed his life and endured daring; Yu was killed by Xiangong and became the laughing stock of the ages for false Taoist attacks against Guo. This can be regarded as brothers who are of the same mind 😓 Monkeys appear and the bald head continues; three funny characters in one drama! It is estimated that there will be a lot of jokes about this combination in the future, so you can look forward to it.

This is the girl Qianqian's first time writing a book. As a good book lover, this book will definitely be praised! I followed all the way to the latest chapter, found some highlights, and also saw some shortcomings! The title of the book is "Continuing Fire", which tells the story of a young boy named Chu Xu who traveled to the earth in 2100. Due to the totem falling from the sky, the apocalypse came, and five major earth federations were formed. Chu Xu, who traveled through the Chinese Federation and the Sky Fire Chu family, practiced all the way, relied on his sword to travel to the ends of the world, encountered opportunities, and watched the story of his rise step by step! The writing is detailed throughout, and the characters' appearances and dialogues in each scene are vivid and lifelike, as if you were actually there. Through one incident after another, a series of character plots such as the estranged relationship with his fiancée Chu Rou, the brotherhood with Song Ba Dao, the brotherhood of Monkey and Monkey 2 sharing life and death, and the tragic story of Emperor You Whale Bai Ling risking his life for family love, etc., Are made of flesh and blood, touching the heart! Furthermore, through the background of the apocalyptic earth, the unique cultivation system of this article is boldly set up, and the traditional path of cultivating immortals is combined with the earth university education system, so that readers will not feel too abrupt and feel friendly! The most important thing is that in the context of the totem descended from the sky and the five points of China in this article, only the Chinese Federation has emerged in the world with its unique civilization; science and technology are dim, martial arts is prosperous, and only the Chinese Academy has an endless inheritance, pointing out that the protagonist Chu Xu will take over the legacy of the ancestors. The legacy of generations has passed down the fire of Chinese civilization from generation to generation, which is in line with the famous saying - "Establish a heart for the heaven and earth, establish a destiny for the people, carry on the unique knowledge for the past saints, and create peace for all generations." I think the author's original intention is to use this article to warn the world! No matter how the girl Qian Qian writes, in terms of conception, it can be said to be full of positive energy. Maybe Qian Qian brought her own situation into the protagonist, but why don't we feel the same way? No matter where we are, we should have a heart of "continuing to fuel the fire and continue learning"! The white jade is slightly flawed, and this article still has some shortcomings: although the title of the book is concise, it seems a bit obscure at first glance. As a guide, is it possible to have a preface or wedge at the beginning of the article so that book friends who are reading this article for the first time can have a general understanding, or to clarify the main idea and highlight the main idea of ​​the whole article? Furthermore, some parts of the writing are too colloquial, and the wording is a bit cumbersome, which reduces the reader's reading experience! Finally, this article is not consistent enough with the frame background of the structure. Although it is a post-apocalyptic earth with bleak technological civilization, at least basic civilization still exists. However, the full text is too classical fairy tale, and there are not many traces of the apocalyptic earth. As a result, Song Ba Dao does not even know the donkey... This is too ridiculous! Under the unconventional fictional background, can the collision between technological civilization and immortal civilization be another highlight of this article? Despite its flaws, this book is still a fantasy novel that can be read well. Let us accompany the protagonist Chu Xu to travel around the world with his sword and watch the ups and downs of this world... Ps: Some chapter names are similar, please pay attention! You can give some funny chapter names (it doesn't matter if it's a little colorful) to attract readers (general readers will read a new book in addition to the introduction and look at the chapter names to guess what the book is about)