A Planar Magic Empire Starting with A Song of Ice and Fire

Fight for hegemony flow, quickly cross the flow, narrative poetry. The protagonist goes to one world, and so on, and then goes to the next world and so on. In general, it's like a running account, and it really doesn't make much sense. The only novelty is that it uses the template of Lao Gunwu. After all, games are very popular, but few people write novels. Still worth seeing. In one section, the protagonist travels through Marvel, and the huge energy fluctuations in his portal are discovered by Ancient One, who teleports him through the ring, and the two meet and are wary of each other. Didn't start a fight? I thought there would be an exchange of magical skills. In the end, the protagonist gave in and said that the energy was high because traveling through the portal consumes more materials, so the energy caused was high, not my own energy. Hehe. If you really follow Gu Yi's temperament, he will be pulled directly into the mirror space after hearing these words, beat you up and then ask you what you are doing here. Always pass through each other. After all, planes compete for hegemony. There is no problem in bringing people from other worlds to another world. The strange thing is that the protagonist only fights a few times, and many people have never seen it. How can it be a deterrent? Normally, don't you have to pretend to be intimidating first and then talk? I think the author didn't write this well. Could it be that a long list of titles can prove how awesome he is? It seems to others that I am bragging. In addition, I hope the author will write more, instead of always traveling to this plane, doing trivial things, then getting something, building a door, slapping his ass and leaving. There is no sense of substitution at all, okay? I hope the author will work hard in writing. Some places are poisonous but not fatal. This is still okay.

Much better than those on many rankings!

This book will be considered complete after I finish writing Azeroth. I plan to write the next book about the second dimension. I don't know if anyone else will like it. I will roughly write down the two outlines I have drawn up and see which one you like better. Outline 1 "Starting with a Natural Teeth" How can I break it when I start with a natural tooth and no output, only milk? The sword-cutting skills I learned in "The Heroes of the Fallen Knight" and the inherent spiritual equipment turned out to be the famous natural teeth. I was very disappointed when there was no output. This is the story of the protagonist who constantly travels and grows between the two dimensions with his inherent spiritual equipment, Tianya. If I strike with this sword, you may be resurrected with full health. Traveling across planes: Fullmetal Alchemist - History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi - Attack on Titan - Crimson Eyes - Naruto - Full-time Hunter - TBD Outline 2 "Dragon Ball: The Nail Palace Power User" People with super powers are so weak. Who did I tell you that this old man is a person with nail power? Traveling to the Dragon Ball universe, you will continue to gain superpowers from characters voiced by Kugimiya, and see how those with Kugimiya's abilities can survive in the cracks of powerful combat bosses who explode planets at will. I understand Alphonse's alchemy, Shana's Heaven and Earth Tribulation Fire, and Zero Louise's magic. What's going on with this "Roadless Race" ability? Outline Three "The Battlefront of the Blood Realm of All Heavens" After practicing the Blood Fighting Technique to the full level in the world of "Blood Blockade Battlefront", the journey of becoming stronger and stronger begins with Fullmetal Alchemist. Uchiha Madara: Do you also want to dance? Protagonist: Breglid's Bloody Fighting Technique 999 - Long-lasting Coffin Sealing Prison! Madara turned into a blood cross and fell to the ground... Protagonist: What did he just say? Experience the world: Steel Refining-The Red Eyes-To be determined Out of these three outlines, please think about which one you like more. I will consider it and tell me your opinions. The first book has already trained me on how to write. The second book should be easier to write. If I decide on it early, I can organize how to write it and flesh out the outline.

The running account is so long-winded, what else can I do besides talking to myself? ? ?

What the hell are you writing? Listen to the story.

Let's put it this way, it feels like reading a middle school composition!

He didn't conquer a country, conquer a plane, or kill a few people. What kind of empire is this? Also, are you writing a diary?

. . . This is like reading a fucking account

The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. It seemed interesting at first, but it is about army colonization and constantly opening new worlds, and the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes, especially the many dramas I have never watched before. I was confused when I watched it. If you read it longer, you can slowly understand it. However, what I see now is a hodgepodge, and a bunch of unfamiliar ingredients are constantly added.

After reading the first few chapters, it was the first time I saw such a bad novel. Not a single character stood up, and the entire story was self-explanatory. Are you writing a novel?