Fabricating a Spiritual Qi Revival: Reviving Qin Shi Huang from the Start

If the author reads this book ten years later, I'm afraid he won't strangle himself to death, it's a black history!

This is the most trashy novel I have ever read. After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. 😓😓😓

Don't use your brain when reading novels, just make them funny. Today's novels are a thousand examples

No matter how good the subject matter is, it can't cover up your primary school-like writing style. Others' supporting characters have low IQs, but your supporting characters have no IQ at all.

The writing style of the author's novel was posted to the wrong website! The protagonist in the author's works is too much. This style of writing is not suitable for publishing on Qidian. If the author's novels are published on other novel websites, many people may read them. Are there any System Invincible novels on Qidian? The answer is yes, but they all maintain a certain standard very well. For example, although the author's enemies will lower their IQ, they will not slap their foreheads and continue to die while knowing that they may die. And what is the philosophy of Mohism! Love without aggression! If the Mohist mechanism only focuses on killing, wouldn't the pure bronze mechanism be even more dangerous? Why do they use more wood? The Mohists are not carpenters, and carpenters cannot represent Gongshu (Luban). Sorry, I am not saying that the author's novels are not good, but I hope that the author can check more information. Behind a good novel is information that is ten times higher than it. It is not possible to write everything with just a slap on the forehead. Qin Shihuang was not extremely domineering from birth. Many people say that he is a tyrant, but tyrants are not everything he has. Why did the remnants of the Six Kingdoms not have a large-scale uprising while he was alive? Because Qin Shihuang was not a fool, on the contrary, he was a wise monarch. I'm sorry that the author may feel uncomfortable after reading what I wrote, but I want to say that I quite like the concept of your novel. I hope it can be more perfect. I want this novel to be recommended for new books, I want it to be recommended for Sanjiang, I want it to be recommended for similar categories, I want it to be recommended on the home page, I want it to be liked and discussed by more book friends, and I want it to be read by more novel readers after reading it for the first time, the second time, and the third time... I hope the author will think twice ----- a 12-year-old bookworm

I came from an isolated island, so let me explain that I am not a troll, and I wanted to come over to support you. But. . . This is your third book, and your writing is still so bad! I know you're a girl, and there are many "special" readers who don't mind! But is it okay to be a little self-motivated? I really liked your work when you wrote your first book. The first time I gave you a reward of 10,000 coins, the first time I voted for a monthly vote... Many of the first times were given to you (if you don't believe me, check out the top ten fans list of the author's first book). The plot and writing of this book are really awkward. That's all! Come on!

. . . It looks so cliche. . . No brain flow?

I don't know why I didn't want to watch anymore after seeing that woman in Chapter 7! ! ! Because every time a woman appears at this time, it is particularly troublesome. She will pester the protagonist throughout the whole process, and as the protagonist develops, she will eventually become a harem, so alas! Also, I personally think that a novel like this that changes the world would be better if you were alone without a heroine or teammates. . . . . .

Oh my god, why is this such a good book? I didn't read it 15 years ago. This book is bound to be popular. It was just born 15 years later. I'll leave first. I can't read it at all.

Kill the dragon at the beginning. The dragon is a Chinese totem and the protagonist is a Chinese. Isn't this a slap in the face to us Chinese people? I feel upset when I see it.