Randomly Start with Pirates

After seeing the punishment of erasure, I just want to ask, can it be erased once?

The 12-year-old is 1.9 Meters tall. Males can still grow until their 20s. The author wants the protagonist to grow to 5 meters tall! The three brothers in the original work seem to be only about 1.7 Meters tall.

Analysis of the protagonist's behavior: From the current point of view, 1 The protagonist loves to lick the female character in the original work (kneeling and licking) 2 The protagonist likes to bb when fighting 3 The protagonist is arrogant and loves to show off 4 The protagonist has a conflicting personality and wants to write an adult perspective but is actually a primary school student. For example: the protagonist says that he kills decisively (actually he is a virgin) 5 The plot is poisonous, giving mandatory and mindless tasks, and the author did not handle the world view, power system, and plot rationality well. To put it simply, it is a book that has not broken away from self-interest

To be honest, when I mentioned joining the revolutionary army at the beginning, it seemed boring. Bye bye

Let me just mention that Sabo had burns on his face. You can search on Baidu to find out what a burned face looks like. It's okay in the anime, all the injuries look like that, there are no potholes or anything like that. When I think about reality or something. It's like I specifically searched for the real-life version of Pokémon before. Suddenly I felt that the earth is really good.

The setting background is actually good, but now the system basically has auxiliary functions, which are easily obliterated by tasks. It is completely the system controlling life. I can't watch it.

Although the plot text is okay, there is a big point in the chapter that persuades me to quit...

Brainless novels, no development, the four emperors are not as good as you, and you are wandering around at the age of 10

I said the author was short and the volume was small. No one would scold me.

It's the same as the novice tutorial. You can only follow the system and push forward You don't have any opinion. You can kill it at every turn. You should kill it once and see. If it doesn't work, don't do such childish things.

Chakra is brought by the sacred tree, right? What is in nature is natural energy, and don't take out the setting that the combination of physical energy and spiritual energy produces chakra. Without the sacred tree, how can we condense chakra?

The sacred tree is a characteristic of the Naruto world. It is made entirely of energy. Everything in the One Piece world seems to be made of physics. How can you add an extra power system to it? Let me ask you, the author, in fact, don't look at the One Piece world where sword energy is always slashing Arashi's feet. That is the inertial air flow generated after the force collides with the air Even natural elementalization can be captured with Haki. What is the use of adding chakra? Fire-type slashes, and elemental slashes are made by mastering the air and the angle of the sword. When you come out of the Naruto world, you can say that the protagonist's chakra flows back due to the rules of the world. The life force and soul force are extremely powerful, and the protagonist's talent is particularly strong. However, it is basically impossible to create a new system in the world of One Piece. The sacred tree is a key point that cannot be rounded at all. What do you think should be used instead? No, you can use chakra in the full-time hunter, because the world structure of the full-time hunter is special. Complex, using Ninjutsu Chakra is very interesting, but One Piece is a failure, because you need to complete what happened after the ending of the original One Piece. You can't justify it with a sacred tree. The ending of One Piece is fixed, and the world structure is also extremely simple. Only in a complex world structure can the system of Chakra be substituted and self-justified.

I retreated when I saw chakra,

The world of pirates, coupled with Naruto's abilities and the abilities of the League of Legends, can you control it? Writing like this will only destroy yourself, and the writing style is really not that good.

Taking advantage of Kishimoto's popularity and changing other people's settings, where's his face? It doesn't matter if you want to write something original, but this is a fan, so can you respect the original author?

I won't eat the thunder fruit after I get it, but give it away. It's amazing. It's such a cheat.

Now that the Tianlong people have been killed, the generals can be dispatched. Just let Kizaru come.

I looked at the cover of this book and looked forward to it. I clicked in and took a look. He suddenly turned the second brother into a pirate. Are the authors looking down on the profession of the revolutionary army? There are so few people writing about it. It is obviously such a promising profession. It is simply the underground party in another world. After reading deeply about the socialist successors of Marxism-Leninism and Mao Zedong, the time traveler in the past, I can get a proper promotion and salary increase.

I really accepted it and gave it chakra, but it turns out that the system has no ninjutsu. Damn it, I'm sick.

Don't eat even if there is thunder?! Are dragons that strong? Just because they are Chinese dragons? Cultivation of immortality transcends everything...

I watched the disgusting planes, Marvel Comics, and Fighting Against the Sky. These two are disgusting and disgusting to me. The others are a bit new. I haven't seen many authors write different flavors of these two. The world of Fighting Against the Sky is so big, and those authors have written the same characters except for the route of anti-inflammatory drugs. You can write other characters, and original works are fine, as long as the plot is roughly the same as the original work.

I want to say, set in Transformers. Cars were made using Megatron's technology. Transformers came first, and then cars came later. So why do you need to scan other ships to change the ship?

The author writes so well! ! ! ! ! !

In the end, the author feels that the outline has collapsed and is completely unfinished. It is recommended that you only read the first pirate chapter and pretend that he does not exist in the following chapters.

No wonder there are so few recommendation votes and no monthly tickets at all. This is not without reason

There are also Marvel fans who have agreed, and the promised pirates are just the beginning, but they actually deceived the lovely readers.

Sacred tree, where would chakra come from without the sacred tree? Brother, if you take your computer to ancient times, he won't be able to access the Internet.

Dragon soul? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? This awkward point is so embarrassing

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience