Select Immortal Record

As everyone knows, the Long Tao Building is required to have its own characteristics.

Sign in, support me greatly, come on, come on, come on, come on

Take a chance, sign in, show your support, come on, come on

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Sign in, support, come on, come on

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There are a lot of suspenses set up in the front. When the author reveals them one by one later, it will be very exciting. I am looking forward to it.

Good afternoon, have a bubble, support, come on, come on

Bubble, support a lot, come on, come on, come on

🤓 Great support, come on, come on, come on, come on

The most important thing in the whole book is the last 29 words of Chapter 7!

A very interesting book. One chapter is divided into two choices, the upper one is immortal and the lower one is witch. Unfortunately, the number of words in each article is too few. Maybe it would be better if it could be drawn into a story.

The author's imagination is very rich, which makes the plot unexpected and whets the reader's appetite. The author's logic is clear and meticulous, so the rich plot will not seem disconnected and the readers will follow the author's thinking.

The net is being cast wider and wider, what's next is what's next.

Just saw a wonderful place. . . . . Alas~~~~~~~ Is this life😭😭😭

The writing is good and the plot is good, but the plot selection mode seems unaccustomed. Writing this way is tiring, and it may not be popular with readers, so it is recommended to write in the normal mode.

I was bombarded with red envelopes! I'm going to update this book after reading it! Give the author a comment! I found this book looks really tiring! Now this, now that! And if you write like this, it is equivalent to writing 2 books at once! What I mean by 2 books is that the plot progress is a bit slow! Give me a suggestion... Author, you can write 2 books! This way you don't have to get tired of looking at it! (The writing and plot are very good)

I also support developing the selected chapters separately. The chapter titles can be "Chapter 0... (Part 1)" and "... (Part 2)", which makes it easy to jump directly in the directory.

Um! After reading it, I would like to give the author a suggestion (purely a personal opinion). You can give the protagonist one soul and two bodies. Generally speaking, he is still the same person. You can also say that he has an external incarnation, walking in different sects and practicing, taking the essence and strengthening himself. In this way, readers will have a clear protagonist in their hearts, and there is no need to jump to read. Moreover... It is easy to pretend to be pretentious.