Don't Watch the Show If You Are Cultivating Immortality

I can't stand it anymore! ! I can't help but complain! The heroine is timid and cowardly, hesitant and confused She also complains all day that she does not have the halo of the protagonist, so she is unlucky and has no big opportunities, please! Where is the world of cultivation that is not dangerous? Who can cultivate to the Mahayana and ascend peacefully without any waves or waves? Opportunities are presented to you and you give them up. Do you compete? What are you doing all day long worrying about the plot of the original heroine and the male co-stars? If something happens, I will hide away in fear! You are just a passerby! If you have no grievances against them, you might as well practice and strengthen yourself so that you have the strength to fight before danger comes! The author's writing style is also a bit poor. Many plots are written incoherently, making people confused There are also many detailed descriptions that are not clearly written. They always have to be re-introduced and explained in the author's words, and the words are not used well. Of course, there are a lot of bad sentences Really, I can tolerate any incoherent plot, inappropriate wording, or unclear description. Anyway, many articles I have read recently have such shortcomings. What is more difficult to tolerate is the unlikable character of the protagonist! She really might as well go back and farm with her parents in this world, why should she become an immortal!

I have read more than 300 chapters. I skipped back a little and took a look. I saw that the characters in the book have an average feeling for the heroine. I really can't stand it. The world of cultivation is originally about the jungle. The heroine is so timid and timid all the time. It's so irritating. I don't dare to fight for anything. I just rely on opportunities to come to my side. I don't dare to pick up the leaks. It's better to hide in a little black box and never come out. To be honest, the topic is very interesting. Theatergoer But you must first have the ability to watch the drama. It has always been unknown and transparent. It does not have the pleasure and touch of reading the usual cultivation novels. It is too bland. But some people may like this style. But it is not unpleasant. I really don't know that the children created by the author are so bad. Why can't they give more advantages? The character creation feels like the unknown heroine's best friend in the novel. Alas~ It would be better if the biological mother can make the heroine's personality change more obvious. It's too discouraging. But here I would like to express my admiration for the author's persistence😓😓😓

Although it is said to be a novel about cultivating immortals, I have read more than 500 chapters, and I don't feel much about the so-called differences in realms. For example, the Nascent Soul realm suppresses the Golden Core realm and below, the Golden Core suppresses foundation building and Qi training, and Foundation building suppresses Qi training. It feels that everyone is similar. The fighting scenes also have a strong sense of déjà vu in martial arts novels. I often feel like I am reading a martial arts novel rather than a fairy tale. Then, is there no setting in this article that can lead to fasting beyond the foundation level? I feel like monks in every realm need to eat or something.

So verbose. . . The same content and plot are mentioned again once again, repeated again and again, repeated endlessly, is the word count too low?

Overall, the book is not bad, but the psychological activities of the protagonist are described in too detail. It covers everything, which makes it boring to read. The author has written out the things that are obviously unimportant and unnecessary in detail. Is this just to make money because of the high number of words? (If a chapter has 1,000 words, 7/800 of them are descriptions of psychological activities.)

I thought that the procrastination in the front would be fine, but I didn't expect that it would still be so long-winded and procrastinating in the back. . . I have only read the first thirty chapters. The heroine is a self-righteous time traveler (who wants to see what you think of this and what about that? I just want to see the plot develop and the characters conflict). The psychological descriptions in blockbuster films are different from other fairy tales.

The content is messy, but the previous setting is quite good. However, I feel that the author is getting more and more messy as he writes, and the progress is super slow. Some psychological activities are written too much, and the whole article feels very draggy. It is recommended to streamline the content, otherwise readers will easily abandon the article. After all, if there is no climax and clear context, it is really difficult to read an article.

The one on Fuyun Island made me want to give up. How many little boys have you saved since you returned to the village? The little boy is raising a harem every day, right? And every time, the protagonist doesn't take the initiative to save people, but they are dragged into the water and passively rescued. It's so annoying to watch! If you write Gongdouwen, it will be absolutely popular, and it will be the same routine. (The so-called passive main line package is being led from the beginning)

The various narrations and foreshadowing of the characters are too long-winded. The content was originally very interesting, but then there were four or five paragraphs of foreshadowing of the characters, which were repeated from the previous article. There are too many adventures of the heroine, and there is no sense of relaxation in the article. I have been using long words to talk about the adventures of the heroine one after another. When I read it, I felt like I was overstuffed and tired. I hope the author can pay attention to the adventures. It's time to let the heroine take a break, and we can take a break too 😂️ The heroine has received many opportunities and many treasures, more than two thousand chapters, but the content of her cultivation is a little pitiful, which gives people a very impetuous feeling. Many of her things are small. The black box is gathering dust and has not been used. Maybe the author did not intend to write the kind of constant cheats, but now the heroine gives people the impression that the heroine has many good things, and the skills and swordsmanship she has obtained do not need to be practiced. Many cheats are thrown one by one, and the cheats only appear in some chapters after the cheats are obtained. I have always liked reading this kind of novel about a female protagonist pursuing immortality, and I have read a lot of it. The author's subject matter is also very attractive to me, but now it feels a bit like a novel about a female protagonist pursuing immortality, and it has fallen into a cliché 😂️.

I watched part of it and it was pretty good in all aspects. The only two shortcomings are: the description of the heroine's psychological activities is too heavy, and after watching it for a long time, you will feel that the heroine is "dumb", which is quite depressing; secondly, there is a slight deviation between the character design and the description. Come on＾0＾~

After reading this novel, I feel that the protagonist actually lacks everything, so he does not need to rely on any external things, nor does he need to fight for anything. In the end, God will take the initiative to give it to the protagonist, so he can not fight, do not force external things, and do nothing.

I have read more than 200 chapters, and I feel that this book has a strong sense of immersion and is more in line with the setting of an ordinary person in society who travels to the world of cultivating immortals. Moreover, the author's three views are correct, and many of the heroine's actions seem quite comfortable. However, the plot was too protracted, and I almost didn't feel the refreshing feeling that the cultivation novel brought me. The heroine did not seriously go to the secret realm to seize treasures, nor did she kill monsters happily. Instead, the contact with people and the description of her heart took up a lot of space. In general, it is the feeling of author = protagonist > reader. Housewife, when will you get up (* ￣ー￣)

I have read about ten chapters, and from the perspective of 20 years of reading experience, I think it is above average. To put it simply, it is eye-catching, but according to the current standard of female videos, it is already very good. It seems that the characters have male protagonists. I don't like nun stories very much, so I hope the author will not write out the male protagonist. The writing style is lacking, and the description is too fragmented. The author knows what the setting is, but just doesn't say it. This is a bit uncomfortable to watch. Although it can be analyzed based on the context, some less important plots are better viewed intuitively, rather than telling half and half hidden from the protagonist's perspective. I don't particularly like the heroine's character. It feels too childish. It's hard to imagine that she is a working woman who has worked enough to afford a house. She is more like a teenage girl. I don't know if it will get better in the future.

It's well written, but there are a lot of typos.

After reading more than 500 chapters, apart from being a little wordy, the storyline is okay. It just feels like the heroine's character is too unconcerned. There were some very important things that everyone could understand better and avoid some accidents by saying them clearly, but she insisted not to say them! This is the case with Zombie City and Floating Cloud Island. It feels like a backlash! If she hadn't hesitated, Lang Yi might not have been injured, and those men wouldn't have been reduced to ashes, right? And those letters, you've been holding them for almost a year, right? When will you give it to people?

It's getting more and more messy and I can't see

It is a story-by-story story about cultivating immortals. I won't mention any typos. This is like watching One Piece. The story is too long, the sentences are flawed, the wording is not rigorous, and it is still in the third person. Except for the protagonist, the fate of everyone else has already been arranged! The description of the protagonist in the book and other comparisons, what the hell, the characterization is not clear, or the author wants to express a different world of Xiuxian, but it is a bit superfluous. It is recommended to go and see more Xiuxian streams!

The heroine is too naive, stupid and white.

I was looking through the comments to see if there were any mentions of male protagonists, and I looked through them all, but there wasn't one. I have just started reading a few chapters. When does the male protagonist appear?

After reading this article, you will have a feeling of hating the iron that cannot be made into steel until it is released. I don't plan to read it later, for fear that I will have a myocardial infarction. The heroine didn't practice well from the beginning, and she relied entirely on the author's golden hand - epiphanies, accidents, and all kinds of accidents. When it's time to argue about something, the heroine's attitude is, "No, I'm not the heroine, I definitely can't do it." It's not that the heroine must fight for something, but that no matter how others treat the heroine, the heroine has an indifferent attitude. In this regard, the heroine may be able to practice Buddhism. Secondly, the heroine pays too much attention to things other than cultivation. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, she might be watching A, but cannon fodder B. The heroine understands the cruelty of cultivating immortality, but she keeps escaping from it. Even after the chapter where the author said that the heroine will grow up, she remains naive and so big-hearted that she relies solely on luck to survive. I don't understand why the heroine's character would lead her to cultivate immortality? Her character should be good at farming. I won't talk about things like the heroine who doesn't dare to do this and can't do that, there are too many. Don't watch it if the protagonist is controlling!

It's been over a thousand chapters, and the protagonist is still a rookie foundation builder.

I've read Chapter 2157. Gu Huai's problem has not been solved yet, and the hero and heroine are not together yet! I just want to watch a romance fairy tale, is it easy for me? I searched a lot but didn't find male protagonists, so I did this one, but the progress was too slow. Can anyone recommend a fairy tale with a male protagonist? Please

Character list Female. 1. Ningxia (Fufeng) Wang Jingxuan (Han Pian) (Yao Yue) Swords: Wuming, Suhua 2. Wang Qingmei 4. Yuan Guifang (Yuhua) (dead) (Wenhui) (Master of Shuixiu Peak) 11. Ning Ru (Shui Xiufeng) Xiao Minghua (Wenhui's disciple) (Huayi) 16. Lin Nuo (brainless female supporting role) 17. Ye Ruorou (Xia's customer) Huang Yu (Ye Ruorou has a grudge) 73. Huang Wanwan (befriended on a mission) ) 95. Ji Yanran (wife of the leader) (died) 131. Qi Weirui (daughter of the elder of Guiyi Sect) 143. Yue Taotao (granddaughter of the lord of Fengming City) 194. Xu Rui (Mrs. Ru) 220. Xi Muqing (fire) Lord) 257. Guo Ni (A Tong) (Chun Yi) (Si Zi) (Death) 369. (Yuan Zhen) (Inherited swordsmanship to Qi) (Death) 376. (Yuan Yun) (The son forcibly married the Taojun daughter) (Heng Wu) (The only daughter was forcibly married by Yuan Yun's son) 377. Chen Meng (Wang's enemy) (Qinghe) (Chen Meng's ancestor) (Appreciating the king) 381. Fang Xuyue (Yuze Ghost Hand) (Qiongyu) 389. He Qian (Bullying He) 391. He Xiao (Wang's stepmother) 395. He Yan (pregnant before marriage) 401. Lin Ling'er (Jiaoman) (disciple of Yuhe) (Tianxing Pavilion) Hongji (sword) 503. Ayi (daughter of Qinlou) (second concubine of the wolf) (death) 607. Li Ziyun (Jiang's lover) (Saint Pulse) (Death) 636. Yanli (Xu's subordinate) 657. Li Ru (Zi's grandmother's deputy) (Death) 691. (Qingzhuo Lianji) (Shengyun Palace) (Death) 699. He Rui (Qi's subordinate) 702. Lu Haiying (Golden Thunder Sect) (Head Disciple) (Death) 804. Cui Ke (Cui's granddaughter) Liu Zhen (Scheming against Cui Ke) (Rebirth) 805. Chunliu (Cui Ke's maid) 824. Hua Fei (Master of Baihua Palace) 837. Zhang He (Xu Mother) 1057. Ming Yaqin (Chunyi) (Junior Sister Wenhui) (Yueluo) (Master Wenhui) Helin (Disciple Wenhui) Huang Ling (Shui Xiufeng) 1077. Xun Jiao (Yunyi) (Disciple Ruifeng) 11 81. (Yulan) (Junior Sister Fenghua) 1189. Chen Lan (Grandson of Yueluo) 1194. (Bing Xin) (Valkyrie) (Bai Yue) (Taoist Couple Qiyun) 1334. Zhu Zhu (Taoist Couple of the Second Elder) 1357. Xu Lei (Yun Mao's wife) (dead) Xu Yi (Leimei) (dead) 1439. Chu Xuan (identity replaced) 1552. (Su Yue) (Tianxing Pavilion) 1558. Wen Yuewei (Xuan Tian Sword Sect) (founder of Wuhua Sect) (dead) 1582. (Charming appearance) (Japanese master) 1626. (Jinghai) (Love beauty) 1642. Lin Shumin (Jade piece stolen) (Rebirth) 1661. Tang Meier (Falled by the devil) (Pearl Lady) 2241. (Ruofu) (Taoist couple Lingxu) 2277. Li Yuhe (sister-in-law) 2286. Zhu Xiuxiang (Yuan Yuan) 2321. (Honglian) (Taoist couple Dongting) (dead) 2467. Ning Xiner (niece Xia Xia) 2522. Han Qiong (Sister Wei) 2535. Wen Ming (Changye) 2558. He Yuran (Sister Xiao Bai) (Dan Yun) 2562. (Jingyue) 2601. Song Yuqiong 2621. (Shi Hua) 2631 .(Qingwu) Male. 22. Gu Huai (Yongyuan) 4. Lin Pingzhen (Qinghui) Sword: Tianhong 7. Shen Yueyang (Longyin Peak) 10. Huang Youwei (Baijifeng) 8. Chen Siye 22 .(Ling Xu) Gu Yulin (Gu Yuhua's younger brother) Gu Yuhua (A Huai's cousin) 26. (Ting He) (Wuhua Sect) 35. Ning Zhizhong (father) 43. Hua Wuxie (son of the Lord of Baihua Palace) (Langya) (Qiongtian) 48. Jin Lin (Xian Yun) Lin Rong (Ming Jing) Sword: (Yidian) 53. He Haigong (Changsong) 71. (Yanyang) (Master Qin) 79. Huang Hua (Brother Huang Wanwan) 97. He Jiang (Wang Licking the dog) (Killing) 100. Xuanling) Wang Xiangwen (disciple of Xuanling) (Pingyang) (death) (Yanyang) (younger brother of the headmaster) 130. (Sanskrit) (Shangshui Temple) Qi Guang (Wenxiu) (Guiyi) (Qi's father) 131. Shi Haisheng (Master Qi Xin) ) (Zhaohai) Changping (Love Qi) 133. Jiang Zheng (Tianxing Pavilion) (dead) (Dongting) (Uncle Jiang) 144. Guo Li (covered with forgiveness green) 147. Yuelu (Lord of Fengming City) 148. Yu Zhen East (Shangshui Temple) (Yihe City) (Xiang'er) 150. Wujin (Yu Shuishun) 161. Xie Shi (Yuan Chen) 169. (Lingche) (A Shifu) 170. Liu Wangshu (New Star of Five Flower Alchemy) 172. Yao Chengsi (Tianjian Sect) (Dongli) Yang Xiuran (Tianxing Pavilion) (Heavenly Tribulation Lianlianfu) (Shoujue) 180. (Hejing) (Second seat in the Garden of Beasts) 192. (Huayao) (Lingxu disciple) Gu Jiansheng (Yongyuan's father) (dead) 198. Xi Yun (third uncle) (tough-tongued and arrogant) 201. Xi Yuan/Zhen (Aweng) Xi Yong (father) 202. Lu Yu (the one looking for trouble) 205. Zhang Ying (arrogant and arrogant) Liu Junming (cold and cold) Yan Qing (Yan Wu) 211. Lu Wei (Brother Lu) 214. Xi Rui (Second Uncle) Yuan Donglai (child of the original family) 216. Lu Yuehua (self-interested person) (death) 218. Lu Qi (doting on concubines and destroying his wife) 23 5. Xi Zhao (younger brother) 246. Tong Ning (One of the Behind the Scenes of the Living Dead) (Dead) Qin Ming (One of the Behind the Scenes of the Living Dead) (Jinyang Sect) (Dead) 283. A Ming (The Living Dead) (Patrol) (Dead) 303. Fang Zhuo (Rebellion Leader) (Dead) 304. He Ming (Tianji Pavilion) (death) 309. Li Jiaotu (Zhaoer) (Gongzige) (death) Zheng Jie (venomous tongue) (Qingyumen) (death) 319. Feng Ye (Long's former subordinate) (death) Long Sheng (the biggest villain of the living dead) (Long) ( Death) 344. (Tongping) (Master Qin Ming) (Array) 345. Cheng Bao (disciple of Tongping) 359. Shen Dezong (Xueyang) (Dragon Slayer) (Queen's Palace) 376. (Jingyuan) (Only one male descendant) (Miao) Fate) (children and grandchildren were expelled from the clan) 20180301 381. Fang Xuri (Jade Lady) (Tongyunmen) 385. Ning Dengrong (brother) (Sledgehammer) 389. Wang He (Wang Jiazi) (No righteousness) (changed to Wang Chang) 401. Zhou Ji (Senior Brother Lin Ling'er) 402. (Yu He) (Master Lin Ling'er) 404. Lin Geng (Zhen Ge's father) Lin Cong (Lin's father's brother) 406. (Ling Che) (Xie's father) 420. Chong Huan (Fu) Sword of the Wind) (Death) 424. Jiuyang (Human Trafficker) 425. Jiang Hualang (Wolf Five) (Qingyuan) Sword: Chaowen 426. Prince Xu (Trading Sword Slaves) (Death) 430. Qu Linfen (Qu Zunzhang) 432. Li Qiongyu (Fufeng went to the city to get acquainted) 439. Fang Qi (the brother who was looking for trouble) 443. Tang Wen'an (taunted A Shi) (died) Xu Liang (senior brother Tang) 448. Zhao Xue (sold tickets to Fufeng) 458. Jiang Xuan (Brother of Hunzai) Jiang Heng (Father of Jiang) Jiang Ze (Hunzai) (Utilizing the Holy Vein) (Death) 463. Li Que (Falling in Love with His Sword) (Death) 467. Bo Wuji (Meeting A Shi) (On the Famous Sword List) 468. Zhao Ting (Brother Zhao) 470. Wang A Hu (Guardian of Si Wuxing) A Ming (Sober Man) 476. Wu Chang (Master and Servant of Si Wuxing) (Dead) 477. Shining (Host) 493. Li Xie (sb) (Conceited) 499. Zhai Xiao (Lang Yi) (Wan Hong) (He Heng) (Wolf 2) 504. Jiang Dongliu (villain of Fuyun Island) (dead) 509. A Ling (drunk and got into trouble) 518. Wan Ziming (kidnapping Fufeng) (Qianmian) (dead) 551. Wu You (ancestral of the Wu family) (dead) 556. Qinling (left after the Qin family was destroyed) 561. Luo Yan (teaches referees) 563. (Cheng Hui) (loves to support younger generations) 577. Fan Qi (fights with Xu) 579. Li Yuantao (Mingyi) (Xu's master) 580. He Ming (mistakenly the person who killed Fang Rang) Fang Rang (Fang Er) 582. Wu Qisheng (top four in the competition) Li Wenyu 590. Dong Pu (four confidants of the Wolf) 624. Han Pugeng (transformation of gods) (known to Hong Ji) 628. Fengyun (sword) (the cause of the disaster on Fuyun Island) 637. Shi Yuanchong (youlongmen) 642. (Mingdu) (Master Xu) 646. Mudi (Head of Huyang) (Taihe) 651. Xie Lihua (Second Brother Shi) 665. Xu Pei (Long Yinfeng) (Committed a crime) 694. (Yinwu) (Growing Demon Seeds) 695. Tang Lei (Seven Star Sect) (Lin's Friend) 728. (Mingyuan) (One of the Dealing with Demon Species) (Yanzhou) 729. Lou Shangxian (Jinleimen) 732. (Plain) (Bewitched) (Huyang Palm Punishment) (Death) 753. Zhu Zhaofeng (Yunguangfeng Handyman) 768. Xu Qingzhou (Gu's Friend) 772. (Ruizhong) (betrayed by his apprentice) (Heng Yue) 775. (Wantong) (Master Ruizhong) 779. Erwa (Baicao) (Master Wang) 792. (Du An) (Master Shen) 794. Shen Yihe (Father Shen) (Yunxi) 797. Cui Ying (Chongri) 821. Baizhu (Yuanzong) (old lover of Baihua Palace) Suilan (subordinate of Yuanzong) 823. Lian Wuhu (little madman) 841. Guilun (Queen's Palace) (build a business empire) 842. Guihua (Brother Lun) 8 49. (Tongguang) (Disciple of Xuanyang) 850. Kong Jinyu (Medical Cultivator) (Disciple of Xuanyang) (Linyue) (Guiyi) 853. (Zhong Feng) (Harm Jin) 854. Yang Kai (Disciple of Xuanyang) (Qingfeng) Sword: Qingsu 855. Wu Tongyi (Traitor) Fine) (death) Liao Qiang (spy) (death) 864. Guo Afang (discussing Fufeng and Yuanheng) Yuenan (Nanji) (not dealing with Chongyang) 865. Cui Zhan (son of Chongri) 870. Xu Tu (grandson participated in the formation competition) 874. Yin Zhu ( Interfering with Fufeng) 876. Yang Li (Friends with Pang Zhu) (Tianxing Pavilion) Pang Zhu (Guiyi) (Minhe) 884. Yu Tao (Participant in the Formation Competition) Shi Wuya (Shangshui Temple) 886. (Shou Shan) 887. Lu Hailou (Third A in the Formation Competition) 905. Lin Haoxuan (host of the auction) 912. (Yunhai) (contacted with Gu Dan) 913. (Chengping) 916. (Wuhe) (hostile to Yuan Heng) 918. Lin Qingze (host of the auction) 927. Zhang Er (survivor) >934. Zhao Yeyun (questioned Yuan Heng) (Feiran Sect) 935. Gan Ping 936. (Wanning) (Gan's father) 944. Sun Ying (Shengxu) (Youquanmen) 945. (Yue Tao) 949. Xiao Guiping (disciple of the head) (traitor) 98 7. (Tu Kong) (Master Yuan Heng) 990. Zhu Ting (disciple of the head) 1003. Fang Ting (outer disciple) 1011. Li Jue (fight with Fufeng) (Second Two) 1023. Li Dong (ancestor of the Li family) 1024. Fan Ju (fought Fufeng in the sect competition) ) 1033. (Ming'an) (Peak of Swordsmanship) 1041. Shi Shaoyi (Watching the Opera) 1046. (Yunding) (Yujianfeng) 1062. Hu De (Senior Brother Yuanchen) 1070. Jinping (Jinlei Sect) (Yuehua) (Jinlei Sect) (Wuhua) (Junior Brother Yuehua) (Yishui) (Junior Brother Yuehua) 1080. (Ruifeng) (Master Xun Jiao) 1086. Xin Zhaolei (Fan Ju) Junior Brother) 1095. Zhong Xin (Personal Biography) 1099. Wan Rui (Ming Jing's Friend) (Bai Qing) 1106. Dong Zijian (Ming Jing's Inner Demon) 1124. Zhang Gui (former shopkeeper of Jianzhen Pavilion) 1133. Liang Luo (one of the five lost memories in the Five Virtues Picture) 1141. Yifeng (Hundred Flowers Palace) 114 5. Guo Yurong (Longyin Peak) (Ruyue) 1172. (Songshan) (Don't deal with Yuanheng) (Qianguang) (Baijifeng) 1173. Linsheng (Longyin Peak) ) 1175. (Apprentice) (Master Yuanheng) 1181. (Fenghua) (former head of Wuhua) 1194. (Tiancong) (Zhongzhengfu) (Izumi) (Refining) (Yunzhen) (Wide friends) (Qixuan) (In-depth and simple) 1197. Meng Fan (making red caltrop rope) 1206. Chapter Wudesheng (the fifth son's child) Bai Ye (the fifth son's external hire) 1213. (Ishihara) (Zhongzhengfu) The fifth son (Chongzi) (Xiaozi) (dead) 1219. The fifth son's attendant) 1245. Ye Bao (rescued Yuan Heng) 1249. Tang Bin (crossed the sea in thirty years) Chen Ying (Tang Bin) Friends) 1257. Zheng Bo (Leader of the Alliance) 1263. The Fifth Hero (Yun Mao) (Chong Zifu) (Dead) 1277. The Fifth Changzhi (Introducing People into the Forbidden Land ) 1285. Fifth Changfeng (subordinate of the fifth son) 1291. Fifth Purple (Lingtai) (living dead) (dead) 1295. Fifth Jin (youngest son of Yun Maoshu) ) (Crazy) 1316. Fifth Ping (provocative person hair small) Fifth Ming (provocative person) (Fu Yang) (Mingfu) 1320. Fifth Yunfeng (Yun Maosun) (Jinzi) 1322. (Yihe) 1328. Fifth Qingping (Purple Deputy) (Yunqing) 1332. Yan Yue He Yi Shi Yi (Presbyterian Church) (Dead) 1347. Zhang Jun (Childhood Friend of the Dead Soldier) Wu Yan (Dead Soldier) (Dead) 1371. Xu Yue (Brother Lei) 13 97. The fifth elephant (grandson next to the main vein) The fifth source (grandfather of the elephant) 1409. Fang Yuede (helped Desheng to escape) 1423. (Wanquan) 1 438. Gongsun Yu (talkative) 1439. Chu Kai (identity replaced) Chu Zhuang (head of the Chu family) 1440. Chu Xiong (illegitimate son) Chu Feng ( Xiongfu) 1447. Yin Yayan Zong Quan 1451. Ming Mo (苋) (medical repair) 1467. Shangguan Bo (Wuyan) (Queen's Palace) 1468. Shangguan Yi (Bo's grandfather) A Sui (Bo's uncle) 1470. Shangguan Yi (Bo's uncle) 1471. Shangguan Yu (Bo's cousin) 1 473. Shangguan Yu (bo father) 1475. Cai Ye (second son) 1477. Cai Yan (brother) 1478. Cai Yi (senior brother Yan) (Changping) 1481. Cai Kang (grandfather of Yan) (Shuiyu) 1487. Wu Wenbin (disciple of Yanyang) 1490. Cai He 1506. (Chengming) (Wolf 3) 1507. Mi Yun (practicing alchemy) 1512. Che Bailu 1520. Lu Yu (accidented by the Nebula Stone) (death) 1522. Yue Ruzheng ( Enmity with Wolf Five) (Jingjiang) Yue Ruzhi (Zhengdi) (Chang Ning) 1529. Li Chuan (keeper of Feng Lai Pavilion) (Cui Wei) Old road number (Yongjia) 1536. Gu Ye 1537. Ma Jiantang (former confidant of Lingxu) 1552. (Jingneng) (Shangshui Temple) 1558. Li Zhi (founder of Wuhua Sect) 1559. (Moyuan) (Founder of Moyuan City) (Not ascended) 1565. (Miao Zhen) (Greedy Wolf Mace) 1571. (Qin Yun) (Wanxiang Sect) 1572. Wu Ziying (Wanxiang Sect) (Heyi) (Wu Relative) 1577. (Heyan) (Greed Wolf Mace) 1600. (Chiyan) 1615. (Wende) (grandfather) 1631. Ge Jun 1637. Liu Zhibao (Xiaoji) Liu Zhizhi (Brother Bao) 1643. (Linruo) (madman) 1661. Tang Tan (death) (Yuting Sect) 1695. Brother Dao (keeper of Yemingcheng) 1714. (Yuluo) 1715. Xiao Bai (Elder Brother Tang) (Hepu) 1730. (Bai Hui) (Principal of Yeming City) (Kunshan) (Second Leader of Yeming City) 1763 .(Yushan)(Master Tang) 1775. Jin Mingyue (Xuanji Palace) 1799.(Wuke)(Lianhuo Sect) 1812. Yucheng (Jin's cousin) 1823. Lanshan (Qi Ling) 1839. Shen Tong (Wanlan Baozong) (Zefeng) 1840. Yin Changyun (cannot stand Shen) (Bailing Sect) 1 841. Situ He (Senior Brother Yin) 1847. Jiang Yan (bt) (Holy Son of the Blood Moon) (Wangyue Pavilion) 1854. (Changping) (Changzhou) (Tanlang Mace) 1858. Bai Yu (Wangyue Pavilion) 1874. Mingxing (Huyang Sect) Lingxing 1875. (Xueyi) (Xuelumen) 1881. (Chang Hui) (Shangshui Temple) 1920. Liang Huan (disciple of Lingche) 1943. Ayou 1950. (Wenchang) (Master of Jixia League)

I really enjoyed reading this article, but it felt too draggy and wordy. The heroine is still a little timid and confused! It's been over a thousand chapters and it feels like the heroine still hasn't grown up. If the article is so procrastinated, it won't be finished later! Work hard💪 I hope the progress will be faster, it really feels too long-winded and a bit watery.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too watery. After describing one thing from the front and describing it from the side, you have to describe it in circles again after a while. The plot advances very slowly. Could the author use some caution? What the readers want to read is not just the things that are said over and over again!

It's so long-winded, there's too much foreshadowing from the third perspective, and some scenes require multiple chapters. The heroine is a book traveler, she was 20 or 30 years old before she traveled through time, and she knows she has traveled to the world of cultivation. My mental receptivity is still so poor. Whenever something happens, I think about my past life, and always compare the 21st century with the world of immortality. The heroine has not just traveled through time, but has been there for several years. She still can't integrate in even though she knows the plot! I don't expect the heroine to have a big gold finger, but she is too weak. She has nothing but empty cultivation. It is too unreasonable. Please take a break!

Not bad. Although she always complains in the chapters, the heroine is improving step by step, so continue to pay attention.

It's the cute Ningxia. The headband is made of Gu Huai's CP headband and she is dressed because the heroine is from the northwest border after all. Her clothes are definitely not as gorgeous as those from Middle-earth. Her posture is just like that of a couple

To be honest, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that it has too many useless words.

Why is the heroine so holy? The blood of the demon fox was so valuable, so she felt embarrassed to exchange it for some tattered things, but to be given as a favor. It's better to sell it directly to a big store in exchange for spiritual stones. Does the heroine feel that she does not lack training resources? And the heroine has reached the seventh level of Qi training. Even if you are a novice, you can decide whether to sell it and how much you want to sell it for after understanding the value of the item. Although the heroine is eight years old now, her soul is an adult. And she's still a white-collar worker. How did she stay at her job for so long? I feel like a stupid person with no scheming ideas! Author, for the first eighty or so chapters, I feel that the heroine is not a white-collar worker who has been hanging out in shopping malls for decades, but a little girl who has not yet left school! Not like adults. The ability to accept is too weak. The slightest disturbance can scare him into hiding in a small black box. And the response to trouble seems to be too slow. Haochao also has an adult with a soul of several decades, who is so frightened by everything he encounters. Do you think such people still want to practice immortality? She doesn't want to become an immortal anymore. It's better in the secular world. There's no danger at all, so why should she become an immortal? He is not active in cultivation, but he upgrades quickly. Not to mention understanding the common sense of the world of immortality. Even if you set up a shabby stall, you don't know how much the price will be, and you let people watch and exchange things. Is she really an adult? I'm afraid the children in today's kindergarten won't be so scheming, right? I suspect the heroine is from outer space. I feel like the first eighty chapters contain less about practice and more about gossip. It seems that this is a gossipy article. Author, if you are not sure, you can not write about the soul of an adult. You can write that the heroine is a newcomer who is still in school and has not graduated from college.