The Most Powerful Brain in the Universe

It was indeed a bit slow and even long-winded at the beginning, but since the initial explanation was completed and the game started and I met my friends, it became more and more interesting: D I even recommend starting to read it directly from Chapter 96, skipping the most criticized beginning and fast forwarding to the middle of the school training (military training) Or I recommend starting to read it from Chapter 52! ! It just so happens that some more important characters will appear one after another~ It also initially shows the heroine's talent and some worldview background. This is fast forwarding to the mecha charity class before the start of school If you think it is interesting and can continue to watch, it is not too late to go back and make up the plot [[I will put a summary of the previous plot in the comment area. The more important part should be that I didn't miss too much, because it would be a pity to be dismissed at the beginning~! Sometimes it can be said that the details are appropriate. A certain small-scale melee in the game was directly mentioned, as well as a certain large-span time jump, and there are many more that I will not go into details. The author does explain a lot in some details, but as long as you get used to it, this kind of explanation can be completed to a certain extent. The world view of Shanshan is like a real interstellar one, and I can see that the author has good intentions (some interstellar novels are completely made up of ancient and modern sayings, and they don't even bother to edit the setting) Someone in the book review section somewhere said that this book is "well written, the language is not gorgeous, but it is comfortable to read." I started to pay attention after seeing it, and I feel that it is right (๑＞ڡ＜)☆ As for my favorite characters, all the friends are very good~ The author's group portrait is very good! Sometimes a few words can initially establish a character The protagonist Jiang Hui, who was confused about the unfamiliar world at the beginning and even acted a bit silly, gradually grew into a reassuring and reliable person. You can be free when fighting alone, but you will take basic responsibilities when you need to take into account the overall situation. You are polite and kind, but you can defend yourself and show your edge at the right time, and will not abandon your companions. In short, I feel that you have a very charming personality~ Some people may think, "If your companions are holding you back, shouldn't they be thrown away? Isn't that the Holy Virgin?", I can only say that this is difficult to comment on. . The characters that appear in this article are basically not too stupid. The classmates around me are pretty good, and the five-person group of friends is even more exciting in their own way. In short, there is no such kind of witty scene, so feel free to read it Also, it is mainly about the heroine alone, and her friends also have their own lives, and they will not stay together all the time every minute! ! The fact that several of them are still close friends has not changed The author's foreshadowing can really be buried for a long time. To be precise, it may not be considered foreshadowing? What mechanical racks, clubs, some characters can actually appear again after a long time The heroine may have forgotten it, but I am still waiting for the small square key I picked up at the second-hand market... The last two books I think are good-looking, Interstellar The novel at the beginning took eight years to finish, and another six years to finish. I don't know how long this one will take Hey, it's really hard to find a book I like now, and I haven't written such a long review for a long time. Come on, author, please don't let it be a eunuch or a bad ending<(ToT)>

Poor writing style

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The subject matter and setting are interesting, but there is too much foreshadowing in the front, which makes the heroine seem to have been reduced to intelligence. She has no basic judgment and observation skills. It is very speechless. Moreover, because there is too much foreshadowing, it is too cumbersome at the beginning and makes me tired to read. I really like the military academy, and few mecha ones can resist it and give up. Sometimes it is really not as detailed as it is on purpose. Sometimes I feel that the heroine is obviously normal and she suddenly becomes intellectually obliterated, which makes me feel tired.

I read more than a dozen chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. It was full of nonsense, and there were too many descriptions in my mind. There was only one content: the heroine traveled back to the body of the dead original owner, went to the hospital to rescue her, and got medicine on the way. Just these ten chapters. Then I also wrote about the heroine who was surprised by the technology of the interstellar era. I don't know if I missed ten lines at a glance, or it was something else, but the original protagonist remembered it and was still surprised and frightened by the interstellar life. Have the comments been deleted? It's such a huge criticism and it didn't bother me at all. I went in and watched it for a long time.

To all readers, little angels, Wenwen is really slow to pick up, and I'm sorry for making everyone read it in a hurry. But I learned a lesson after writing the previous book for a long time. The main plot and context of the early foreshadowing must be clear, otherwise the bones in the back will not be able to hold up the skin and flesh. I wrote it in vain because there are some boring settings in the front. If there are any little angels who are willing to follow me, I'd really like to thank you. I'm also very grateful to everyone for your tolerance. Haha, if you can't follow me and give up, you can come back and take a look when I get fatter. My articles are quite long. First of all, the author debugs it himself. This is a slow-burning, slow-burning story, and it has a CP. Well... It's probably a background CP. No matter what, thank you all for your support (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

As far as the current progress is concerned, there are very few outstanding female characters. They are all female protagonists who are killing people randomly. Even if they are from a military academy background, the male-to-female ratio is too outrageous, right? After all, it's interstellar literature.

Come on, I want to see the mecha, we want to kill indiscriminately! ! ! (｀･ω･´)ﾉ

I hope there will be more excellent female characters, but now it seems that except for the heroine, all the people around her are men.

Release notification: It will be available at around 0:00 this morning. I posted a comment about the release of the work. Hahaha, if you are interested, you can go and see it, otherwise you will have to wait for the update tonight. Thank you all for your support (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

It's too long-winded. I've read Chapter 34 and haven't gotten to the point yet, so I slipped away.

The author has written so many details. He has even neglected the story. The novel focuses on the plot. Why are you so detailed in the details?

Why is the heroine's character so strange? Don't be awkward. And every time when there is a problem and I want to give up, I say that I am just a liberal arts student. Help, what happened to liberal arts students? I still quite like this setting, but the heroine's character is too uncomfortable. It feels like she's just trying to put on a bad show. I was almost embarrassed to death by her.

It's too watery. You can't do this if you want to make money.

The article is pretty good and has kept me going until now. However, there are some issues that the author could consider correcting. (I'm just talking about my opinion, you don't have to listen to me, just go with your own ideas😅) But I feel like the biggest problem is that it's too procrastinating. I've written several chapters about each relic and haven't gotten to the point yet. There is also the content of the previous competition, which is only one day's content. There are too many elements in the result and I have to jump through it. And if you just look at the ending, you can roughly guess what happened in the middle. There should be no need to write so much content. My personal suggestion is to streamline the content. If possible, check for errors and omissions when it is just updated. There is no need to rush to publish. Another point is that I always feel that a lot of the content is a little off-topic and has no connections. It may also be that it has not been connected in series at the end. It is mainly for the three rounds of competition at the beginning of the school year. The mecha master is written too little and is very general. It gives people the impression that the golden finger of the protagonist is of no great use and is just a place for resting mentally. After all, it's not clear what the author's theme is, whether it's the host armor, the host armor master, or the all-powerful one. No matter what it is, this aspect is brushed aside. For example, I took the command notes and then disappeared. Although I know that the protagonist must have read it during this period, the reader has no feeling at all. It is recommended that Goldfinger should write more, and it is better to fight crazily in the middle and later stages.       ，，，，，

It's okay, because the author writes a long novel, so there is more foreshadowing in the beginning, and then the plot slowly enters, I hope there will be more side descriptions. I don't know if there will be competitions between various schools in the future, I really want to see the heroine's heroic appearance on the field! Expect! (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

Please tell me who can persist, what exactly the protagonist is going to do in the end, and in which chapter! I'll come back then. I feel like the novel is geared toward armor-making, but it's over 150 chapters in and there's not even a clue. It just depends on whether there's something wrong with the protagonist's brain. Check this way, check that way. If you have any doubts, tell me! You have doubts every time and are so afraid of death. Aren't you afraid that the thing in your head is a system?

The first chapter is just Luo Li, give it up.

There is really a lot of nonsense in the front. I can tell that the author is trying to make the background richer, but it is really not good in terms of perception. After chapter 20, I feel that the rhythm will be better, which is more suitable for listening to the book, because reading a long paragraph is really tiring. And since the male protagonist is already in the background, it's better not to use it. It's a bit of a failure. There is really no need to write a story about a strong female character. He can be a strong partner. The cp feels redundant. There is no man in my heart to draw the sword, God of nature

I got it from QQ Reading, and I really feel sorry for the author. Many people who posted just said that the author's writing is verbose, but for me, I really like this kind of detailed description. The author only has two articles, the one about cultivating immortals and the one about interstellar. I really like them both and read them both, but it is really difficult to read them as they change. After all, the author's articles are delicate and the plot does not progress quickly. It is more suitable to read the whole book and the completed one. I always thought that the author had a lot of book fans. After all, when there were many posts in the past, everyone had lively discussions. But after there were fewer updates, I stopped reading. It was just to keep up the writing. I understand that the author is currently in a state of interruption. After all, the pressure of the two articles is really great. But I want to wait for you to come back. The author went to Qidian one day and saw my post. Can you reply? Just reply with a smile.

I definitely won't wait half a year to update it.

Hmm... It's a little awkward. Huan Xian's halo is written to be much stronger than that of the heroine, right...?