The Unbelievable Saint

There is definitely a level above immortality. If there is no live broadcast, I will eat maggots.

Is the language so casual? The pace is a little slow, I hope it can be improved... Come on

I have written so many chapters, but I still don't want to practice. I am still wandering around in a small corner, and the pace is a bit slow.

The plot is novel and attractive, it's really amazing~

What can I say about the rhythm? I always feel that the main storyline is too slow.

I like reading books of this type, and this one is the most unique and very good. Can the author advance the plot faster?

In a gay group, Jiang Nan appeared unknowingly. Everyone looked at his jumping dog head and joked: Is Jiang Nan a eunuch today? Jiang Nan touched his hair and shouted: The eunuch is not far away (everyone laughed) The gay dog ​​in the group was handsome and talked nicely. I became addicted to it without knowing it. I felt like I was dressing up as a woman again.

With all due respect, the author needs to make something more exciting, that is, the so-called pleasure brought by the ups and downs, rather than simply telling the plot in a flat and straightforward way 😏 So, you know

The middle number 2, this 6, is 0, which is 9. The 0 of 7 is connected to 8 group 9.

I hope it will be put on the shelves soon. Please have some money for milk powder.

The writing is very fluent and the plot is touching. It is definitely the work of a master with the greatest potential!

Yuntai Pavilion Kujian is here for a visit!

The autumn wind in Yuntai, watching the new pit of the great god.

To be honest, I refuse to read 29 chapters in one go, at least after reading it. Because I found that this book has a poisonous point, that is, the style of classical Chinese is too heavy. Of course, this is also its unique feature. I'm not saying that this style is bad, but the pattern in these 29 chapters is not open, it is refreshing and not dense. As the core of the male protagonist's design, the somewhat naive and polarizing way of dealing with things that seems to be caused by reading too many online articles during his lifetime was brought up in Chapter 2 or Chapter 3, but it is not like this later, but is somewhat benevolent. If I had to choose now, I would definitely watch it slowly, but at the time I had this kind of prediction. After reading 29 chapters in one go, I felt groggy. I don't know whether it was the poison of this book that confused me, or whether I had been in this world for a long time. Of course, it would be too much for me to say just that. There are still things worth reading in this book, and even the advantages are much higher than the shortcomings. Although the writing style is a bit pretentious, it is really written with care and is not watery. It would be better if there was a little more psychological activity. I don't know if the classical Chinese text is a plus or a minus. Although it feels abrupt to me, the difference in style is still great and can be considered an advantage. After all, this way the sense of immersion will be slightly stronger. In terms of plot, I have always been very tolerant. Let alone the system flow, it is at least considered a passing grade, and bonus points are calculated separately. The plot is not bad. It may be silly for me to say this when the story has not yet unfolded, but if I have to say that there are flaws in the plot, forget it. I won't use harsh words. All in all, it is worth reading and has been added to the book list, but my poor recommendation vote does not have this seat. If I have extra votes, I will vote every day. It is really not that I don't want to support new books, but that I don't have enough votes. Do you understand? Just a little chase like this, quietly watching what this little sprout will grow into. (The author is a eunuch dressed as a woman)