Fangcun Lingtai Mountain

I gave up the frustration of reading and built the foundation for dozens of chapters, but it didn't get that slow. All the good things were taken up by pig's feet, but I couldn't build the foundation. There are so many resources. If nothing happens, you will be injured, and if nothing happens, the rhythm will be slowed down. That's enough. What do you think everyone is looking at? Isn't it just to see what bloodline you have? Foundation building effect? It also whets the appetite for dozens of chapters. 6666666666

Now I am looking at Chapter 140. The protagonist has built his foundation and used spiritual weapons. Well, when fighting, he still throws spiritual weapons and talismans. There are no formations, no spells, and no magical powers. Qiao Feng from Tianlongbabu can also rub the golden dragon with his hands. None of these immortal cultivators can use magic to fight. What a snack. This author, you are really It is not suitable to write about immortal heroes. People keep spiritual pets for fighting. Except for a few paragraphs about setting puppets in this novel, no one ever lets spiritual pets go to fight against enemies. The protagonist raises a dragon-blooded snake to build his foundation, but it can't beat the wolf pack that trains Qi. Can you lower the level of immortal heroes like this? The writing is not like it at all.

The protagonist is so weak. There is really no hope in doing things with this kind of mentality.

Good-looking five words, I will only say them once, come on, come on, come on...

Poorly written. . . . . .

Slow-burning writing is the most interesting

When I saw the protagonist's pet being taken away, I really couldn't complain. I just wanted to say, "What the hell is this?"

Why would you recommend this book to me? I haven't read it yet.

I suggest the author Shui Shui Long Kong, otherwise your slowness is too much.

To be honest, I am not opposed to slow reading. This book is my favorite genre, but this book gave me a very bad feeling. First, it lacks logic in many places. Second, the structure is not rigorous. Third, the thinking is immature. Well

Dear friends, please help the author collect water spells and magical powers. I hope kind readers will leave a message.

Rubbish little S, another time traveling hanging wire

Author's Account: Regarding readers' comments, I know that the more I write, the worse I get, so I am not going to make excuses by saying a few points here. 1: I have written tens of thousands of words of novels before, but I have not signed a contract. This is my second novel, and I signed it as soon as I wrote it. I suddenly felt that I had the hope of becoming a god in one book, and I kept writing it with high morale, but after writing it, I became a ghost in one book! Two: This is my shortcoming. My writing is not good, I cannot describe a scene very well, I don't grasp the details well, I feel like there are some things I want to explain, but I don't. Three: I only wrote an outline for this book, not many details. At first, my friend and I were so angry that we didn't sign the contract, so we thought of another story. I wrote a rough idea and wanted to try it. I didn't expect that I signed the contract later, so I was a little happy. But according to the current outline, some of the plots are ridiculous, because they were thought up at the time. Four: I originally wanted to write well, slowly, and tell the story as well as possible. I didn't want to write too much and talk too much. Sometimes my memory is not good, and I forget some settings. I only remembered it after reading the outline after writing. Also, I lack imagination, some plots and plots are not well described, and the readers are very ignorant. So I am improving my writing skills and hope that I can express myself better in the future. Thank you for reading my book. This book can be praised or criticized, but please don't be stupid.

What the hell is Fangcun Lingtai Mountain? Isn't it Lingtai Fangcun Mountain?