Transform All Heavens and Return to One Sword

Brother, stop writing about Ascension. If you want to write it, not many people will read it. It's not that your writing is not good, but that the direction of your writing is wrong. Your writing style and design are like a fantasy novel wearing the skin of a fairy. There is a fairy system, but there is no fairy tale. Various elements, and the title of your book is like fantasy. In addition, many great writers are opening new books now. If you don't write some excellent novels, it will be difficult to get ahead. The right time, place and people are right, and you only take advantage of people and people. I think you still have to think about it, brother.

I practice physical boxing a hundred times an hour. This is the first time I have heard of this training method, but it is deeply inspiring. Recently, I have used this method to practice the twenty-four postures of Tai Chi, and I can feel the wind coming from a tiger, and the momentum is like flying. After practicing, my whole body is warm, and my spirit is complete and my energy is full. Perhaps this is the true meaning of Tai Chi. This is how anxious people practice.

I finally understand why the author is so disappointed. There is no clear protagonist in the first chapter. It makes people have no idea what he is talking about. There is no fixed character to catch the reader's attention and ideas. This seems very baffling. It feels like there are suddenly a lot of strangers that you don't know at all, doing unknown things in unknown places and saying unknown words.

I have read Chapter 36. Those who are familiar with Jin Yong will definitely have nothing to say about the writing and language. In terms of plot, it would be better to have more passion and open up the scenes.

Not many people would be willing to read a book in which the protagonist is caught by the enemy every three days. Many of the protagonist's behaviors are not a big problem for ordinary people in daily life. As the protagonist of Xianxia, ​​he is like an SX.

Why is the Three Golden Chapters not attractive? I watched it for a long time and didn't understand it. At least introduce the protagonist. There is no introduction to the protagonist in the third golden chapter. After reading it for a long time, I didn't even know who the protagonist was. Not very attractive?

Good guy, he made so many comments by himself

Waste plus beauty =? What is wasted can no longer be wasted.

I just read this book and I feel it is very well written. I support it with two monthly votes. I don't know why my grades are so bad. It feels like it really shouldn't be the case!

One chapter of the main text has not been read. I only read the article expressing condolences to Hero Cha. It deserves support.

Falling Stone is a bit buggy. The falling stones should be real objects. This is already a method almost like creation from the void, and monks in the forging stage can use this spell.

So far I have read more than 400 chapters of secret realms and ancient caves. I have obtained countless treasures. In the end, most of them are for fellow sects, or just for the sect. There are almost no uses for myself.

Chapter 700 is about letting go. The protagonist's strength is unclear. When he meets someone who is one level higher than himself, he doesn't even have the courage to look at him. He doesn't have to fight anymore. The protagonist has advanced to the calamity stage and has been overthrown by the author for more than a hundred chapters. Moreover, the setting of the calamity stage in this novel is still an ant. It is known that the realm behind the calamity in this book includes Yuan Dan, He Dao, Yun Shen, and Ascension.

There seems to be a few places in Chapter 3 where "Master Yun" is mistaken for "Master Second" Also, I don't know if the author has read this chapter or not.

This book was quite good at first, but after reading hundreds of chapters, the development and plot were repeated and there were many flaws But the author's writing skills were still good The protagonist's detoxification formula at the beginning was too nonsensical, not exciting, and inconsistent with our general concept, because those who use poison are basically bad people, right? The second Lingyun Sect arrived at Haitianmen. I felt like I was transferred from the gutter to the pond. I was still very aggrieved. I still looked down on me. What's the point of joining it like this? When I encountered trouble, the sect was still not tough. In fact, I was still a lone ranger. Level, it is said to be the foundation of a large sect, so what is the role of opening the hang? The fourth one, the protagonist actually opened the immortal hang at the basic stage of Dao, but even with such great magical power, he still cannot fight beyond the level. I think there are 72 changes later, and the result is still Dao basic. What kind of skills are used in other so-called big sects in the basic stage of Dao? And the results are so poor, I hope the author will consider re-opening a new book

Personally, I think your first three chapters are too depressing and not suitable for the market. Chapter 4 directly dissuaded 90% of the readers. It won neither the favor of the rich nor the support of the general public. There is something wrong with the setting at the beginning, but no matter how good it is later, it will be in vain.

The writing of "Cultivation to Immortality" is so bad. After I started, I still followed the martial arts style of traveling around and doing justice.

The content is exciting and can be collected. It is worth reading!

Good book. Monthly ticket support. Fine wine is in the alley, I hope more people know about it.

This completes the book 😥😥😥

No matter how big a clone is, you are still in this realm. Why are you still a protector of the same realm?

In the later stages of the book, there were contradictions. There were many things that many people didn't know about, but it turned out that anyone who met them knew about them.

Excellent novel. It's a pity that not many people know about it.

I voted for it a few times, it's a good book. Now some great gods, Tiantianshui

Are you considering writing a new book? I've read some of this book before and now I can't pick it up.

I've been really busy lately, and I guess I'll be like this this month, and I won't be able to get over it until June. Feel sorry.

This book explains that in the later period, it was okay to get the number of names wrong, but since the men and women were also wrong,

Does any fellow Taoist know: Has the protagonist eaten the second magic fairy fruit?