The Late Devil's Dad's Life

There is no decent center, it looks messy

I want to tell you how I feel, maybe you don't mind. Overall, this book is a good book, and the characters are all well-written. But just because the writing is so full, it seems very tiring. Take Entering the Abyss, for example, it is divided into six parts, plus the mainland. After a few chapters, these six parts are replaced by other parts. It goes around in turn, which can easily make people feel tired (this is also the first novel that I skipped through, especially when it suddenly jumps to more than ten chapters). It's really hard to have too many protagonists in a book, especially when one has to distinguish between priorities. However, I feel like Chi Xiaoli in the introduction has almost become a supporting character. Well, I can't say that he has become a supporting character. There are so many characters that almost four-fifths of the page has been divided (I've only read almost 500 chapters, and I don't know if there will be any later chapters). (Change), I think two protagonists are enough for a book, and the divided length can be accepted by people. The name seems to be "The Twelve Movements of Creation", but this book and the current one don't seem to be very famous (it is obviously quite good, so why don't many people read it? Isn't this the main platform). Although there are two protagonists in that book, the priorities are clearly distinguished, but not too much, and the switching of the two perspectives in the middle and later stages will not make people feel tired (perhaps because there are fewer people, the writing is more satisfying). However, this kind of book should be a rare book for those who seek rich characters, vivid details, and rich plots. Finally, I just hope that the author can work hard and try to get rid of this embarrassing situation as soon as possible. 😁😁

I seem to be back 10 years ago. The author's big book is very watery and messy.

After reading about a hundred chapters, there was too much foreshadowing and too little drama. Moreover, there are too many unnecessary supporting characters, and there is no need to write about the psychological effects of the supporting characters. Those messy guilds are of no use, but the final battle requires too much description of their solos. The supporting characters' behavior is also a bit childish. They don't have the feeling of being the president of a large guild, and they are too hesitant to do things. To put it simply, at this time, they are still trying to hold back. If the fire dragon directly kills those two guys, wouldn't it mean that there are two less people in the decisive battle? Where is the lack of time? There is also the matter of eyes. It is really not good to see too many things, because everything can be seen in eyes. So fake. A look expresses a whole host of emotions. The same goes for the Ice Dragon's betrayal. There was too much foreshadowing and the result was just for the pursuit of power. You can't beat the Fire Dragon, so why go find someone else. I hope the maid's betrayal will not be due to such boring reasons. It feels like the protagonists of this volume are the orcs and the princess, and the male protagonist is simply treated as a plug-in. This greatly affects the experience. Because I'm really not interested in this orc. The daughter is basically just a gimmick, she appears on stage to act cute and then disappears. I hope the next volume will be better, so I will continue reading.

I think it's very well written (●°u°●)​" Come on, author!

This bookten years ago was regarded as fairy grass, but now... A cool song for you

Less than one-tenth of the first 50 chapters is devoted to the protagonist. The author must be too confident! Can't you write it well? If you don't have such good writing skills, just write the protagonist.

In this book, the dad and the protagonist seem like passers-by...

What is the title of the book and what is the content! Can be brought together😥😥😥

This is not a happy article... I was deceived!

I've read about 100 chapters, and the main character appears in less than 20 chapters. Tell me, where are the pig's feet?

It feels like a Japanese light novel,

The protagonist's sense of presence is too low. How many times does it appear in dozens of photos? What are you writing? I'm seriously off topic. If I didn't talk about "returning daddy", the baby dragon wouldn't even have a role! The main characters are all missing''I admire you for writing so many chapters! !

Very messy. . . It's also very tiring to watch. . . .

The cover is amazing, it gives a sense of space

The male protagonist's sense of presence is too low. It would be much better to cut out other people's plots.

Chapter 52, Chapter 99, Chapter 137, Chapter 191, and Chapter 401 are not available

Come on (*°∀°)=3