Man Returned from Hell

This Shennong passed by this place, so I can only say to future generations: Excuse me, take my leave.

Ten million clicks, only one thousand collections? How?

If your book was written 10 years ago, it would have been very popular. The conflict is arranged too early and too tightly, leaving no time for readers to buffer. And the conflict is a repetitive plot, which is even more poisonous.

The writing is self-contradictory. From the starting point of the protagonist's rebirth in the divine world to the earth, he encounters all kinds of horrors and awesomeness described by Wang Lingyun. It starts with an unpleasant beginning and is written like this. Even if the protagonist is not reborn on the earth, he will become a scumbag. I am a newbie author.

I am really convinced by this novel, the routine style from many years ago

This book could actually be well written. It would be enough to simply follow the dark novel route. The protagonist kills many people, but it feels so frustrating. If you want to kill them all, just kill them all. If you find a girl and find a reason, you will let her go? And what about Tang Yan, a person who was killed from hell? Is it so difficult to kill someone casually? Are you really ready to take on a disciple? Read more books like "Go Away". That kind of writing is good. It's obviously a dark novel, so don't write it like a vulgar urban novel.

Either the author wants to kill her or let her end like this, or else he is going to make her a heroine and continue to disgust her?

ヽ(ー_ー )ノ Is not enough. Let's gain weight.

This beginning... Is not pleasant at all! Totally tired of it

The villain dies because he talks too much, the foam is too thick and watery

Hey! This title reminds me of Xiaolong's He Came from Hell

And not killing the disgusting suitor of the teacher is definitely a failure. If you leave a resentful villain out, who knows what will happen.

The pace should be a little faster. Killing a few people is enough for more than ten chapters.

1.3 Million words, more than 3,000 recommendation votes. . .

Have I seen the sky, the wheel of the sea, the spring of life, the divine bridge, the other shore?

I haven't started reading it yet, but I hope your book is a good one and free from ostentation and exaggeration. Thanks

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9 Million clicks 3000 recommendation votes🤔🤔

Because I dare to write, I support it! ! ! ! ! !

I update 3 chapters a few times a day, I can't get enough of it