Six Paths of Pirates

I can't stand it anymore, it's too toxic. Author, will you read it after you write it? How can you keep reading a novel that starts out so toxic... You are the protagonist, why are you licking your straw hat? That person who can't survive for 3 episodes without the aura of the protagonist, and he still has such a powerful fruit to give to his subordinates, he has to write it for Franky to eat, even if he doesn't write it, it would be better than this. Without a bunch of powerful partners or subordinates, who can you turn to to change the government? Forget it 🤝

20 To 80 poison points are too many Abandon the book decisively

I really have to say it. I said in the early stage that I won't kill people for no reason. But later on, I killed the empress for no reason. How do you want to poison me? Bye bye.

The teleportation technique cannot be a space shuttle. At most, it is a chakra burst similar to shaving. If it is a space movement, it is too cheap. There are still many people who say that the substitution technique is a space movement. That is nonsense. , The art of Flying God Thunder will become something that everyone can learn. Otherwise, it cannot be explained why ordinary people can learn to teleport but cannot learn Flying God Thunder. It is just a matter of distance (#ﾟДﾟ) I hope the author can slightly change this setting. It is too poisonous. I have subscribed to it all so far.

The author seems to have taken the postgraduate entrance examination. He had published a leaflet before, but why didn't he do it later?

I am a Shennong who tastes all kinds of herbs in the world without dying. I am invincible and lonely. When I encounter this book now, I feel that my opportunity lies in it. Onlookers said: This book is extremely poisonous and will kill anyone who touches it. I snorted coldly: Hum, I am a divine farmer, invulnerable to all poisons, and I am possessed by Brother Chun. How can you understand my realm? When I conquer this book, I will lead you to ripple in it. Yang. Yang. Yang. Shennong died

Pirates are a world of high martial arts for Naruto. The ceiling of Naruto's combat power should not be taken advantage of by Pirates.

The author comes out, 4 comes out and updates

Nagato's reincarnation eye belongs to Madara. The reincarnation eye is really different between Madara and Nagato. No matter how strong your eyes are, it's better to have your own eyes.

What the hell are you writing? It says that the essence of teleportation is spatial teleportation. The Sage of Six Paths and Kaguya are both dead and not alive when they are caught in the Dust Escape. Jb is nonsense. I haven't seen Naruto writing.

You put yourself on the moral high ground and say that your opponent is worthless. You are acting like a female cousin and building a memorial.

Are you going to kill the empress? Well! The mood is so complicated. As a normal man, I am attracted by the beauty of the empress and do not want her to die. However, the character creation of Nagato written by the author is quite good. As a pirate, every time he goes to sea, he must rob other people's property and even kill people. If the protagonist insists that killing someone must be paid with his life, he will definitely kill the empress. If the empress kneels down and licks her without killing her because she is beautiful, then this book is not worth the author's eunuch's time. I still hope that the author will come back and update it.

Because the previous part was written too early, it barely kept up with the new information, but the later part is very exciting, but the updates are too slow.

I don't know why, but every time I see this kind of protagonist who wants to carry out justice or fulfill someone's wish, I feel weird.

A bit of a weird beginning... Escaped life is actually not the aftermath of a disaster but the anger of being fooled? Should the first chapter be about the protagonist being stabbed through the heart? Death! The book is finished, scatter flowers? Why should someone with the Samsara Eye be confused in the world of pirates? How can it not be worn if the soul wears it? I just asked you to go to the Hokage to get a hanger

Watching One Piece just wants to watch Devil Fruit. This thunderous fruit is poisonous if given to others! Slipped away

Come on, author, I have always subscribed to my big account, but I can't comment because I haven't bound my mobile phone number. Don't be a eunuch. Come on, it'll be fine if you update more slowly 😁

It's too early to write 🤭 The author has to rely on the editor later

A shadow clone plus water escape is not enough for all ability users.

** Article, when Naruto became Nagato, he always had the Samsara Eye. Because he knew the plot well and didn't want to be killed, he kept lurking to improve his strength. It is said to be countless times stronger than the original Nagato. Then he killed Obito. Then he was discovered by Black Zetsu and killed by Black Zetsu. He traveled through the world for the second time and came to One Piece. Don't you know Bellamy? Everyone has said it and you still don't know? You fool.

This is the first time I've seen a plug-in other than the main character. News Bird has a plug-in

There is a reason why the author is not popular. The future general with the Thunder Fruit does not have the strength, so he wants to recruit CP9.

One Piece is still far from being finished, so to finish the story, there will definitely be some deductions and original parts. I already have an idea about One Piece, D, and the blank 100 years. My personal plan is that no matter whether it will be denied by Oda himself in the future, it will not be changed again. Because after writing the outline, the content and foreshadowing have already been determined, it would be very laborious and ugly to break it down later. If this happens, I can only ask for your forgiveness. It is just a copycat version of Pirates anyway. Then, in future stories, some original characters will appear, and everyone can sign up to star in this book. For ordinary character actors, don't exaggerate your abilities. If you want devil fruits, just make them normal. However, some people can also give full play to it: like the other two people from the Three Disasters and the Green Bull, the names and various information can be determined by book friends. If I don't get slapped in the face by Oda, I will adopt them. There is a shortage of such relatively high-level characters in the Revolutionary Army and Wano Country. You can actively participate and let the author steal ideas. It is also possible to sign up for the Straw Hat Pirates, but as a friendly reminder, Luffy will be beaten from beginning to end by the protagonist in this book. If you want to get on the ship, please be mentally prepared. Example of registration format: 1. Jack, male 2. Revolutionary Army Soldiers 3. Those who are good at physical arts, those with hammer and sickle fruit abilities, etc.

What kind of bullshit is this? The original story accounts for half of it.

No wonder it's so confusing, the author is too self-centered, and the main character's goal is like a fool.

It's too late, why didn't Pirates update it? The book titles are all taken by others

Author, do you feel comfortable writing plots? Dragon people watch TV? Shouldn't the Golden Bell be a news release? This is pirates, not modern times. The war on the top can only broadcast the battlefield to the nearest two or three islands. Have you not calculated the positions of the Tianlong family and the Golden Bell? How could it be broadcast live?

What is the name of the author's other book?

When will we explode the stars?

Newsbird needs to be changed. The reporter discovers the news, writes the article, returns it to the news agency, hands it to the news agency, and then modifies the content. After sorting out other news, see which section the news can be ranked in. After arranging all the news for the current issue, start copying the newspaper (each issue of news has a fixed time, unless exceptions are made for special reasons), then put the newspaper on the Newsbird backpack, and Newsbird flies around the world (this takes time, and it needs to stop once before meeting anyone.)