The Two-Dimensional Trouble Making System

It's too slow and won't be updated for a few days.

Really, I feel like Uchiha Flirting sounds better than Uchiha Yuya.

I know why the results are not good. The rubbish system sends rubbish tasks, and I forcefully tease Tsunade and Kushina. I feel uncomfortable watching them.

It can be seen that the author wants to take the "relaxed and funny" route However, until I read Chapter 34, I never laughed even once. This is under the premise that I am a person with a low point of laughter. There are a lot of dirty things in the whole text, but... It's so dirty that it's far-fetched In the dirty part, I feel more "embarrassed" in the writing. Let's talk about the protagonist's training My biggest feeling is that the protagonist probably doesn't have chakra... There is no basic tree climbing and water treading training, nor is there any ninjutsu training. All the "fighting scenes"... If a punch can be called a "fight between ninjas"... They are basically a group of little thugs fighting each other. The main fighting process was all skipped and not written (of course, I can understand that the scene of a group of gangsters fighting each other is really not writeable) Especially when I see the protagonist has become a genin and is as tired as a dog after running. Taking drugs restores physical strength instead of chakra. I am even more certain - the protagonist is a fake ninja, and the immortal body is also a fake... By the way: yours is not a "trouble-making system", yours is a "rogue system" Generally speaking, the purpose of the author's writing is not very clear. I seriously doubt that you, the author, wrote a little bit as you thought, without any outline at all.

In my opinion, apart from the slow updates, there are no shortcomings to pick on. I'll give it a try with a red envelope.

Why does Naruto pinch Tsunade's breasts when he causes trouble? Don't hesitate to slip away when you see it.

The author has opened a new page, a great writer in Konoha

Today the author has updated. I have to say something. The author is very stubborn. He said before that this novel would never fail and he never failed. But in terms of the update speed, you are sure to be the zombie king. Come on, I will always support you.

You're cheating again. Author, what do you want to do? It's only taken a year for you to have a hundred chapters.

Am I still fooled after losing money once? Whoever likes to read new books should read them. Last year I gave you a reward for reading more than a dozen chapters, and then I entered the palace. This year I saw that I was ready to chase after leaving the palace, and I'm here again, tsk tsk

The more I watch, the more disgusting I feel, so I say goodbye 🙏

Has it been updated? ? I thought you were cold.

There are obviously no other books, so why is the update so slow?

You put it on the shelves and update it every day. If you don't hit the streets, who will? ?

The writing is okay, but there are still some toxic points in the plot. Looking forward to updates 🤭

Hahaha, I originally wanted to comfort the author, but the writer was very good but blocked it. I didn't expect the author to come back and update this book! Starting point🤝 (*≧ｍ≦*)I have been waiting for a long time

What the hell system, this part of Tsunade looked extremely uncomfortable. The male protagonist also refuses when he should.

, Why is the last book gone? It was well written.

Please update the world of Elf Dream Ye Luoli

Shock! The author actually updated it. This book took more than a year to write and only has about a hundred chapters.

This is not called making trouble, this is seeking death, right?

I feel this book is better than the previous one, I support it

Not bad, not bad. . . . . . Just too little

This is a good book worth keeping. I hope the author will update it soon! ~

Write it quickly while I still want to read it 🤫

Why doesn't the author update it? Quite interesting

I just looked at the name of the protagonist in the latest chapter. Suddenly Uchiha was discovered. . . Fooling. . Take a closer look, it turns out to be Youye

Yes, the heroine in the previous book is from the Kingdom of Water. This one becomes the Fire Nation.