One Piece Fantasy Moonlight

The author should hurry up and be a eunuch. Can you still spit out the devil fruit after eating it? It really gained knowledge.

I've read Chapter 20, and it's full of fantasy flavor, but it's also too slow, and it takes several shots to fight a monster. . .

Chapter 1 Is it the East China Sea or the South China Sea? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

To be honest, I read more than ten chapters and didn't understand it at all.

If you understand it, can you tell me about the plot? I can't understand!

Is there any such thing as seclusion in One Piece? I feel like I'm watching Xianxia😰

This has nothing to do with the One Piece I love, it's just a shell of the Pirate King. Absolutely no one in One Piece talks or acts like you do in your article. My mood is getting worse and worse.

Come on, author, really, what you wrote is just a little bit readable!

The elementary school novel with the name One Piece is poisonous.

Is the third eye the opening//eye?

Since it is a Honkai Fruit, it should be able to collapse anything, whether it is alive or not.

More interesting than the One Piece I watched as a kid.

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You are just a fantasy novelist wearing the skin of a fan.

I haven't seen you for so long and you're actually on the shelves 666666

Is the mace Bass holds, or the double sword? Author, go check it out for yourself, don't put readers away in the first chapter

The outline of this book is okay, but the author's writing style needs to work harder. Also, the protagonist's character is middle-grade. After all, it's too yyy. Smart protagonists are still popular now, and the rigor of the storyline needs to be improved. Okay, I won't say much more. I don't dare to say how many years I have been a reader. It's just a small suggestion. If it's wrong, the author can just laugh it off.

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To be honest, I quite like Pirates fandom. But there is no market for pirates now. Mainly because One Piece has not been completed, and many holes have not been filled, such as Nami's life experience, Franky's life experience, and Zoro's life experience. Robin's father. Everyone knows it. Oin likes to dig holes. Maybe I didn't see it, but if you finish writing it, it will be very embarrassing once the manga or anime is aired. I've read a lot of Pirates fics. To be honest, I stopped watching the One Piece series before and it felt good to watch those fanfictions, but it was terrible to watch them after the reruns. I wasn't asking the author to give up on the novel, but I was asking the author to try to use his imagination. 🤓🤓🤓