Tech Wizard

Does the author often burp when he's full? Is there any chapter in the book that doesn't have an "um," tone? Seriously, if you delete this word, you can improve the writing style of this book a lot 😰

I very much agree with the protagonist's pursuit of the truth of time travel. Unlike other protagonists who only think about conquering the world and flirting with girls. I also very much agree with the protagonist that he can make full use of his knowledge and use known modern technology to deal with the unknown wizard system. However, I feel that the protagonist's golden finger is too much. He has too much scientific and technological knowledge. He is fully versed in physics, knows the manufacturing methods of various high-precision equipment, and even understands philosophical thoughts. It's very thorough, it's too magical, even a "human" can't do it. The modern situation is about specialization, and the higher you go, the more specialized you are. Some scientists even only study one kind of material, so that they can make breakthroughs. The same goes for the manufacturing of machines. I feel that the golden finger of the protagonist is too big. It would be better to change the expression. It would be more appropriate to bring a modern supercomputer or other equipment to store knowledge.

From other places, see the end of the series. The book makes me feel good. I chased after him.

The author is recommended to visit Bode World! Similar to Dungeons and Dragons! I'm a bookworm! This book also contains nuclear weapons spells! You can develop your thinking! There was before the starting point! But now it's gone too. The author jumped ship. Of course this is a suggestion! . It would be a shame not to watch it! I personally think it will be very useful to you! Of course, Lord of the Abyss of the Pagoda also strongly recommends taking a look! This is your book that I can still read! Come on. 👍

It is rare to find a good book, with rigorous structure, reasonable reasoning, relaxed pace and some professional-level scientific knowledge. According to the review of 10 years of bookworms, this book will be a hit

After the addition of the role of Pan, the plot became quite awkward. The male protagonist changed drastically and became inexplicably talkative... Even the book reviews occasionally showed his own inner drama of kneeling and licking fans (it seems that the earth does not revolve around Pan). I still don't agree with the infiltration of routines/logic from urban or romance novels into xueba and science and technology novels. It seems to be rich in content but often interferes with the main line and style. With recommended support, it flashed.

Academic Dissuasion😰

I originally thought that even though I didn't finish the book, I would at least have more time to read the 3 million words, but I ended up reading all the chapters in two and a half days. I enjoyed reading it, but then I lost it. I was very annoyed and gave the author a bad review!

I don't want to comment on others, but this work can make people think, instead of just reading it and passing it by, excellent review

Good book. I didn't like the plot of Kingdom in the early stages, but I can understand that everyone has different ideas. I hope the author will work hard ＾0＾~ Don't forget your original intention

Technology is shit. A lot of the protagonist's behavior is like an unreasonable plot. The analysis is that the author doesn't know what to write and just suppresses the plot. It is incoherent and full of logical errors, making it very uncomfortable to read.

Good! Chase! Come on! I really like the classic Western magic side. The protagonist's IQ is always online (he just lacks emotional intelligence), and there are a lot of popular science facts! I haven't seen much yet, I only know about wizards, dragons, maybe elves, goblins, orcs and the like? I thought it would be very complicated to write this down... But it shouldn't be possible. Whispering bb: It's all nonsense that the protagonist is cold-blooded! Well, that's right! I love this! ,,վ^վ,,

I only have one question now, how to distinguish between first-level, second-level and third-level wizards?

The rogue thing about science is that it constantly updates itself. Even if aliens with magic suddenly appear, science will soon have a magic science. In the same way, the rogue thing about online articles is that they will constantly update themselves. Even if people suddenly like to read ancient poems, an ancient poetry branch will appear in online articles. Just like the original online articles only had fantasy, now there are new branches such as the second dimension. Therefore, it is difficult for science and Internet articles to disappear.

This is the first time I post a book review after the reward. I can't stand the trolls in the comment section lately. I didn't even read the book carefully, so I thought I'd just open a thread to complain.

Set up an idea building here to collect all kinds of ideas and plot developments that you think are reasonable. Let me start with: 1. You can learn about the idea of ​​​​the Arcane Throne. This book was the pinnacle of the scientific wizard genre at the time, and it seems that no one can surpass it now. 2. To expand the worldview, readers cannot just see the world in a small area. It is necessary to explore the worldview from the perspective of the protagonist. Many fantasy novels are shaped by a grand world view and have many advantages that I won't go into details. 3. Working alone is very detrimental to scientific research. The protagonist needs absolutely loyal followers or dependents. The strength does not need to be very strong, but it must be an advanced intelligent creature with strong learning ability and strong acceptance ability. 4. Regarding the transformation of the suitcase: Since the space inside the suitcase has been transformed into a laboratory, I have a bold and long-term idea to carve a large number of magic patterns on the inner wall of the space to slowly expand the space and absorb the free energy outside the void to maintain the 24-hour automatic operation of the laboratory. This can also be achieved through special plants, such as the elves' tree of life. 5. As an online novel, the most important thing is that the plot is enjoyable. At present, the pace of this upgrade obviously cannot keep up with the pace of strength improvement. As mentioned in a previous post, you can find a different path from the Dawn Wizard and the Apocalypse Wizard, that is, break through the boundaries by increasing the strength of the soul and the evolution of physical life.

1. Biotechnology: The regulation of hormones on the human body is hierarchical, and I think that in the magical context, hematopoietic stem cells and embryonic stem cells are the focus of research. Cells with regenerative properties can be modified to have multiple capabilities of rapid self-division and differentiation. After being added to the protagonist's body, various regulatory hormones of the knight's blood are injected to permanently replace the cells in the body, strengthen the body's strength, and achieve the purpose of integrating physical strength and mental strength. Imagination 1: Add magic patterns to the cells. The cells will automatically replicate the magic patterns while dividing themselves. Add various functions you want to add to the magic patterns, such as: rapid self-lysis in the cells (used to decompose bacteria, viruses, and unknown poisons), rapid division (used for self-healing when injured). . Imagination 2: Use mental power to carve magic patterns on bones. The function of magic patterns is to fix the energy body. When casting a spell, the magic patterns are used to generate a bone-shaped protective layer outside the body, similar to Susanoo in Naruto. 2. Computing chips: Now that I have started manufacturing computing chips, I want to expand my imagination. First make the simplest magic pattern that functions like a diode, then make an AND or NOT gate, and use three kinds of gate-level circuits to create addition, subtraction, multiplication and division. Regarding how to integrate the circuit, you can use the crystal skull to write the magic pattern into the skull, which can be written at the spiritual and soul level, and then use the skull and the magic pattern itself to repeatedly call recursively to generate the magic pattern. A simple calculator is just set up. Then add souls such as book spirit and palace spirit as the theme, and use the increase in the scale of the magic pattern and the strength of the soul as indicators to depict the strength of the computing power. Since the scale of the magic pattern cannot be too large, parallel computing can be used to call multi-core CPUs to greatly speed up the computing power. Storage device: You can also use the crystal skull to create a directory, use the protagonist's sensory organs, and record it with mental power. 3. In terms of strength and level: the two paths of Apocalypse Wizard and Dawn Wizard can learn from each other. The protagonist can use the body as a container to create a huge origin. Through the interaction between the mana in the body and the energy in nature, the two energies are used in a certain proportion during the casting process. The mana in the body drives the natural energy to achieve the purpose of fast casting, reduced consumption, and relatively stable spell casting. In addition, the level description of Dawn Wizard is not clear. The division of levels cannot be described only by mental strength and origin capacity. The increase in the two cannot achieve a qualitative leap. The leap-forward progress from level 3 to level 4, and level 6 to level 7 should be essentially different. For example: the portrayal of a fourth-level wizard: by strengthening the body to expand the upper limit of the soul's improvement, the mental strength and physical strength (including resilience, vitality, etc.) Are unified and harmonious, so that external energy can be slightly mobilized through resonance with nature (external energy is driven through the invocation of mana in the body, not mental power), so that the intensity of spell casting is greatly increased and the consumption is slightly reduced. At the same time, as an online novel, in addition to the plot and setting, the improvement of strength and level can give readers a great pleasure.

There are many novels about science and technology, but I guess most of them were written by people who didn't graduate from high school or didn't do well in high school. Because your high school teacher must have taught you that all modern scientific knowledge is conditional. A lot of the knowledge we learn now is only applicable to one place on the earth, and will not be applicable to other places on the earth, let alone other worlds. So, those who travel to another world and quote scientific knowledge from the original world at all times are pure idiots, because they will find that as long as there is a small amount that is wrong, all the formulas, theorems, inferences, conjectures, etc. Based on it will be wrong, and everything will have to be overturned. To do this is basically equivalent to reconstructing the modern scientific system, such as the concept of time (speed of light), the concept of space (gravity), etc. Therefore, time travelers must have the academic level of top scientists in various fields in the world. Besides, the calculation of many constants requires professional tools, so he also needs to have the skills of an eighth-level technician (all series). Not only that, but also a brain with computing power comparable to top supercomputers. To be honest, if the protagonist had such awesome abilities, he would still wear Mao Yue. Isn't it okay to be a big boss in the original world? Therefore, unless you can use your imagination to justify yourself like Chen Shuixian, this type of novel will have inherent flaws in its setting. Because you will find that people who play science are the biggest unscientific people.

After reading thirty or forty chapters, this so-called science is just imposed on me. Why introduce so much science? Write wizards you write science. Also, the character of the protagonist is a paranoid psychopath whose core values ​​destroy all three views. The reason why you were born, raised, funded for your experiments, and able to establish influence outside is all because of your identity. As a result, your father was poisoned by your elder brother and ignored him because your father killed all your people because of a misunderstanding? Why is your elder brother so defensive about you and wants to kill you? The protagonist knows it all, but never thinks about solving the problem. He just thinks about my fucking experiments and how I got here. It's not bullshit. Please be a human being. I don't recommend reading.

The two most annoying categories are: one is that the ancestors are rejuvenated and become children looking for women everywhere; the other is that they are manipulating science and technology in the extraordinary world, and everything must be in line with science. A good mage uses a magic gun. Normal medieval steampunk looks awkward.

It's similar to those scolding people in the comment area. The protagonist is too arrogant and has no scientific thinking. He just applies everything to the earth. Even if the constants are the same, you have a verification process so that we don't look poisonous. This type of book such as Arcane Throne, Sword of the Dawn, The First Wizard, my The diary of becoming a god is well written. For example, even if the constants in arcana are the same, there are additional variables such as soul and magic. Others, Lucien, have also done experiments and slowly verified it. The Sword of Dawn is different from the earth, so the protagonist just uses scientific thinking, and technology is done by professionals. Try to be as vague as possible, just watch it. , The first wizard, my diary of becoming a god, those are also slowly experiments to verify whether the formula of the earth can be used. The protagonist in this book uses it directly from the beginning, and feels that the constants are the same, which is contrary to nature. He talks about science every day, but in the end, there is no basic experimental cognitive verification of science. There is no science. I don't recommend it to people who like knowledge flow. I also saw some people saying that the background of The Wandering Fleet in Deep Space can be blended. The plot of the fleet on the earth is quite 💩, and it will be very good after leaving the earth. This book is not worthy of comparison with the fleet, it is just a self-pleasure novel with no scientific thinking at all.

It's okay at the beginning, but it really doesn't work anymore. The only thing left is a popular science article. The protagonist talks about cracking the system to reach the sky in one step every day. He has a problem with his thinking and has no strength to be the cornerstone. Forget it, there are still a lot of people washing it.

It is not recommended to read. The author's ability is obviously not worthy of his ambition. The protagonist gives people the impression of a middle school student + Baidu from another world, or a mentally ill patient with paranoia. Although there is nothing sacred , it has more poisonous points than the earlier routine novels. If you have enough time and a severe shortage of books, it is readable. In other cases, it is recommended not to read it.

This protagonist is my favorite one at the moment. He is persistent, rational, and powerful (this is strong in every sense of the word, not the brainless Dragon Aotian). And because the protagonist does things too rationally, it gives people a feeling of being crazy. For example, in the latest chapter, if you can't beat him, you will use equipment, if you can't, you will use medicine, if you still can't, you will bomb with barrages, and if you are still alive, you will throw a bomb. If you still can't die, you will use poison. I'm afraid you will directly use a nuclear bomb in the end...

This book feels like a popular science book. I write a little bit to popularize the science. I have read more than 400 chapters and it is already a quarter of the book. The protagonist is still a wizard apprentice. In more than 400 chapters, the mental power is only at the level of a first-level wizard. There are more than 1,100 chapters left. Do you plan to open a big bug in the future to directly go from level 1 to level 9? The spells are not very powerful, and the combat effectiveness has not been demonstrated. I just happened to kill a second-level wizard of a mysterious organization who could be resurrected and was easily dehumanized twice. When he encountered a normal second-level wizard, he fell to his knees in minutes. Take this resurrected bug as an example. What are you thinking? The book has collapsed, okay? Using a soul memory backup and putting it into a corpse is another level two? Does soul memory backup have something to do with mental power? Even if his mental power remains unchanged, doesn't the source of the law need to be re-melted? He was just resurrected from a corpse, so he already had the source of the law right after he was resurrected? If there is a soul backup, can we write that their organization will be immortalized directly? What about the limitations of resurrection? Anyway, many pitfalls have not been filled, so we should think more carefully about the rationality.

The creativity is OK, but the logic is not. The explanation of soul and energy doesn't even make any assumptions, just skip the formulas. It's just as awkward as using Newton's laws to solve microscopic problems. If you want to use physical problems to explain the fireball technique, you must first explain why it doesn't burn when you hold it in your hands. To explain the essence of magic, let's use fantasy to solve it. That's not how science works.

Science is not just about showing off with earth knowledge, but systematic research carried out under current conditions. Scientific ideas such as controlling variables, contrasting, and recording data are universal. But "common sense" on Earth doesn't necessarily apply. Like Sword of the Dawn, if you forcefully ignore the rules of the world, ignore the objectivity of gods and magic, insist on using monosulfide, dinitrate, and charcoal to create gunpowder, and delve into internal combustion engines when there is no oil and no substitutes can be found, that would be stupid.

This is a self-help article written for the author to read. The popular science copied and pasted from Baidu Encyclopedia makes up half of the word count.

The protagonist has an aura of intelligence, right? Don't be too smart, and don't make the supporting characters look so mentally retarded😅

I remember that people in the Middle Ages only took two baths in their lives, and the street was filled with the smell of shit. People poured shit from their houses onto the street at any time, which was why the smell was there. The shit was trampled by horses and people all year round, creating a shit road.