Konoha's Second Blockbuster

After seeing the scene where the protagonist started to use the telescope, I decided to give my opinion. To be honest, up to this scene, the most unlikable character is the protagonist himself. He behaves like an online game player with settings plug-ins, rather than a person living in that world. Why do you say this? In addition to becoming stronger, a normal person will have various needs in life, and the most important one is Social interaction and getting along with people are not about accepting tasks with NPCs. Except for the short scene with the Crown Princess, the descriptions of other people are like setting up an NPC with a simple character logic, and when getting along with people, they are almost all driven by dialogue. This makes the description of the characters very single, and the content of the dialogue sometimes does not conform to the character setting, but what the author wants to say here. In addition, the setting of the protagonist itself is somewhat unreasonable. The son of the fourth generation, the son of the hero, even the original Naruto, except for Iruka, the third generation appears many times in life. As for the protagonist, I feel that in addition to an identity setting that brings convenience in getting along with others, what should this identity itself have? Will Sandai not pay attention to him? Will he appear as an elder? Kakashi's strangeness is also a bit far-fetched. Why does the other red-haired Naruto continue to be ostracized? In the case of Naruto, the son of a hero, a single demon fox cannot justify itself. Could it be that Namikaze Naruto knows that he is the son of the fourth generation, while Uzumaki Naruto continues to not know who his parents are? Doesn't anyone else know? Shuangming's imagination is very good, but if he does not fill in the details with a rigorous attitude, it will not stand up to scrutiny and association, and people will subconsciously feel that it is unreasonable the first time they read it. Finally, and the biggest poisonous point, the protagonist's behavior and thinking are obviously self-interested. So under the skin of the fourth generation son set by the author, also called Naruto, he is actually a soul similar to Shimura Danzo or Erzhu. This contrast, in the framework of fandom, is a kind of huge respect for the original character. Big damage, even if it's just Naruto Namikaze, think about it if you write about pirates and Luffy becomes a selfish and cowardly person... In fact, whether it's selfishness or Naruto's little Taiyang, the author should at least add some shining points to the protagonist's character, so that people can relate to it if they like it. I didn't see the rest, so I'm just complaining about the early descriptions.

I found that many Naruto fan novels - including this one - have a problem, that is, genin, chuunin, jounin, and shadow are directly used as a measure of strength. However, in fact, the original work clearly stated that these are just titles and are not equivalent to strength levels. In addition, all comics, animations, and official settings do not have the word "film level". Just like professional titles, assistant lecturer, lecturer, associate professor, and professor are not equivalent to teaching ability or knowledge base. Saying "breakthrough to Jonin" feels to me like "breakthrough to associate professor"; "I won't have to worry about chakra issues when I get to the Kage level" and "I won't have to worry about knowledge reserves when I become a professor." Although this example also has the problem of inversion of cause and effect, the original text gives me the feeling that there is no logic.

Why is Naruto popular among everyone and it is a migrant manga? Because its hidden theme is peace. It's funny. In the ninja world where people cannibalize people, there is a fool who endures pain, forgives pain, and longs for peace.

The book "Mosquito" has a characteristic that all excellent fans have, that is, it is not limited by the plot flow of the original work, but Mosquito is even more powerful, turning the table on the plot flow of the original work from the beginning. And he is also very imaginative. He does not follow the routine of replacing the original protagonist's Soul Transmigration Style, but ingeniously becomes Naruto Uzumaki's younger brother-Naruto Namikaze. The protagonist of Namikaze Naruto's book does not have Kyuubi, and lives in the sun as the son of the fourth generation, but He is an insidious and despicable person, afraid of death, has no sympathy, always loves to fight with the air, plays tricks, and gets slapped in the face from time to time. He is not a good person, nor does he look like a big hero. Except for being nice to his sister "Uzumaki Naruto", he is always being used. Oh, by the way, if you look at the back, you will find that the protagonist is actually a "sister control" who protects her sister and keeps her away from the coquettish bitch in her previous life, although she always cheats her. And his sister inherited the character of the "original" Naruto, living in darkness, but still passionate, sunny and reckless, and caring for her younger brother. Some people may say, "Why did you change me from Naruto to Naruko?" There is an old saying that "there is no room for two tigers in a mountain, unless there is a male and a female." Speaking of which, although Naruko is very neurotic, as a boss who can develop harem techniques, and as the male protagonist's sister, there should be many stories that can be written about life interactions. Generally speaking, this book is the work of the author's imagination. Except that the background is still the same, the characters are still the same, and the stories surrounding Naruto are still not those stories. Maybe the protagonist's neither bright nor straightforward character dissuaded some people at the beginning, but I would like to say that there is nothing poisonous about this book so far. You said that there is no confession of killing a sister, and there is no deep and dark evil. There is nothing poisonous about it. Although the protagonist is suspicious and loves to be clever, he is slapped in the face, but there is also the encyclopedia of Grandpa Menma. Although the protagonist is slapped in the face from time to time, it is more reasonable than a person who has watched Naruto and traveled back in time to be better than the natives in everything. Besides, the plot flow is gone, and now he is crossing the river by feeling the stones. The author obviously doesn't want to write a protagonist with a God's perspective and supporting characters with a halo of wisdom. It's not normal for the protagonist to not be able to include everything. Facing a world with which nothing is familiar, only a normal person should not act recklessly. The biggest problem with this book right now is that the author always likes to do sit-ups in a coffin. If you do this, people will think you don't do sit-ups. Even if there is a single chapter announcement every now and then, "April 11, sunny, another day of catching fish, no update today", I finally look forward to entering V. The number of words in this book exceeds the sum of the previous two books. Two happy things together, I thought the update would be stable, but it ended up being interrupted. It took a long time to pick up, Wang Nima's, why? I still don't understand whether most people who read the book are persuaded by the plot or by the pace of the update.        ，，，，

The author must not have watched Naruto carefully. I feel bad about this random arrangement of roles. The world of Naruto is too clear. Change the plot randomly. This is just boring. No more readability. Naruto and Sasuke. It can be said that he is the son of heaven in Naruto. I am a person who brings my own plug-ins.

The protagonist, nb, studied and practiced the sage mode by himself, and he had not even graduated from the ninja school. After doing some research on my own, I turned Feng Shui Chakra into Ice Escape. There are so many people who know Feng Shui Double Escape, can everyone practice Ice Escape? Isn't Ice Escape related to blood? Does it mean that a ninja who knows both water and earth escape can learn wood escape by studying it?

It's not me who's wrong, it's the world.

Blades are on sale ~ clearance sale! Don't miss it if you pass by. Hehehe

I insisted on seeing the beginning of Chapter 34, but I couldn't hold on anymore😁 It's a really good setting, but I was so poisoned by the protagonist's character...

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Looking at the Naruto and Pirates fanfic, there is a plot that is easy to identify. Writing about the plot of the Land of Waves, and the fact that Pirates has written about Nico Robin, we can roughly see the mainstream plot development of the novel. Because these two plots can basically describe what kind of protagonist the author creates. Unfortunately, the plot of this book, The Land of Waves, is quite poorly written...

The author is a bit ignorant in his thoughts about the Holy Mother of Fire. The author may not have noticed. Jiraiya could have escaped, but he remembered the prophecy of the Great Toad Sage, and he will naturally face a major decision in the future, about whether the world will go to light or darkness. It was precisely because Naruto who endured the pain forgave Nagato that he came up with the reincarnation technique. Nagato believed in Naruto, and it was precisely because he forgave Obito that he believed that Naruto could have peace in the world. Boruto was not written by the author and was written by a fan! ! !

Namikaze Menma appeared like a fly,