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The protagonist didn't know what he was thinking. When he needed strength to protect his body in the early stage of rebuilding, he only cultivated three auxiliary magical powers first, and put the only "powerful" magical power that can improve combat effectiveness into the last practice. There was no sense of crisis at all, and he thought he was still being a crab at the bottom of the lake!
As an 800-year-old monster who practices Taoism and seeks immortality, he actually risks damaging his Taoist base to treat a human whom he has only known for a few months. To this, I can only say that the monsters nowadays are really kind!
In the beginning, he was a crab. After practicing for 800 years, he gave up his demon body and became a human. Then, a man from the Dragon Palace of the East China Sea came out immediately. He saw a person who became a spirit from grass and trees. Why do you want to become a human? You can practice cultivation by becoming a human, right? I really can't figure it out. What do you think of it and what do you write about it? This is why no one looks at you
In order to ruin the path to immortality, a person whom I have known for only a few days casually teaches the skills.
Before Chapter 24, it was said that the protagonist was aloof from the world, but in Chapter 25, he fell into the mortal world inexplicably and made a secret promise to Tian Qifang? Can it be normal?
This book is not exciting, it is boring to read, and it also contains some poisonous points. For example, when saving people, Li committed suicide and was later rescued by the protagonist. The author interspersed Li Yueya's feelings for Li in the plot. Personally, I was not moved at all. It was a transaction in itself. We did not have a deep friendship but did things beyond the transaction value. The protagonist did not feel like an old weirdo who had been cultivating for eight hundred years. There is also a highly toxic bet. First of all, the bet is unfair but the protagonist accepts it. If he wins, he will become a useless apprentice. If he loses, he will walk back to Chang'an barefoot. Ordinary people should not accept this unbalanced bet. After reading the previous chapter, I guessed the development of the plot, and the result was as I expected. It was similar to the routine of other novels. The protagonist did not want to accept a disciple after winning the bet, but Zhou Pian wanted to become a disciple, which suddenly shocked me. Of course, poison will not kill you. A benevolent person has a different opinion and a wise person has wisdom.
If you are reading this book, please don't read this chapter. Everyone in the comments is a master. They can criticize you whether they are poisonous or not (not to ridicule, but to admire). You will not be able to stand it.
The writing style of this book is still good, and the wording and writing can surpass 99% of the writers who started it. However, the plot needs a lot of polishing. I hope the author's next book will be better.
Watching the magical power to cross the world, the beginning was novel, but when I saw the story of Li Cao, I couldn't stand it anymore. The reason is very simple. The story is unsatisfactory and rambling, as is the case with every story. Moreover, the plot twists are abrupt, the connection is not smooth, and the reading lacks pleasure.
The new book "Lord of the Book of the Earth" is online. Brothers who like it can read it.
After more than half a year of preparation, the new book "Lord of the Book of the Earth" is online. Brothers who like it can read it. By the way, I have changed into a new vest: I will fly away with my clothes.
I feel like the writing is really good, why is the response so low?
I am the author. If you have any thoughts and suggestions, please leave them below this post.
I am the author of this book. If you have any thoughts and suggestions about this book, you can leave them below this post and I will try my best to refer to them.
When the protagonist first enters the world of mortals, he should have a pure heart, with no evil thoughts, not without likes and dislikes.
What the author writes about is the compassion of the Buddha, so all kinds of inconsistencies are immediately apparent.
I'm so handsome that I don't need an explanation.
It's pretty good-looking, nothing sinister about it. Mainly, it's less refreshing.
Is this how it ends? Less than 200 chapters?
Is this the end? I hope the author's next book will be better
This book is good, but why is it so unfinished? There are so few monthly subscriptions due to poor updates? Can the author be more careful?
Eight hundred years ago, Xu Xian rescued Bai Suzhen. Use the spirit of Lihuo from the immortal volcano in the south to besiege Jinshan Temple. What followed was a hundred thousand fire crows burning the gold mountain, and one of them was lucky enough to escape and open a new chapter... Actually, I just want to ask: Have you ever read the book Liaozhai, which has so many stories? I have to go to the end with White Snake and Nie Xiaoqian.
Although I have only read more than 30 chapters, it is rare that there are authors who can calm down and "create" novels with their heart. Today's society is very impetuous. Many readers are more "eager for quick success" and their views are naturally pathological. Therefore, I hope that the author will not be criticized by some novices. It has affected my creative ideas, such as "If someone wants to do something bad to me, I will kill someone immediately", "Kill everyone in the house" and other extreme and extreme mentality. Whether it is spiritual practice or if you want to achieve some achievements in the real society, you must put a peaceful mentality as the priority.
Come on, don't give up! We will always support you! Your writing style is appreciated by everyone. As long as you persist, you will eventually succeed!
It's a pity that it's finished so soon. However, the writing is still very good. The plot and imagination are there. In the future, we can try the origin and return of human beings. I hope to see your new work soon and see your imagination.
This is modern cultivation, world nuclear peace, a world without all ghosts, ghosts, and snake gods. This is the general trend. As a result, you have come out of the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea. Mythical novels are poisoned to death.
The protagonist is a rather doggy hairy crab?
The author writes well, it's a good book but it's a pity that it's not famous
Are you out of luck and don't want to write anymore? I haven't even finished writing 4 points and 1 of the setting I laid out before 😅
The writing is very good. I just read the book the day before yesterday and found out that it was finished all of a sudden 😭
The protagonist was a sea crab at first, then a lake crab, but why did he become a river crab inexplicably?
I can't see any new books, what's going on, river crab? ?
The protagonist didn't know what he was thinking. When he needed strength to protect his body in the early stage of rebuilding, he only cultivated three auxiliary magical powers first, and put the only "powerful" magical power that can improve combat effectiveness into the last practice. There was no sense of crisis at all, and he thought he was still being a crab at the bottom of the lake! As an 800-year-old monster who practices Taoism and seeks immortality, he actually risks damaging his Taoist base to treat a human whom he has only known for a few months. To this, I can only say that the monsters nowadays are really kind!
In the beginning, he was a crab. After practicing for 800 years, he gave up his demon body and became a human. Then, a man from the Dragon Palace of the East China Sea came out immediately. He saw a person who became a spirit from grass and trees. Why do you want to become a human? You can practice cultivation by becoming a human, right? I really can't figure it out. What do you think of it and what do you write about it? This is why no one looks at you
In order to ruin the path to immortality, a person whom I have known for only a few days casually teaches the skills.
Before Chapter 24, it was said that the protagonist was aloof from the world, but in Chapter 25, he fell into the mortal world inexplicably and made a secret promise to Tian Qifang? Can it be normal?
This book is not exciting, it is boring to read, and it also contains some poisonous points. For example, when saving people, Li committed suicide and was later rescued by the protagonist. The author interspersed Li Yueya's feelings for Li in the plot. Personally, I was not moved at all. It was a transaction in itself. We did not have a deep friendship but did things beyond the transaction value. The protagonist did not feel like an old weirdo who had been cultivating for eight hundred years. There is also a highly toxic bet. First of all, the bet is unfair but the protagonist accepts it. If he wins, he will become a useless apprentice. If he loses, he will walk back to Chang'an barefoot. Ordinary people should not accept this unbalanced bet. After reading the previous chapter, I guessed the development of the plot, and the result was as I expected. It was similar to the routine of other novels. The protagonist did not want to accept a disciple after winning the bet, but Zhou Pian wanted to become a disciple, which suddenly shocked me. Of course, poison will not kill you. A benevolent person has a different opinion and a wise person has wisdom. If you are reading this book, please don't read this chapter. Everyone in the comments is a master. They can criticize you whether they are poisonous or not (not to ridicule, but to admire). You will not be able to stand it. The writing style of this book is still good, and the wording and writing can surpass 99% of the writers who started it. However, the plot needs a lot of polishing. I hope the author's next book will be better.
Watching the magical power to cross the world, the beginning was novel, but when I saw the story of Li Cao, I couldn't stand it anymore. The reason is very simple. The story is unsatisfactory and rambling, as is the case with every story. Moreover, the plot twists are abrupt, the connection is not smooth, and the reading lacks pleasure.
The new book "Lord of the Book of the Earth" is online. Brothers who like it can read it.
After more than half a year of preparation, the new book "Lord of the Book of the Earth" is online. Brothers who like it can read it. By the way, I have changed into a new vest: I will fly away with my clothes.
I feel like the writing is really good, why is the response so low?
I am the author. If you have any thoughts and suggestions, please leave them below this post.
I am the author of this book. If you have any thoughts and suggestions about this book, you can leave them below this post and I will try my best to refer to them.
When the protagonist first enters the world of mortals, he should have a pure heart, with no evil thoughts, not without likes and dislikes. What the author writes about is the compassion of the Buddha, so all kinds of inconsistencies are immediately apparent.
I'm so handsome that I don't need an explanation.
It's pretty good-looking, nothing sinister about it. Mainly, it's less refreshing.
Is this how it ends? Less than 200 chapters?
Is this the end? I hope the author's next book will be better
This book is good, but why is it so unfinished? There are so few monthly subscriptions due to poor updates? Can the author be more careful?
Eight hundred years ago, Xu Xian rescued Bai Suzhen. Use the spirit of Lihuo from the immortal volcano in the south to besiege Jinshan Temple. What followed was a hundred thousand fire crows burning the gold mountain, and one of them was lucky enough to escape and open a new chapter... Actually, I just want to ask: Have you ever read the book Liaozhai, which has so many stories? I have to go to the end with White Snake and Nie Xiaoqian.
Although I have only read more than 30 chapters, it is rare that there are authors who can calm down and "create" novels with their heart. Today's society is very impetuous. Many readers are more "eager for quick success" and their views are naturally pathological. Therefore, I hope that the author will not be criticized by some novices. It has affected my creative ideas, such as "If someone wants to do something bad to me, I will kill someone immediately", "Kill everyone in the house" and other extreme and extreme mentality. Whether it is spiritual practice or if you want to achieve some achievements in the real society, you must put a peaceful mentality as the priority.
Come on, don't give up! We will always support you! Your writing style is appreciated by everyone. As long as you persist, you will eventually succeed!
It's a pity that it's finished so soon. However, the writing is still very good. The plot and imagination are there. In the future, we can try the origin and return of human beings. I hope to see your new work soon and see your imagination.
This is modern cultivation, world nuclear peace, a world without all ghosts, ghosts, and snake gods. This is the general trend. As a result, you have come out of the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea. Mythical novels are poisoned to death.
The protagonist is a rather doggy hairy crab?
The author writes well, it's a good book but it's a pity that it's not famous
Are you out of luck and don't want to write anymore? I haven't even finished writing 4 points and 1 of the setting I laid out before 😅
The writing is very good. I just read the book the day before yesterday and found out that it was finished all of a sudden 😭
The protagonist was a sea crab at first, then a lake crab, but why did he become a river crab inexplicably?
I can't see any new books, what's going on, river crab? ?