Harry Potter and the Magic City

Newborn babies can open their eyes. And has light blonde hair. Do you still want to have neat little white teeth? Is this a ghost story?

HP fans don't like to mix Chinese elements into their words, just like when there was serious incompatibility between men and women in ancient my country, a blond man with blue eyes suddenly appeared and said, "Honey, let me kiss your little mouth." Later, the protagonist went to Germany blindly, dyed his hair black, and called him Qin Heng. He was initially persuaded to quit and was unable to accept it. Friends who have the same requirements as me should be careful when entering this pit, because it may waste your time, but the writing is still very good, partly because of my own reasons.

Dear readers: The Book Friends Circle has established a revision progress report building for the entire chapter. The author of the revised chapters will explain it in the progress building. (With the revision of the plot, there will inevitably be problems with the content of the two chapters before and after. Please bear with me. A total of one hundred and fifty-eight chapters need to be revised.

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Was Chapter 25 written by the same author? A British man went to Germany and used a Chinese name! The English Channel was suddenly opened to traffic in the 1990s! Germany is surprised to find a contract to sell oneself! Does the author have a grudge against the readers? It's okay to revise and revise it now. I guess many people got off the car after seeing this. The front is indeed very good.

It's a very good book, but in the 30th chapter, there is an extra chapter 29, "The Hope of Recovering Sight", which seems to have been changed. There is also a person named Qin Heng who suddenly appeared in it. I was very confused when I read it. I hope the author will pay attention and correct it.

Why does the protagonist's name Adonis change to Qin Heng in chapter 28? It's a bit awkward

Seeing that the three brothers and sisters were not grouped together, it was a bit hard to accept, so I ran away 😅

I asked what does it mean to use a Chinese name in Germany? Does the protagonist still look Asian? The face of a European has a Chinese name in Germany, and the author is also funny. He also said that he would go back to China to find his adoptive father... Is this a different world...

Although it is very innovative in fan fiction, it is not good at all 🙂

A bit accepting of incompetence 🙂

A bug, Hufflepuff is a lady

Chapter 25 is extremely poisonous. I advise the author to change it. I am not in the mood to read the following chapters at all.

What's the point of writing a plot that's been written badly? People who like to watch it will feel that the sense of substitution is terrible and there is no feeling. Is it just a simple practice? If you want to practice, it is better to create an original world, or the most popular one.

From Chapter 25 to subsequent arrangements, the protagonist's name has changed. Within these few chapters, I just wrote it down, said nothing more, and gave up.

Chapter 14.15.16 The preface is wrong and the postscript is wrong. Please change it.

Really hope to see the complete work.

Students from the two colleges have many different personalities and values, so it should be difficult for them to become close friends! ! Even Harry Potter only has a few friends in Gryffindor House, and his friendship with the rest of his classmates is average! !

The book is very good, and the story is very comfortable. Now I only see the main character going blind and going to Germany, but I am embarrassed to give a standard foreigner a Chinese name 🙂

Just take a breath and wait for the major revision to be completed.

It's very interesting and the ideas are very good. Although it is undergoing major changes, I hope the author can stick to it.

Add it to the bookshelf first and wait for the modification to be completed.

It's been seven months and the changes haven't been completed yet?

The writing is really good, but it's really hard to change the name later. The later chapters are so confusing. I'll read them again after I finish changing them.

Quit, Quirrell turns into Kino, and there are more than 20 chapters left, what is that thing over there...

The writing is too messy. It was originally quite interesting, but it changed the title and plot at every turn, which made people very angry.

How to say, rare

It turns out it's a major overhaul, so I'll add it to the bookshelf first.