Demon Venerable: Starting as a True Disciple

I spent 5 minutes scanning the first three chapters and saw the shadows of Dao Zhengfeng, Dao Lord: Starting from the High-grade Golden Pill, Xuanjian Immortal Clan, Wanfa Wujiu, Xuanxiao Immortal Lord, and Yusha. I wonder if there are Daoguo, Taihao, and Immortal Gourd in the back... The evaluation of the writing style is relatively dull and lacks the true classical fairy tale flavor. , But as a meal replacement, it can satisfy hunger in the presence of peers A few paragraphs have a sense of sluggishness and slight language problems. Fortunately, as an old bookworm, you should have the ability to smooth out sentences on your own Overall, I will give an evaluation of the three levels of Dzogchen Peak in the early stage of Liangcao. Keep it for now, and wait for 4.5 Million words before starting to slaughter.

Yes, much better than some of the shit on the list.

The protagonist is a golden elixir at the beginning. He has stitched together many novels and understands them all. Generally speaking, the writing is quite good. As the introduction says, I do whatever I want, and I really write the magnanimity of a prodigy. There is no cliché of robbing others of opportunities because I don't like it, and it has a feeling of classical cultivation, but it is not that. As a demon cultivator, you don't have to use storylines to show all kinds of murders and evil deeds, you can just do whatever you want. The various layouts and plans in it are reversed again and again, and the supporting characters are also written with flesh and blood and thoughtfulness. The protagonist's arrogance and calculations as a prodigy of demons became famous all over the world after the battle of Sanjiang City; Chang Wuyu refused to be weaker than others, from indulgence to sexual desire; Lin Xianyu hid the sword for 20 years, and the tyrannical and domineering power of the Sixth Patriarch of the Demons, Zhou Xingjian's Zhou Xingjian's old country, but his destiny was restored, is worth watching ps. When will it be released?

First of all, the review has already stated that there is no female protagonist, but your entire female supporting role is stuck on it. What do you want me to think? Is this female supporting role here to play with the villains? Moreover, there is no female protagonist and there are so many male supporting characters so early. The main character is either a lesbian or gay.

Killing Decisively, Not Holy Mother, this book is generally very good! But there is one point that I don't quite understand: Is that little green snail demon trying to disgust people?

Finally found it, this is how a demon cultivator should be. Finally, it's not the kind of novel that pretends to be handsome and cool, and describes how cold-blooded, ruthless, and murderous it is. The result is a diaosi novel that is covered in the skin of a demon and contains fake fiction that pretends to be bad.

Isn't the part where the protagonist kills the dragon girl pretty good? This is already better than most of Qidian's books

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Focus on the protagonist, this is not a group portrait. During the chaos, there are many supporting roles. Forcing people to watch. You can write it like this, follow the protagonist all the time, and a simple explanation is enough when used. Not worthy of description. The main line is slightly weaker. Short-term goals, medium-term goals, long-term goals. The protagonist's background, relatives, love, etc. Are not explored in depth. Basically not given. Everything else is fine. It is an above-average level among fantasy novels. The sense of anticipation is slightly weaker, which is why the main line is not clear. General fantasy, I like to use hate villains to pull it off. Nothing else to say. Overall middle and upper endowments. Just shy of the top level. The top ones either have outstanding emotional outbursts or have profound themes, and the plot is worth recalling. It also takes some opportunities. However, it's not bad. The subsequent development is really hard to guess, and the sense of goal is weak. It is so necessary to draw up a main line. With the main mission, this book will be more secure. The reader's expectations are somewhat empty. Therefore, the author must give readers a reason to read on. The main line is. For example, the commonly used villains are hateful, and the readers will feel like they are watching you push the villain. The technique is mysterious, I hope you can practice it to show off. Wait It still depends on how the author wants to write it. The plot tension is not enough. The conflict is not intense enough. In other words, if there is no hatred, pushing the villain will not be very satisfying. In a normal range. Insufficient wave power. Okay, okay. I am here to find faults. You may not find many faults with it, but this book is good. It's actually pretty good. If you have a progressive attitude. I definitely only like to read criticism.