Giant Door Scroll

There is no plot of fighting with people.

Going back a few volumes, I can't forget it. I have to say that the author's group portraits are really good, especially the group portraits of the secret passage of the Fountain of Youth. They are bold and not lacking in technique. You can really see a martial arts scroll unfolding in front of people's eyes, which makes people's eyes bright. This huge world view can make people get involved in the protagonist and think about what to do next to resist the powerful enemy. The protagonist's The method is also extremely novel, with many strange magic weapons to use, and the wandering adventures of the protagonist, which arouse readers' interest in reading very well. This book, a few years ago, would definitely dominate the list. Even now, with twists and turns, the concept of the story is not comparable to ordinary books. This book can be written longer and can be written for a long time. Although the updates are unstable, I still encourage the author to work hard!

The description of blood money in the original article is extremely shocking, giving me a feeling of watching Cthulhu, unknown, mysterious, supernatural, and a special sense of mystery revealed by human stupidity. The mysterious half-human and half-demon monster in the original article is very uncomfortable to read, especially the method of practicing blood money is like a person practicing evil, especially the feeling of restraint. This article with low overall combat power is simply supernatural, just like other people's fanatical exploration of the unknown abyss of money. Bu devours people and leaves only a blood money. Those who are unwilling are like losing their minds and feeding themselves to a monster. The feeling is comparable to the description of the Taichu ancient mine in "Shading the Sky". It is extremely crazy and rational. If there is inspiration to describe it below, I can't imagine how crazy the events caused by this blood money are. It has already described the taste of Chinese horror. In short, it is very attractive and can become one of the mysterious forces after the protagonist becomes stronger.

The lone star hangs alone in the dark night, and the evil spirits come to make life difficult. The cold light shines on the silent shadows in the sky, and it is hard to find dreams when you are alone in the world. The heart of the wind and the remaining clouds is broken, and the tears shed across the stars are even more true. Where in the world is the way home? The lonely shadow asked the people to the moon.

The front is okay, but the back is a mess

Both the level of the magic weapon and the level of cultivation are in chaos. If you can't create your own creation, you can learn from the settings of other classical cultivators. What are they written about?

I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not online and he knows how to be tracked. Why not throw away things that can be tracked? Then why do you write the text about why he is being tracked? Also, when writing about self-deprecation, I use "hehe", which is a bit speechless!

It's terrible. It's obviously a good book, but why are so few people reading it? Is the traditional stream of cultivating immortals really so weak? The recommendation list is full of cool articles. I am really worried about my book. I also write about traditional cultivation of immortality😅

It's really well written, I don't know why so few people read it.

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I can't stand watching anymore. It's such a cruelty. I had an adventure at the beginning but was ruined by the author. Then I was assigned. I recovered some skills and learned how to make weapons. Then I was tricked by my friends and was arrested and locked up to make weapons for many years...

The protagonist has cultivated to the point of being a Nascent Soul monster, but his IQ seems to be that of someone who just came into contact with cultivation. He is confused about everything. Although he is not mentally retarded, he looks very awkward as he has the same IQ as a doctorate of a primary school student!

After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist first turned from a genius to a loser. He thought he was going to rise, but in the end he became more and more useless and turned into a craftsman. The family competition without the protagonist failed after a few chapters and he was immediately persuaded to quit.

I would like to ask if you have any good traditional articles on cultivating immortals. Please introduce them briefly. Thank you very much.

It's really disgusting. It's laid out a thousand chapters, wasted so much ink, and then married someone else. This kind of plot is so disgusting and disgusting that you shouldn't read this book.

I just want to say that the protagonist loves his mother so much at the beginning that he doesn't go back to see her.

A very, very good book, thank you author

After reading hundreds of chapters, I don't want to read anymore.

After reading a few chapters, it was as bland as water. The beginning was a bit unclear and very discouraging. No matter what happens later, the beginning should be written well, people will run away

A rare good book on cultivating immortality. The protagonist's plain and tortuous experience resonates with people. What's even more rare is that the character is affectionate and has upright values. The only regret is the ending with Meng'er.

I thought it was a classic fairy tale, but what's the point of writing something like urban love?

Don't brag in the comments section. I can't stand the whole thing. How about this book?

Come on

Come on

By the way, there is still a gap that has not been filled, that is, the red lotus brought out of the Eternal Life Pond, and the forces of the Hanging Temple. There is no detailed description, but one of the senior brothers should be the holder of the Nine Heavens Mysterious Pearl. The old monk has not yet come out of the specific realm, and his previous starry sky instrument should be very similar to the starry sky wall of the Bone King Formation. Liang Chen has a feeling of deja vu, and the starry sky instrument should have the same rules of time and space as a mirror. Later, the author should be able to write about the third-party camp to make up for the pitfalls of Basket Temple. The old monk may have traveled to another interface to fight. He owed Xingjun a favor. I think the old monk's identity is very likely to be related to the Immortal Emperor Xingjun. These characters are on the same level, and his Basket Temple concealment technique is not weaker than the fallen bones of the Bone King. If he fails in the decisive battle later and the protagonist has to run away, he can also be invited to come and attract him, or to win over him, because it may be a mysterious bead that agrees with him.

I really like this book and I really hope there will be a follow-up

Daiyue and Meng'er are both dead, you...

Have you ever read Wangyu's "The Immortal" at the same time? After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel that the two books are so similar, almost as if they were written by the same person.

What happened to the missing soul of the protagonist? Is it possible that the lunatic whom Meng'er and the protagonist went to Fengsha Village to rescue before was the missing soul of the protagonist?

How can you suddenly fall in love with a woman who has killed several monsters together during the Qi training period and keep thinking about her? When you see her in the golden elixir stage, you still keep imagining that she is waiting for you? Are you already in a relationship or something? You can write like this