Online Game: Even the Skeleton Is Unstoppable

I just started reading this book and reached chapter twenty-one. In fact, the book should end here! Although the protagonist is a mother, I still have to say, what is the point of the author portraying such a stupid, ignorant and illiterate person? Let's not talk about the fact that her son is terminally ill and the family is extremely poor. Her son managed to get a 200,000 yuan game store to save himself. She had told her before that from 8pm to 6am, but in the middle of the day, she violently destroyed the game store and dragged her son out for no reason. What did she want to do? It can only prove your stupidity, ignorance and mental illness! He tricked his son into death. If the author hadn't forced the writing, the subsequent result would have been that the game warehouse was violently destroyed and could no longer be used, and his son would have no hope. He would continue his previous life and die after a while!

Damn, it's so poisonous. People who are going to die are still going to school. That's all. There are still people targeting it. I don't know what the author thinks. Do you think all readers are evil?

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit, and I had to go to class even if I was going to die. There were classmates who were looking for trouble, and my deskmate was still an awesome young lady.

I can't stand it anymore. This game can be interconnected with reality. It stands to reason that players all over the world want to join it. However, there is only one novice village and one player city. There are so few characters that it's like one game is only played by people in one city. The game itself is called the battle between gods and demons. It is not divided into camps. There are no cities in the demon world? It would be great if all the protoss players without factions are called Demon Suppressors.

I was rewarded with two hundred starting coins to complain. 1. A novel with so many words will actually give people a retro feeling at the beginning. This can be tolerated. If you don't like the retro style of writing, you can change it. 2. Poison, isn't the protagonist a top student in terms of setting? The first-place guy, why does it feel like he has never played the game before? A typical example of fooling around. 3. There is also a problem with the role of the mother. She knows that her son is playing games to find a chance to survive, but she often forcibly interrupts the games. It is absolutely terrible. 4. If a Korean beauty betrays you, you are really trying to persuade her to quit. Although I know you are setting up a foreshadowing, it is a bit poisonous if you insist on having a woman betray you after such a good article. Summary: I haven't finished reading it. I was immediately persuaded to quit when I saw the betrayal. I don't want to talk about all the things I wanted to complain about before. I don't care about issues such as forced intelligence reduction. It's still okay to read it as a purely retro novel.

After reading the book review, there are a lot of trolls. I don't know whether it's good or bad. I'll just read a hundred chapters. The writing style is acceptable, both good and bad. The plot is tight enough. There aren't many irritating points. As for the poisonous points... There are too many trolls.

Finally read the latest chapter. The early plot is pretty good in most cases, but the reality-related emotional line is extremely toxic and embarrassing, and the forced intelligence reduction causes extreme discomfort. What to do if it is highly poisonous? Just resist. The writing style in the later stage is worthy of the poison that was resisted in the early stage. In the middle of the film, the tone gradually picks up, the funny writing style gradually emerges, the amount of poison becomes less, and the plot moves towards a funny and novel flow. In the later stage, the reality was that the situation was successfully smoothed out, the disinfection was successful, and success was achieved. Unfortunately, not many people persisted to this point. In general, after seeing the later stage, I basically forgot the poison I suffered in the early stage, so I rated it highly. Next month's monthly pass will be given to the author as a token of encouragement.

The gameplay part is pretty fun, but other parts are really toxic. For example, Pig's Foot's mother repeatedly hindered Pig's Foot's progress in the game... The first time because Pig's Foot lay like a corpse in the game barn, the mother was too worried about smashing the game barn? What stuff? ? ? The game warehouse is not cheap (the pig's feet are not from a good family), and what if I break the conductor or something and kill the protagonist? Aren't you afraid that if the game is suddenly interrupted, the pig's cranial nerves will be damaged and become a vegetative state? The second time Pig's Foot's mother kept waking Pig's Foot out of the game just to let Pig's Foot pick up girls? This game has been proven to save your son's life, but you still treat the game played by Pig's Feet as an ordinary game, are you afraid that Pig's Feet will become addicted to the game or something? The same goes for Pig's Knuckle. He is clearly set to be a top student, but he doesn't look like one at all. Games have proven that he can affect reality (making money, curing diseases, getting bug artifacts from the game and bringing them into reality, etc.). Pig's Knuckle is almost out of life, but there is no sense of urgency, no planning, no strategy. He just plays around based on feeling and treats it as an ordinary game? Although his family background is not good, he doesn't make good use of the game to make money, and yet he gives the money to NPCs in a "cool" manner? Okay, now that I'm done venting, let's talk about the advantages of this book. The game part is very interesting, and the pig's feet are also funny (but it doesn't fit the setting. After all, pig's feet play games to cure diseases, and they shouldn't be so wasteful in their leisure time). And I like the skeleton mage. If you ignore the poisonous points, it's still an interesting little white novel.

I know you can change it, but there are too many poisonous points in the early stage. How many people can really see your subsequent plot? To be very cruel, if you write it like this in the beginning, you will wonder if there is too much water in the end? Alas, what is the purpose of writing? Is writing really about making money? Why don't you write a love story? I've been wanting to say it for a long time. Emotions can be programmed into language, but there's no need. I think I'm very bland. As expected, this book will also go into the trash, just like what it is. Am I wrong? Maybe I'm wrong, but at least I think I'm right. Is that enough? It's not enough, but this is okay

Good review, I don't know if I am a novice writer, this level is not easy. The plot of the game is basically non-toxic, very coherent, strong substitution, the bladder and pelvic space are crazy, and the paper burning damage is a big thumbs up, but the realistic plot is too toxic, and it is overwhelming. In the beginning, the teacher and the principal support the protagonist, but in the later part, he is discouraged because of several forces. It is not good, it is not good. I suggest newbies not to go hand in hand with reality and virtuality. Reality is compressed, and just write about the protagonist and quiet daily life. Happy I feel that the author is not suitable for writing realistic conflicts. There are too few character descriptions, but Compass is so cute to me. Hahahahaha. It is best to make some preparations before the school beauty turns her face, such as "showing thoughtful eyes" and "the eyes darken, become gloomy, and the smile disappears." Lost, staring coldly at the protagonist's back." Because the subsequent twists and turns make people look confused and caught off guard, but it's good. Don't fall into the footsteps of the urban school beauties, that's the two hundred thousand, and find the mirror. Didn't he even explain it when he dropped out of school? I love digging graves. I am invincible in digging graves. I like the mean but optimistic protagonist. I wish the terminal illness never recovers and let the legend continue. Hahahahahaha