Online Game: Even the Skeleton Is Unstoppable

I just started reading this book, and I've reached chapter twenty-one. Honestly, the book should have ended there! Although the protagonist's mother is a mother, I still have to say, what's the point of the author creating such a stupid, ignorant, and illiterate character? Not only is her son terminally ill, but the family is also desperately poor.

Damn, that's really vicious. Someone who's about to die is still going to school. And to make matters worse, people are targeting him. I don't know what the author was thinking. Does he think all the readers are idiots?

The first chapter is enough to make you want to quit. You're about to die but you still have to go to class, and there are classmates picking fights with you. Your deskmate is a domineering young lady.

I can't take it anymore. This game is supposed to be interconnected with reality, so theoretically players all over the world should want to join. But there's only one starting village, only one player city, and the number of characters is so small it's like the whole game is only played by people from one city.

I gave 200 Qidian coins to come and complain. 1. Novels with so many words often have a retro feel at the beginning, which is tolerable. If you don't like retro writing styles, you can choose another book. 2. Poison, isn't the protagonist supposed to be a top student? The kind who gets first place? Why does he act like he's never played a game before? He's a typical example of playing aimlessly.

A quick glance at the reviews reveals a plethora of trolls, making it difficult to discern the good from the bad. After a hundred chapters, the writing style is acceptable, a mixed bag of strengths and weaknesses, the plot is tight with few dull moments, but as for the flaws… there are just too many trolls.

I've finally found the latest chapter. The early episodes were mostly decent, but the realistic emotional storylines were undeniably toxic and awkward, with the forced intellectual decline causing extreme discomfort. What to do about highly poisonous substances? Just tough it out. The later writing style does justice to the earlier portrayal of enduring poison.

The gameplay itself was quite fun, but other parts were truly awful. For example, the protagonist's mother repeatedly hindered his progress in the game... The first time, because the protagonist was lying in the game pod like a corpse, the mother was so worried that she smashed it? What?!

I know you can revise, but the early chapters have too many major flaws. How many people can actually see the rest of the story? To be blunt, with the beginning so badly written, it makes you wonder if the later chapters are just filler. Sigh, what's the point of writing? Is it really just to make money? Why don't you write romance novels? I've wanted to say this for a long time.

Positive review. I don't know if this is a novice writer, but this level is quite impressive. The game's plot is mostly without flaws, very coherent, and highly immersive. The crazy butt-pounding scenes in the bladder and pelvic space, and the burning paper damage are great. However, there are too many problematic realistic elements, such as using power to oppress others.