The Endless Shop of the Apocalypse

It is indeed a wonderful book, but the author killed the heroine in order to change the protagonist's personality (she was portrayed as a heroine). In a settlement, many people may not be able to bear the abandonment of the book. The author must have suffered a lot of grievances (don't blame the author, I also complained about it and wanted to give up). When I went to VIP, I also watched pirated copies because of this poisonous point. I saw that the protagonist's personality completely changed because of this incident, so I came back to subscribe.

Xia Zhenzhen was actually written to death by you. Do you have to kill your sister to become enlightened? You are not a master, and this is not a script. It will lose fans if you write it like this. I'm leaving.

All booked. The front is fine. At first, the protagonist was a rookie, so although he had a certain amount of power, he didn't know much about people's hearts and the end of the world. He ignored many details, which led to serious consequences. These are acceptable, after all, the protagonist is not from God's perspective. The middle part is also good. Build your own power, and then rely on the system to guide and lead mankind in the general direction to become stronger. Later, the writing is a bit messy. It can be said to be unfinished. The kind that ended in a hurry. Finally, after killing the monster that traveled through space, the protagonist takes the war pet dog into the crack. The war pet dog is smaller than the monster, so the protagonist is even smaller. As a result, when he passes through the space crack and reaches the other side, in terms of volume, from the perspective of a passerby, it is found that the front and rear volumes of the war pet are definitely different.

It's so poisonous. In more than a hundred chapters, two people who had a relationship with the male protagonist died. Haha, it's so poisonous.

When I saw Xia Zhen die, I felt like killing the author! ! ! Why write her to death, why can't you take her with you to the apocalypse? Really sad. Abandon the book decisively! ! !

It has been clearly analyzed that only the alienator and the knife can be effective, and there are only a few murderers in the range. They also know that Zhu Can's behavior is suspicious, and they also discovered that Yang Yi has a problem and is related to Zhu Can. In this case, he does not give special treatment to Zhu Can. This is stupid. Not to mention taking it down directly, at least find someone to monitor it. Moreover, after Luobo's death, he knew clearly that it was an internal crime, but only a few people did not search their rooms. Their part-time IQs were as low as ****, and they kept Xia Zhen at the base even though they knew that there was an alienated traitor who challenged his authority. He really wanted her to die, and there was nothing he could do.

To be honest, this book has a good idea, but it didn't last until it was put on the shelves. I felt that there was no need for so-called evidence in Zhu Can's case. The pig's feet had an impressive IQ and the sperm had a brain. This was barely acceptable. Even if Li Li died, I could accept it. Xia Zhen's death was really unacceptable. I don't know if others have persuaded me to quit. Anyway, I was persuaded to quit.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is not the mutation of the supporting characters, nor the slow progress of the protagonist, but the sudden short-circuit in the protagonist's brain, whore* a bitch, and he actually took her into a secret car, and even exposed everything about himself in front of a strange woman. Is this protagonist a sperm worm? After seeing this, I decisively gave up. If you want to criticize, feel free to criticize. Anyway, this is my personal opinion. I hope the author will change it. This is a very poisonous point. I have no problem with you taking Xia Zhen there. Regardless of whether it is true love or not, at least she is a virgin and she is sincere to you. Either delete this paragraph altogether, otherwise it will make people very uncomfortable to see it. Also, I find that the protagonist is becoming more and more like the villain in the movie. I feel that there is a righteous and powerful protagonist out there waiting to become his enemy. Okay, none of this matters. I hope the author will write better later. The woman named Li Li can actually be passed. Also, not only men can mutate in the apocalypse, but women can also mutate as humans. You can also become strong and independent in order to survive. Women are not just accessories. It seems that all the women in your story are men's slaves, including Xia Zhen. There are many powerful women in Resident Evil, Slayer Archetype, The Walking Dead, and in the apocalypse. In this book, you can completely create a female hero. She doesn't have to be the heroine, but her fighting power is very strong, even better than some mutated men. I believe that such a woman would be very popular as a heroine. It is not very good to join forces with powerful forces. As the saying goes, men and women can work together without getting tired. The heroine also needs to be considered again and again.

I really admire this author. He was able to make a protagonist so disgusting. I was totally convinced. Especially the first few chapters were so disgusting. Xia Zhen really didn't deserve to die. The plot was so speechless, so I decided to abandon the book.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I feel that there is something wrong with the logic. Since what is most needed in the system store is money and gold, and you have an awesome truck, why not go directly to banks, gold stores, etc., Instead of searching for small shops on the street. The only time I went to a bank, the bank only had more than a hundred thousand. Even if it was only a few hundred thousand, there must be at least several banks in a town. There are always at least a dozen in the county, let alone the urban area. I took a rough look at it and forgot whether the protagonist was in a town or county, but there couldn't be only one. The distance is not too far, not to mention there is a car.