Wizards and Elemental Magic

When I saw the author saying such corny and disgusting words as "If you are not convinced, write a book yourself", I decided not to read his works.

Then I would add something very serious, since there is no female protagonist, can we add a male protagonist?

In fact, I think that if the magic world really exists, then it is inevitable that elemental magic will be slowly replaced when modern magic appears (not completely replaced). Elemental magic should be used more in wars. Modern magic can also be called micro magic. Its fine operation and universal applicability can be used in large quantities in daily life, whether it is of great help to industrial production or other things. Moreover, the qualification requirements for micro magic are far lower than those for elemental magic.

I think the Taiwanese translation of "Harry Potter" is more interesting and interesting. The first one I watched was the Taiwan version, so I was very impressed. The front is the mainland version and the back is the Taiwanese version. Draco Malfoy-Draco Malfoy (very vivid, and more accurate transliteration than the mainland version) Snape - Snape Ron Ron Slytherin - Slytherin Hufflepuff-Hufflepuff (the transliteration is the Taiwanese version which is more accurate, there is no pronunciation of ch at all) Mirror of Erised - meaning thinking mirror (taking into account the transliteration, but also a bit of a literal translation, you know what it means literally)

After reading Chapter 9, I discovered a serious problem - characters other than the protagonist all have a common catchphrase "oh", and they always add "oh" when speaking. This also makes many characters look like faces and have no characteristics. It is recommended that you read a chapter after you finish writing it, or you can just read the character's lines and dialogue. At least the dialogue should be consistent with the character's personality, the character's psychological activities at the time, and the environment he was in.

Is this a soul from another world that traveled to HP? ? The title is so deceptive, I thought it was the protagonist from Earth who traveled to the Elemental Continent and then traveled through HP again!

The protagonist's background and upgrade speed are set reasonably, and the main line is also very clear: to become stronger and protect your family! ! The various adventures with Harry are just because of the relationship between friends, and they are also more exercises. Unlike many HP fans who simply change the three-person group to a four-person group in order to hug Harry's lap, and copy the original work in other places, this book is much better (at the same time, I hope the author will not forget the main line and change the article into just following Harry at all times for the sake of adventure. That would be boring) At the same time, this book puts forward a relatively feasible plan for the growth of magic power. Unlike many books that set magic power to simply increase with age, what is the rate of growth? When will it grow? Why do some people have more magical powers than others as adults? Many books on the above issues, including the original ones, do not provide specific analysis. They only talk about them vaguely and cannot be quantified. . . .

Isn't it too early to be shattered into pieces? The damage is a bit high. You are only in the second year. Isn't the second year the petrification spell? Lupine only taught the magic and other weak spells in the third year. In the second year duel club, he also used the disarming spell.

Don't be afraid of your jokes, I first saw this book from a certain recommendation column. The recommendation column was missing one word because of its small space, so I thought the name of this book was "The Wizard and the Elemental Bottle". I thought it was a Dark Souls fic, so I clicked in, so... Hehe..._(ÒωÓ๑ゝ∠)_

I came here when I saw that there was no heroine. It turned out that after reading more than ten chapters, there were many typos. Can you read it yourself and correct the typos before posting?

When I saw that there was no female protagonist, my eyes lit up and I decided to take a look. Really, although feelings are beautiful, they are too difficult to control. Many authors have beautiful imaginations, but when they are written they are terribly embarrassing and become poisonous. So being emotionless is the way to go.

After reading a few pictures, I wonder why there are so many exclamation points in punctuation. . Put an exclamation point after any sentence

Brother, can you please change your name to the normal version? It's very uncomfortable for us to see you like this, and we don't have a sense of immersion.

The protagonist is a bit weak. He gathered magic power seven years earlier than other wizards. As a result, he was out of blue and Rocky was only slightly injured. And the ice magic is so unique and conspicuous that you can guess who the protagonist is no matter what you do. Considering that we are facing the Dark Lord, can we major in the light system and minor in the thunder system? The ice element is really weak and obvious.

In my impression, the characteristics of a mage are fireballs and sheep transformation→_→

Why is Slytherin written as Slytherin? Ron was written as Ron?

If there is no heroine, are there other features to fill it in? Is it a passionate brotherhood or a plot, or is it the study of farming? Is the plot very special? Does the character stand out? Is the writing style superb? After reading every volume, they are all average. I hope you find something you are good at or like. Only by hiding your weaknesses and skills can you go a long way.

Ask a question! Is Pigfoot a mage? ? ? Can you fireball? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?