Xiaoyao Shenta
逍遥神塔
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
20Recommends
0Fans
1Chapters
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Your Magic Weapon Version Is Too Low!
Guixuxuanji
Immortal Travel
Xuanjun
The Reborn Fashion King
Night Without Borders
Corpse Hunter
Fusion of Wolf Spider Genes, Killing Like Crazy on the Russian-Ukrainian Battlefield
Live Forever as a Cat
In the Name of Supernatural Power
Defeat the Entire World with the Power of a Dragon!
Gou Became a Saint in the World of Martial Arts
Full-Time Fisherman
Rebirth 82: I Can See the Future of Others
A future great author!
Punctuation marks
Application of punctuation marks. Can discourse and code words be distinguished by punctuation marks?
Thanks to friends who collected and recommended me ~ your encouragement is my motivation to write a book
Thanks to "I'd rather be alone", "Saha Passer" 1970, I love listening to v music, Bu Wenfeng Book friend 20171104135504399, Six Paths Traveler, what can you get from reading, please update more Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes
Tell me how I feel
1 The protagonist is a courier, and it is written at the beginning that he is being urged to get married. But this sentence seems to have nothing to do with what follows. You can write that the protagonist is sent to deliver a courier before the blind date, which will look more natural. 2. The cover has too many colors and looks very cluttered. 3 There are a lot of punctuation errors...
The writing and conception are very smooth, and I look forward to the exciting follow-up...