Rebirth 82: I Can See the Future of Others

I've read it, but I don't like it. Chapter 1: The family is separated. Speechless

I really can't stand watching it. What the hell are you abandoning?

The author's views are extremely incorrect! The master's daughter was stimulated by her boyfriend's cheating. The author actually thinks that even men won't like women who are too persistent. Is this what people say?

The narrative needs to be concise. I felt it was very wordy when listening to the book. Delete the obsession in Chapter 31. In other words, as a reader, I don't like plots where I lose control the most. Don't even mention the obsession in the previous chapter. It's a poisonous point. Originally, the previous description of integrating into a family after time travel was very natural, but your obsession with it detracts a lot of points. I don't think there is any problem with other things. The chronicle must be explained slowly. In addition, the main line must be clear. Do you want to develop in the factory, become a high-level person step by step, or go into business and become a rich man? There must be a focus. At present, the main line is a bit vague, which makes me as a reader less expectant, so that the plot is a bit boring to read, and it all depends on the system to push out small plots. Come on, author!

Chapter 1: Dissuade me from quitting. I find it is really difficult to move into an orphanage now that I don't have a starting point.

Where does the family affection come from? A person from time travel. Since it is unfair to divide the family, it will be lonely. Seems contradictory? No wonder the popularity is low. It was not clear from the beginning

Separate family pulls, or chronological system document

Chapter 1 said about the bloody separation of families. I thought there was some unfair distribution. There was no one who specifically cheated the male protagonist. It was just an objective situation that he had to move in because he was pregnant. The family was pretty good to the male protagonist. A little concession was nothing. Moreover, the eldest brother's parents also tried their best to compensate. It sounded like he had been wronged a lot.

You are reborn and you still need a stupid system. Unless you are reborn, it is not a big problem to become a rich man. Foreign wealth registers a lot of companies on some messy islands, and then cross-shares each other, and then sets up a company in China to hire yourself every month and pay your own salary. Don't be too happy. All real estate, luxury cars, etc. Are all linked to companies, and no one can do anything to you!

This author is so good! Typos are a trivial matter, but the confusing narrative ability is really speechless! I have the general ability to tell stories, but my writing skills are terrible! Personally, I suggest you write slower. If that doesn't work, you can use AI to summarize and refine it! Look, they're all free! What does it mean to be exempted from writing a few million words? This shows that this book is basically useless! There is no future!

I'm super powerful. Please give me something good for free.

It's too complicated. Is there a main plot? I haven't read it for a few days and I can't remember anything.

The poison was released in the first chapter. The protagonist was separated from his family at the beginning and was driven to a warehouse to sleep. The protagonist still understands that the family of the original owner can comfort himself? I think you, the author, are really in need of love! ! !

I know why it's free. Why is this kind of garbage written? Why doesn't the author read what he writes before posting it? He's crazy for money.

What kind of book should I write at this level? I'm afraid it will make me drool after eating 😰

There is a formula in this novel: if nothing happens, the system will issue a mission for good people and good deeds. Basically, one or two a day can be repeated indefinitely. We trolls can't complain about doing good deeds🍅

The rest of the writing is okay, but what are those jeans called Canglong Ao Pants? Aren't you embarrassed that you're not the author?

I see that many people are complaining about the lack of decisiveness in dividing families. How should I put this? In fact, this is a normal phenomenon. In rural areas, when the older generation still had absolute decision-making power, they would not be able to separate families despite several quarrels or even years without saying anything. But I have never gotten past Chapter 3 🤭, a compulsory system text. Very few people read it now, and it's so frustrating. The main reason is that you have to go somewhere at any time, you have to go as soon as you throw away your chopsticks while eating, and you get beaten by your father. It's just a matter of saving people. If it were for other things, you would have to be regarded as crazy. When I was a child, there were two of these in the village. I would just tie them to a tree and watch them for three days. Those three days can kill half of my life 🙂

The writer has no basic qualities. The screen is full of typos.

No wonder it appears on a free platform while still being serialized. It's like keeping a running account, every little thing about the system. Who wants to read it? The plot is draggy, the pacing is poor, the writing is poor, poor, poor!

What was written? The first chapter persuaded people to quit. The writing was so lacking in love.

In the wolf pack of 800 wolves in Chapter 308, an adult wolf eats about 3-5 kilograms of meat. Based on the minimum 3 kilograms, 800 wolves eat 2.4 Tons a day, and 876 tons a year is equivalent to about 175 elephants.

Stop describing the main character's brother who is greedy for money and is greedy for petty gains. It's annoying to watch and he keeps showing up.

Understand?

Understand?

They are all typos. I posted them without proofreading, which directly discouraged most people. Also, write less about love and love. If you can't write it, don't write it. Will it drive all readers away? If you continue like this, no one will read it. It would be strange if the novel doesn't enter the palace.

The content written by the author during this period is too watery, giving the impression that the word count is too much. A little more refined is better.

What will be the result of the separation?

Almost every PS, are there so many digressions? It affects the sense of listening and reading...