Super Ninja System

The worst Naruto fanfic I've ever read First of all, his wife can beat him up. There is no shame in it at all. Is it necessary to read this kind of novel?

How to say it? As a bookworm for almost nine years, this book is really too toxic. Although I don't know the author's specific outline, the protagonist is so fucked up. After reading three chapters, the protagonist is completely like a saint. He has no temper. He sneaks away and says goodbye.

Not to mention anything else, I read it when I saw the good reviews, and I speak with conscience, poison! Extremely poisonous! I read a lot of novels, even if they are some trivial texts, or any novels where I can find a few titles by just searching the words on the Internet, but I really can't stand this one. I hope you will be more careful later. I feel that it is a waste of time to read this, and it is very poisonous.

There are so many embarrassing things to complain about in this book! 1: Wearing a time-travel identity but knowing nothing about Naruto! No sense of substitution! It's a bit of a poisoning risk for Naruto fans 2: Various worlds! Chinese and Japanese food connect the characters! It makes the theme of a novel unclear! (Were you a cook before time travel? There are all kinds of endless food! It's really annoying! 3: The system has self-awareness!? I have read too many novels about systems with self-awareness! The reason is obvious! It is controlling you! You are trapped by the system! It is easy to explode in the later stage! Take the Hokage class as an example, he is controlled by a strong man! This is a premise that he does not know! No matter where the strong man comes from! There is a premise that they will not surrender to anything! Even if there is a system System! The strong ones also have a mentality of taking advantage rather than having no sense of crisis like the protagonist! (Although this helps the author's writing! But the protagonist described by the author is too brainless 4: The most important thing is that the author's characterization is really a copy of Naruto! It's just a copy! Change the name without changing the character! (Since you want to set the protagonist to know nothing about Naruto! Don't copy Naruto's character! It's too embarrassing! It feels a bit deceptive

To be honest, the plot is good, but the setting is really bad. Even if the Chidori can't break through the Ninja Armor, what about the evil aura of the Sharingan? The explanation for obtaining the Wood Release is that the Blood Succession Limit is composed of Earth Release and Water Release, while Hashirama's Wood Release is Earth Release plus Water Release plus Yang Release, which is the Blood Successor. Eliminate it, not to mention that the physique has not changed after acquiring the Sharingan and Wooden. It is still the physique that can become a chuunin at the highest level. You really, if not you, this plot is interesting. I can see that you put your heart into it and gave up long ago. Not to mention that you have a lot of typos.

It's poisonous and there's something wrong with the construction of the strength system. Trust me, just quit.

Is the protagonist a modern youth on Earth? I'm afraid not? Young people I know know Naruto even if they don't watch anime very much. Is the protagonist probably a fake Earthling? Maybe it's a parallel world without Naruto

Pure rubbish, highly toxic. The main character is a loser. After getting married, I didn't know how to cultivate hard, I only knew how to rely on the system. I suggest you don't watch it, it's really disgusting.

Author, you should go back to your homework. You just follow others without saying a word about how they start. Do you think this is your fantasy trash?

To be honest, it's a bit embarrassing to form seals in the hungry ghost realm.

I once practiced a peerless martial arts, but unfortunately now the spiritual energy of the world is exhausted, the laws are not revealed, and I have achieved nothing after twelve years of hard training. Now I still remember that the name of that peerless martial arts is called the eighth set of radio gymnastics!

The creativity is okay, but too toxic! Just two things to say 1: Pig's feet traveling through the earth. If you don't know Naruto, it's a bit poisonous, although it's possible you don't know! 2: When fighting one of the two genin hired by the bandits, he waited until his teammates were seriously injured and almost died, and he himself was also injured and almost died with a sword before opening the fourth gate of the Eight Gate Dunjia! Stupid or not? If I open the eighth gate earlier, I think I can win by opening the third gate, right? The pig's feet are seriously trying to hide their clumsiness, but every time they are beaten like a dog, and then they go berserk! What the hell! I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. It always feels like watching Aotu Man fight monsters. He has to be tortured to death before he can use his unique skills!

If the protagonist's strength is to be significantly improved, then tailed beasts can be considered. Not only can the strength be improved, but they can also stage a desperate counterattack.

I saw this Naruto fanfic by accident. As soon as I opened the first chapter, I was attracted by the name of the protagonist. As a descendant of Yan and Huang, I had a strong resonance with this book. I decided to buy this book because of this name! Read on and you will discover the author's unique ingenuity and whimsical ideas. Especially the combat description, the best thing is the use of tailed beasts to defeat the minions. When I saw this, I was completely conquered by the author! What's this! After watching too many routines of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, when I watched this plot again, it was like a stream of clear water slowly nourishing my soul! The lion fights the rabbit with all his strength! There are no routines, only ingenuity! Conscience! Looking at the protagonist San Magatama is still a genin, this is another ingenious design! Everyone knows that three magatama is no longer within the range that a genin can bear, so what is the purpose of writing this? This has to be said about the author's great intentions! As we all know, the routine of general system novels is to rely on the system to upgrade all the way to invincibility, but Da Da does not want to be unconventional. He allows the protagonist to hone his willpower by describing the hardships of enduring the three magatama, telling everyone that we will not stop working hard once we have the system, we must constantly strive for self-improvement! ! ! Dada also has a warm side when writing books. In order to increase the reader's sense of involvement, he changed the writing style to a semi-Chinese fantasy style. Really, I was slightly moved. Big thanks to the author! ! ! Alas! If everyone thinks this kind of book is not good-looking, then you are really blind! ! ! Sorry, I'm blind-_-||

After reading more than half of the book, I feel that the author wants to break away from the plot of Naruto and build a different world view that only retains ninjutsu and the corresponding system. In this case, why should there be such similarities as the Land of Fire and Mt. Miaomu? There are even Toad Dragon and Toadji. Isn't it embarrassing?

The person who set up the time travel actually didn't know about the limited effect of Naruto's blood inheritance. So you set up the time traveler just for the purpose of making delicious food and picking up girls in the early stage? Wooden Release ➕Mangekyo, it can only defeat Jonin. Itachi God can defeat Orochimaru with only Kaleidoscope. Well, Sasuke can beat Jonin with three magatama. Eight Gate Kaihuang can easily beat the Kage level with seven gates. The Eight Gates almost kicked Uchiha Madara to death. Except for the Eight-Tailed Nine-Tails, the other tailed beasts were taken care of by two S-class rebel ninjas organized by Akatsuki. Senju Hashirama's Wood Release is the Blood Succession Limit created by Hashirama's dual attributes of Water and Earth ➕ Yang Release. Well, Senju's Blood Succession Limit has always been the immortal body. After reading more than 400 chapters, the protagonist still has Chuunin Chakra, and the Seven Gates of Armor ➕ Kaleidoscope ➕ Wood Release ➕ Corpse Bone Pulse Shadow Level can't be beaten. It's better to be one-tailed, and Hashirama and Uchiha Madara can't hold down the coffin boards, okay?

Dongfang Yunyang... Is still a ninja... This is no different from the cultivation family calling Xuanyuan Gou Sheng... "Everything in the world is like a chess piece, and the universe is unpredictable. All the heroes are laughing! I am Xuanyuan Gou Sheng, who dares to fight?" 233

I, Dongfang Yunyang, the most wasteful person in history, am now dueling with the Fourth Hokage. I am also a Flying Thunder God, but I am the best. My Flying Thunder God has to form a seal, but I was killed by the Fourth Hokage before I could finish it. The Fourth Hokage looked at him speechlessly, my Flying Thunder God will blind you with Taibai.

After reading the previous point, many people should come in because of Naruto. In fact, you said it is a ninja world, no problem. But since you have set it as a time traveler, then directly set the protagonist to know Naruto and the system. You say you are a time traveler but you don't know anything at the same time. It is better to just be a person from this plane. Because of your poor talent, you later got the rise of the system. Now it's so different, it's a big poisonous point

It's extremely poisonous, the protagonist is useless, and he doesn't want to practice. He didn't even feel any shame when he was knocked unconscious and thrown out on his wedding night. He did broadcast gymnastics in the morning, and then made dumplings. The system sent him tasks to make him stronger. I really don't know what the protagonist wants the system to do. Just go to bed. No wonder I saw this Naruto and thought another good book had been buried. It turns out that the protagonist is so useless.

The power of this book is really fascinating. The pig's feet have two magatama sharingan eyes, and the left and right hands have a rasengan. A Chidori, his chakra is at the chuunin level, his sword skills have reached the chunin level, he has killed several chunin, he has completed the task, he has opened three magatama, and he actually got a special code, his strength can barely compete with the chuunin, the strength in this world is too terrifying!

This book is really poisonous. It seems to be written by a murderer, as if he would forgive anything except cuckoldry.

I endured reading about two hundred chapters, but I really couldn't hold on. It's quite a novel subject matter and creativity, but coupled with the author's third-rate writing style, the writing style of an elementary school student with a fluent word count. I heard that there is a plot in the back where the male protagonist fakes his death and is raped? This book and I can only get so far.

Tsk tsk, you have the ability to crush the Fujiwara family, but you still make a bet calmly, awesome! How can you bet calmly when others are trying to steal your wife? Are you, the author, just a big turtle?

Why is the author so cruel, mixing the poisonous points of various fantasy and useless genres with Naruto to disgust us?

How come 40,000 people read such a crappy novel?

This is the first time I have ever seen someone with the Sharingan eye open and still need to form the seal. . I almost pee with fear

This kind of novel is completely unreadable and boring to the point of explosion. It's not easy to use Banye as the cover. It's really not good to insult Madara like this. The article is watery. Also suitable for novices only. Xiaobai and the like

A big disadvantage at the beginning is that the protagonist is too cowardly. He just gets married when he says it. There is no sense of experience. If you have passed through it, you have already married into your wife, so just get married. If you have passed through it, you will agree. Accepted

It's okay, you all don't know what poison is. I forgot what it was called. The fiancée of the protagonist was raped when he was weak. The problem is that the fiancée did it voluntarily. The person who raped her was just a powerful loser who didn't know anything except sexually assaulting women. There was also a sister who liked the protagonist and was forced to marry as a concubine. The writing was so sour that it drove you crazy and even Shen Nong couldn't save her.