Rebirth of Primitive Tribe

The opening chapter is so funny and nonsensical, no matter how you look at it. Children's book series

It looked awkward at first, why would you use animal bones to make chopsticks? Nowadays, wooden chopsticks and bamboo chopsticks are used. You are making things difficult for primitive people.

This book is very similar to "My Awesome Primitive". There are also witches and chiefs, first-level warriors, second-level warriors, the Tushan tribe, and hybrid ferocious beasts.

I wanted to give up the book when I saw the part about digging canals. Why not try digging a well? The tribe is not far from the big lake, which means that the underground water system should be very rich. If you dig a well in a low-lying area, you will have a high chance of producing water.

I gave up the book after reading more than a dozen chapters. The author of this book extremely admires Western culture. He is just pretending to be 13, his writing style is not very good, and his vision is short-sighted.

After inheriting the memories and experiences of the witch, I really don't even recognize a fish.

After reading Chapter 91, my head hurts. There are only dozens of people in the tribe, and they are dying here and there all day long. It was probably even worse before the male protagonist came. I can see how many people died after not obeying orders and continuing to fetch water. Based on the frequency of fetching water before ditches were dug, how many people can die, and people don't grow up as soon as they land, so I think there are only a few dozen people in the tribe, but there are actually hundreds or thousands of people.

New author, too many bugs

Children's books, lack of knowledge, immature writing, the evaluation is completed, novices still need to work hard to grow up

It's a eunuch again. What a dog. If you can't write, don't write!

Mosasaurus is a shallow sea creature, why is it in the lake?

I'm afraid this isn't Ark Survival Evolved! Why are the profiles so similar?

This book is really rubbish. The author doesn't even know what he wrote. In the first chapter, he said he inherited all the memories and experiences. In the second chapter, just for the sake of numbers, he said he only inherited part of it.

I have read a few books about primitive people. This book is well written and logically good, but the authors of these books have made a very serious mistake. The primitive people in the Paleolithic and Neolithic periods were in a matriarchal society. The slave society was a patriarchal society. Women were respected in primitive society because men hunted and harvested them. Unstable, women's picking and planting bring a stable source of food to the tribe, and women also need to reproduce. There is nothing to pick in this book. The only thing to pick is that the tribal leader should be a woman at the time. Why is the surname prefixed with the prefix nv?

Does making pottery require a kiln? Is Tao so easy to make? Do you have common sense?

I already lost my appetite after reading the introduction.

It's been a long time since I finished it. I'm reading this book again. I forgot if it was the one who joined the group before. The Green Winged Lion King should be

There is so much nonsense, I am so speechless! There's nothing to see. Let's take a look.

At the beginning, when I saw eating meat with chopsticks, I wanted to go up and slap the protagonist on both ears while he was on the ground. In those days, you would take off your pants and fart. It was so funny.

It is said that it is written about the world of low-level martial arts. There is no one who can break mountains with one punch and kill Tyrannosaurus rex in a circle. But the problem is that according to the power of pure-blooded beasts, isn't it very simple to destroy Tyrannosaurus? Besides, the beast in the lake swallowed the Titan python in one mouthful. With the head of about ten meters, it should not be difficult to kill Tyrannosaurus rex instantly. A fourth-level warrior can deal with pure-blooded beasts. As for the ninth level, will there even be a great totem warrior or totem holy warrior suddenly appearing behind the ninth level totem warrior?

Come on, author, you are the most useless

Overall, this novel is very well-written, wonderful, and fascinating in its description of details. I read the author's "Zombie Doctor" a long time ago and ran to read other books. The shortcomings of this book are that it is too sloppy in terms of the overall picture. The layout is not enough, but it can be regarded as a small masterpiece. If the subsequent plot is well described, it can be compared with "Mad God". That is, writing the Twelve Tribes, the plot was too hastily laid out, and the work was hastily ended, leaving an immature ending. Alas, it also left a lot of regrets.

There are a lot of trolls in the comment area... Here are a few typical ones: Q: Admiration of Western culture A: You should be talking about the part about making knives and forks at the beginning. Let's not talk about whether it is necessary to go online to this extent. First of all, how do knives and forks represent Western culture? In primitive society, due to tool factors, it is impossible to divide food as finely as it is now, so chopsticks are not suitable in this case. What is more needed are tools that can divide food. At this time, knives and forks are the most convenient things. Q: Plagiarism issue A: What are the conditions for judging plagiarism? It's impossible to judge plagiarism based on "witches, warriors, tribes" and other things that exist in primitive societies, right? This is as outrageous as saying that your neighbor has twins because he has twins, so his family copied yours. The conditions for judging plagiarism should be the plot, plot dialogue, etc., Not lower-level things such as power system and environment setting Q: Abandon the book if it doesn't look good A: I said you should abandon the book, why do you have to come here to disgust me? Just because you can't stand it doesn't mean that others can't stand it, right? There are also those who rely on their time to read books and show off their skills. Some people have read books all their lives without bragging about it. How come you have become something to be proud of? Q: It makes sense to see piracy A: Come on, you are quite proud to be a thief. There is nothing you can do about being thick-skinned, right? Then I can't say anything to you, so I can only wish your father to plant loquat trees 25 hours a day.

It's too difficult😰

Borrowing the building to promote the book "Adventure in the Primitive World"

Copying books is no better than copying homework. . . Even the plot was copied, and I was drunk. . "Original War"

I want to continue reading the original text 🙂🙂🙂🙂

There were no humans in the Cretaceous and Jurassic periods

This book did poorly, to be honest. The writing is obviously better than that of the powerful primitive man, who lost the first picture. I am not talking about cannibalism, but I mean that it creates an irreconcilable contradiction, but the author insisted on combining them.