Operating a Cemetery

The protagonist is too low in contact with so many matters of life and death, and he is not incompetent. As a result, the enemy calls and he still cares about the mother-in-law and the mother... Please! They want to kill you! How about this kindness (meaning not to kill, or not using explosive charms), and the setting is also very strange. In the first few chapters, the man who was smashing the ground into pieces became a younger brother when he encountered a gun. Come on, no matter how peaceful the country is, there are still guns. A spiritual person who has been exposed to the dark side of society has no ability to fight against bullets? Are you kidding me? (It only takes a few evil spirits that can affect reality to kill them all.)

Come on, boy, wait for the update

The main plot line talks about the origin of the cemetery. The author's title is to run a cemetery, and Taoism is used throughout the whole text. So I have to mention the funeral book "The Burial Sutra". I think the "Burial Sutra" can be changed to a chapter on Taoism as the protagonist's main practice. The master of the technique is the land wandering immortal. It's quite good to think about it. Author, would you consider it?

The early stage was good, with the old-fashioned cemetery development, interspersed plots of carrying corpses, morgue inns, etc., But it changed as it was written later. Although it is modern, the various plots are a bit too ordinary, a bit like vernacular, and the descriptions are also a bit stiff. Some places will force a wave of explanations. It is obvious that the ancient Chinese style is developed in the early stage, and the names of some skills are too dramatic (emphasis on the names of God's Eyes) Although it has paved the way for further development abroad, it still feels very awkward.

How to put it this way, the setting was interesting at the beginning, but the third golden chapter was a bit anxious and too rushed. It may be due to the relatively small number of words in the chapters. In addition, the characters are too awkward. For example, in chapter 19, even if you want to express that the protagonist is not prepared to promote the subsequent plot, you have to explain why he is not prepared. You cannot be divorced from the motivation and logic of the character's behavior. You can say that he is inflated or even said that he is lazy. Wait, it's okay. At least it won't be so vicious. At most, it will say that your writing skills are not strong enough, but this is acceptable and it will get better gradually. If you act like this now, people will think that you are not sincere enough and have no intention.

Day by day, month by month, I am here again, sending my greetings and support, but it's a pity that I don't have a monthly ticket.

This story is so boring. After listening to more than 20 chapters, I feel dizzy and sleepy. I might as well change my career as a doctor who treats insomnia syndrome.

It's so beautiful. I've reserved this book. I'll give you recommendation votes every day. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

So the broken sentence is dead person/ginseng, not dead/ginseng?

Come on, not many people stick to the new book, I have to fatten it up.

I give you my recommendation votes every day. I also write novels, although I'm not at the starting point, but I know how difficult it is.

It's Lee's Cemetery Story(๑•̀ᄇ•́)و✧

Complain about it! This book left me speechless╯╰! Run a cemetery! It's really difficult! Because in the modern world people are cremated! (That is, burn the ashes and then bury them) But this is not the reason for you to mess around! Incense? Are you kidding me? This is a cemetery! If you add incense to the dead and increase the attributes of the tombstone, it's almost the same -_-||! It's a bit... To have an incense hall! Let's talk about the combat description! In my opinion, the main character is paddling, watching a movie, and watching a movie. One of them can resist two! Convinced┗┃ ■ ┃┛! Then you might as well not write it! It feels like you're losing your word count! And why do other people have Kung Fu and the protagonist acts like a loser! You don't practice zombies, you don't practice, and you still walk around! Mission accomplished! Reward something! How can you activate Palm Yan if you don't have the energy! How to write a talisman! According to what you wrote, if you have bonus skills after completing them, you can use them indefinitely? There are so many vacant positions in the cemetery, why don't you look for ghosts! I've been frozen for so long and I'm still frozen! The ghosts in the cemetery are still so weak! What else to play? I was quite interested in it at the beginning, but as I progressed to the end, I felt that the writing style, combat descriptions, and later development were not as good as they were at the beginning! At the end of the day, it's like just catching up on homework and copying it! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! If you have different opinions, you can leave a message! Or the author can delete the post!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, come and support the new book.

All kinds of illogical, the main character doesn't understand anything and is like a retarded person

The opening chapter 2 is inexplicable. First, the protagonist, his father, an ordinary farmer (nothing else can be found through analysis), is gone. Then the protagonist returns to his hometown, encounters the system, and is about to have a cemetery. The protagonist accepts it, and it is gone. It is gone. Do you understand, there is nothing about the location and size of the cemetery, and the mission starts directly. Digging holes and burying people, what the hell, you have to explain the background clearly no matter what, the plot is not that out of the ordinary, and another thing is that the village is set up for farming, and you suddenly create a cemetery, what do you mean, you curse the whole village to death, just bury it as soon as possible? You said that his father is a grave keeper, even if he is better than this, at least the grave keeper can be said to be the ancestral business That's it, the poison resistance is low, goodbye

Save a little kid and you'll be rewarded with purple and green swords! Then the extra rescuers will be rewarded with the Four Swords of Zhu Xian! ! !

... My name is Shang Yan, and I am the grandson of my grandfather... As the author, you can explain it by saying that I am the grandson of the owner of this room! Saying this sentence will only make people feel that the protagonist has a brain problem... Would a normal person introduce himself and say that I am my grandfather's grandson...

There were too many poison points, and my poison resistance was no longer good, so I said goodbye. See you again.

It's essentially a bit like a horror house, right? Zhang Ya, Liu Ya, their names are so similar

This book looks very good, mainly because the subject matter is novel. There are not many people who write about this subject matter and it is easy to make mistakes. However, the currency system in this book is really embarrassing. If someone abandons the book, it is probably because of the currency system. For example, the protagonist's parents ask the protagonist to go to his grandfather's house to look at a house and give him 10,000 yuan for living expenses for two months. This is normal. Then Aunt Liu's daughter asked the protagonist to help deal with a century-old iron corpse, and the protagonist offered five hundred yuan, haha. Then we have to deal with the immortals, plus the five capable men and strangers of the protagonist, demolishing the house, and facing a catastrophe. How high-end it is. In the end, we are injured and disabled, and the reward is only 12,000! Author, are you kidding me? Or are you saying that you have never seen more than 10,000 yuan in your life, and 10,000 yuan is already a big deal to you?

The author still knows a little about some taboos. It is taboo to extinguish incense in the mouth and avoid two long and short ones, one long and two short. Do not extinguish the incense in the mouth after burning it

It was okay in the early stage, but especially Xuanmen collapsed in the later stage. I praised Xuanmen too high in the early stage, and as a result, Xuanmen was pinned to the ground and rubbed by the forces of small countries. That's fine. After all, they were attacked by a small country. In the end, people actually ran away. The base camp was in a good location and people and people were run away by them. How dishonest it was. I couldn't bear this. The enemy even used helicopters when they ran away. How stupid is the national power in your writing? So many planes were not discovered, and the country did not shoot them down! Alas, in short, pig's trotters, sect's, and national's, any force can push them to the ground and rub them. After reading more than two hundred chapters, I am not in the mood to read anymore. As long as it is a key battle, the enemy will win and we will lose. Whoever is in the mood to continue reading is not at all happy. 🤫

Why does the author's writing make me feel like the Republic of China? Is there still Yizhuang now? And he didn't call the police after discovering the bunker. This operation is 666.

Is this another trendy article? I have a house of horrors

To be honest, I personally feel that this is not opening a graveyard, but killing monsters and completing tasks. . . . . . . And what I personally think is the most poisonous thing is that you are a student! ! ! ! How long are you going to take your vacation? ! ! ! Don't tell me it's not even two months yet in the book! ! ! ! You might as well write about graduating from college in the first place! ! ! !

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Too many flaws. Beating the ghosts to pieces is called salvation. . . . . Can you draw talisman by dipping your fingers in cinnabar? ? ? ? Can you try to draw a talisman with your fingers dipped in water? Why draw symbols when it's difficult to write a word? ? Treat readers as fools

Oh my god! The book is out!