The Lost Continent of Osborne

Originally I wanted to watch it, but Dina turned me away. Dina is so annoying.

The writing is so bad, bro. Is this your first book? It feels like my first book.

Why not John Farrell?

Foreign names look uncomfortable. It's okay, author. Come and take a look at my work "Jin Yong's Heroes Rebellion in the Tang Dynasty". I have collected it.

There is a problem with the basic setting. In a world where individual strength is respected, the principle of aristocratic supremacy cannot exist. Unless the title of nobility is linked to personal strength, the author should first reconsider the basic setting of the book. This flaw is probably the main reason why the book is not pleasing to the eye.

Come on, if it doesn't work, just practice and open a new book

I would like to ask the author, how does he plan to write the heroine of this book? Single heroine, multiple heroines, or a harem?

The first name should not be Xu Jian or Rachel.

Are all naval powers now?

Can the names be unified? If they are different several times in a paragraph, it looks uncomfortable!

I hope everyone will point out the wrong chapter when you find the word "Xu Jian" in the protagonist's name so that this novel can be more complete. Thank you everyone

The writing is quite good. Try to make the protagonist have a higher IQ. The protagonist wants to be a lord. If the IQ and EQ are not high, there will be no cohesion.

Did you see the protagonist's name? Is it foreign? No love anymore