Quick Transmigration: A Thread of Divine Consciousness

This article is really arbitrary. Every story in the end is only half. If you can't finish writing, just change the channel. Just change the channel frequently. The heroine's character changed several times in a short period of time. In the end, it was inexplicable. It was really 6

To be honest, some of the stories are really exciting, and I enjoyed reading them. But the sudden ending and running to the next world is very painful. Wouldn't it be nice to write each story longer? The early stage is so well written, but the middle and later stages are too fragmented. I really can't stand it until the end. It's too fragmented and too messy.

This article is so well written, haha, so good that I can't even read it. These three views are simply unacceptable. In order to create a good image for the heroine, he writes others so viciously and highlights the good qualities of the heroine. This is probably not a mental illness.

Abandoned, not to mention the writing logic or anything else, every story is the same as the big one, only half of it. Maybe I don't have enough experience, and I really can't adapt to this kind of fast-traveling story that has one story and one pitfall, but it's not filled in yet.

After reading this book, I'm afraid I won't want to touch novels again in the near future 😭😭😭I'm afraid I'll be confused if I see this kind of tailless article again

The missing chapter is inexplicable. After reading the pirated version of the supplement, I found that there are no missing chapters or missing chapters at the end, which is almost the same, with all kinds of anticlimactic ends. One plot is not explained clearly before going to the next story... So regardless of whether there are missing chapters or not, it is actually a beginning but no end.

The heroine is too much of a virgin!

The beginning is good, but people who read it are choked from the middle to the end. The whole story is half, inexplicably time-traveled, the protagonist's soul is injured inexplicably, and inexplicably runs away again. The domineering in the early stage, the powerlessness in the later, and the final ending is so sloppy, especially the last few stories are topsy-turvy, always half-written, and filled with all kinds of powerlessness of the protagonist. In the end, the golden finger is gone and he is still controlled. It's so uncomfortable.

I'm really speechless. The heroine has so much spending power, but she doesn't know that she needs to buy a protective magic weapon! He was easily overcome by resentment and didn't even take revenge. Hehe.

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to abandon it. Every subsequent story is abandoned only at the beginning, which is a waste of emotions and money.