Konoha Sandbox Game

Who doesn't know me? He is the author who was overwhelmed by the works of this bastard author. Why do you say that? On the Mosquito Ranking List, I was number one on the first day, but now I'm down to fifth place. Now is the time to spy on the enemy! I read this work of the author, emmmmm, how should I put it, it is a bit like a light novel, but the writing is not exciting, and the heart is not explosive, but the writing is elegant, it looks very comfortable, and there is a little expectation. Why am I being overpowered by him? This author's collection has increased by more than 100 a day! Why! ? 1. I update four times a day, why can't I beat you? I think it should be a matter of background, because the author has written three works on this account and has a certain fan base, so it should be like this... Looking back on the past days, it was so hard! I have no place to complain, so I rushed to you to pour out my bitterness and make you feel better. 2018.2.9 Cute salted fish

Is the heroine Utsunomiya Shion? Followed

I can't stand it after three chapters. It feels like the protagonist thinks there is no other way to learn except picking up boxes. Are you going to school for us to watch?

Just read Chapter 107... I just don't understand why I like conspiracy theories so much? According to Naruto's official character design, it can be basically inferred that the country of whirlpool can only fail to rescue in time. If there were really so many conspiracies, would those families be so united? It seems that the key characters in the entire Naruto series who cannot be clean are Danzo and Zetsu. Don't forcefully darken the role of a good guy...

It's as bland as water, with no sense of expectation. I almost fell asleep while reading it, and the writing is too dramatic.

This is a building that encourages the author🌹

Always feel like reading fantasy novels? ? ? Literate

There is no big poisonous point, and there is no special shining point.

It should be the SB named Yuan Yi

They all follow the plot, but the original plot is too descriptive and a little original. . .

Chunin exam, 9 people? Pig deer butterfly is there. Hinata, Shino, and Kiba are also there. Yu, Naruto, and Sasuke are also there. Sakura is here too. Why are there 9 people? Author, are you kidding me?

In fact, the author's writing is okay, but the plot is very slow and a bit incomprehensible. I really couldn't hold on when Sasuke defected. The early plot can be written, but it is not necessary to completely copy Naruto and write everything. The protagonist's golden finger is not clear, and the future development is also unclear. I can only say that the author should work hard and look forward to better works in the future.

Is the male protagonist stupid and sweet? (Don't watch anymore, don't watch anymore)

After all, most Naruto fans follow the original work at the beginning. Then there are some plots and elements that I designed. In fact, this part is the most important. But the author is a bit clumsy in this part. Only by playing tricks can you become popular. I suggest the author write a new book. If the author is short of money. For this book of yours, one chapter is added every day, and you can write whatever you want. It just takes half an hour every day to type, and the quality does not have to be good. This way you can get perfect attendance and open a new book, so why not do it.

If you want to set the limits of the Blood Successor, you can make a Blood Successor Snare. If not, it would be a good idea to make a Qiu Dao Jade that is comparable to the Blood Succession Snare.

So the question is - where is the fun?

I didn't want to watch it when I saw that I wasn't the Hokage. Do I have to give it to the Crown Prince according to the plot? Does the fan author have a grudge against the position of Hokage? Although you are obviously capable, you still have to awkwardly shirk the blame. Can you use less tricks and more sincerity?

Has the protagonist lost his memory? Simply funny

If the protagonist doesn't cheat, he will become a passerby in the later stage! If you just watched the Chuunin Exams, let me comment!

How does this protagonist become a strong man? Does it depend on the ninjutsu given by others?

The writing is dark. . . . If you want to see the first few chapters of the system, if you want to see new content, Pig's Knuckle is in Class 7. If you want to see hot blood, you are gloomy. If you want to see the explosive slap in the face, you don't have it. . . The more you, the author of this book, are afraid of not writing well and the more careful you are in writing, the more useless the book will be. . . . Come on, the writing is good! Come on come on.

When the protagonist's abilities have not yet taken shape, he has just made a breakthrough and is about to advance by leaps and bounds, he suddenly enters the final battle. The ability training plan originally arranged by the protagonist is all replaced by adventures and gifts from others, and he wins with it. There is no doubt that the author does not want to write it anymore, and the book is unfinished near the end.

Will you be happy if I chat with you?

Come on, come on, it looks good

This Nagato has been strengthened, right... Can Nagato physically bear it? How many times have he surpassed Super Shinra and Earth Blast Star...