Naruto: The Ultimate Cultivation System

Seriously, there's so much nonsense. For example, the author describes in detail how the protagonist extracts chakra like squeezing out shit, but sorry, I'm not interested. I can't practice it even if I read it. There's also a lot of other unnecessary stuff. You break a single sentence into two or three sentences and repeat it several times. This just makes me feel like you're padding the word count.

All I want to say is, when this eldest son was born, didn't Obito Uchiha come to release the Nine-Tails?

It feels like the first twenty-five chapters of yours were just rambling nonsense, nearly ten thousand words long.

It's so weak; the characters and dialogue are incoherent. It feels like something written by someone who didn't even graduate from elementary school, but some elementary school prodigies seem to write better than the author.

Honestly, I was drawn in by the cover.

It's all nonsense. Why write so much just to start something?

The pacing is too slow, the length is too long, and it's too verbose.

Too much nonsense, it feels so long-winded.

Whose cartoon character is on the cover? They're totally my type! *Throws a question*

The White Tiger formation collapsed? That's ridiculous!