Naruto's Strongest Training System

It's really the first person and the third person alternating, I'm really not used to it, forget it, slip away, slip away

Really, there is a lot of nonsense. For example, the author wrote in detail how the protagonist squeezed out chakra to refine chakra. But, sorry, I am not interested. I couldn't practice it after reading it. There is also a lot of other nonsense. You have to break a sentence into two or three sentences and say it multiple times. You will only make me feel that you are cheating on the word count.

I just want to say that when this eldest son was born, didn't Uchiha Obito come to release Kyuubi?

I feel like you were talking nonsense in the first twenty-five chapters. It's nearly 10,000 words worth of nonsense.

It's too watery. I can't understand the characters and the words. I feel like I haven't even graduated from elementary school. However, some top students in elementary school feel that the writing is better than the author.

To be honest, I was attracted by the cover.

The pace is too slow, the text is too long and wordy.

It's all nonsense, how can you write so much in just one thing?

I was persuaded to leave after seeing three pictures, they were too ink-stained.

White Tiger will collapse, that's ridiculous.

Too much nonsense, I feel so verbose

Who does the little guy on the cover come from? He totally likes me. Throw a ball.

There is really a lot of nonsense. What can be summed up in one sentence, but I only used one to describe it. You are awesome, okay, I'm leaving.

You are so fucking stupid, why don't you write one chapter of the mango stuff that the whole world asked you to write? Damn it to you

I feel like this book is useless. At first glance, the author seems to be a fake Naruto fan. The timeline doesn't match either. Secondly, as most people say, civilians during the Warring States Period in Japan did not have surnames.

The author has a suggestion for you. The "I" in the article is very confusing and makes you feel uncomfortable when reading it. It is better to replace it with the corresponding names of people. In the first half of the sentence, the protagonist's name is still written, from a third-person perspective, and in the second half, the word "I" is added. In the first sentence, "I" is still the protagonist, but in the second sentence, "I" becomes Hinata or something?

Is the main character a ******? I've only read ten chapters and I feel the urge to kill him. I'm so annoyed that I'm dying. Is it really okay to make the main character like this from the beginning?

I've only read a few chapters and can't stand it anymore. Sometimes it's third person, sometimes it's first person, it's so confusing. Why did Kushina not loosen the seal of the tailed beast when she gave birth to an eldest son like you? Do you have to give birth to Naruto to relax? Explain?