The Sword God of Konoha

It was okay at the beginning, but started to deviate in the middle, and the ending was simply a harem pornographic article 😅

Now when I see Xiaoyao, I feel the aura of a harem. When I see something evil like the Evil Emperor, I feel a fishy smell. Is this my illusion?

Read Chapter 30! I really want to complain! It's harmless but I really want to say it! 1: First is the protagonist's name! Just like Long Aotian, Haotian had the urge to abandon the book at first sight! 2: The timeline is confusing. It feels fake for an eight or nine-year-old kid to be so powerful. Also, Kato Den died in the third battle!

How many heroines are there in this book?

The sentences you speak without punctuation look really awkward.

You, the author, are also amazing. I have been reading novels for six or seven years, and this is the first time I have seen a novel without double quotation marks in the dialogue. There are also errors like this that seriously affect the reading experience. No matter how much time you spend, you should correct them! Otherwise, many people will be discouraged!

It's hard for me to read without double quotes

Please note when reading this book, please ignore the name of the protagonist before eating, otherwise it will definitely choke you to death.

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I've been watching it for so long. Where's Shinkuna?

Rock Lee opened the 8-door to the 5-door at the age of 13? ?

When a pirate goes to steal the Five Old Stars, the first generation of Ghost Tetsu, are you sure that is called death? Instead of seeking death? And how can this name not be associated with Haotian and the like? Give me a simpler name. When I see this name, it is full of Chinese style. I just think of it every day.

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Did the author live through the years of 05.06? Isn't it okay to write like this now?

It's a lot of mess. When practicing swordsmanship, just write about swords, ninjutsu and taijutsu. With your current mentality, how did you become a great swordsman in Pirates? You haven't figured out the sword yet, so you practice something else. Great swordsman is a title. It's not just that you practice a lot and can compete with the great swordsman. You are the protagonist of the martial arts time-travel flow. No matter what martial arts, you can master it once you practice it. In the end, you will be useless once you use it.

The content after one hundred chapters of this book is really embarrassing to read.

It was not made clear whether Kushina and Mikoto were there or not, and Anko was also forgotten.

Can you put quotation marks? I feel so uncomfortable.

It looks so messy! ! ! ! The punctuation marks are so messed up that I can't stand it anymore, so I give up! ! ! !

I discovered the female pig's trotters from the name of the pig's trotters

The protagonist's personality charm is average. He robbed women, now ran to rob items, and went to the dragon cave to practice some kind of immortal mode. Now the protagonist's plot is to become stronger for the sake of becoming stronger. How strong the protagonist wants to become is entirely a matter of the author's words. The author has begun to write upgrading and becoming stronger as a plot. Isn't the plot writing mainly about describing the daily conversations and experiences between the protagonist and the heroine or supporting characters? The protagonist's upgrade process often gives me the impression of being alone.

Couples in Naruto only stay together if they have a deep relationship. It is very difficult for the protagonist to start a harem. People will fall in love with you unless you act cool. If you have a lot of friends, it will take up a lot of plot. I personally think it is better to have a woman by your side. It is a question of whether starting a harem is the main plot or advancing the plot.

The sword cuts off the body and the intention cuts off the soul. I have always adhered to this point of view.

It was originally a fine fan fiction. It was written abruptly into a stallion novel.

Just call me Beichen. Why do you need to add Haotian later? You don't need to have a surname at all.

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