One's Monasticism

If it's not the first person, more people should read it 😵

It feels like farming, and here at the starting point it is a breath of fresh air in the mindless quarrel. Of course, there are also flaws. The occasional mixing of third person and first person affects the reader experience. If it is not corrected, some people will be driven away. The biggest problem now is update, update, update! ! ! !

The first person is very novel. It reminds me of Gorky's "Childhood in the World, My University". It is a very challenging way of writing.

Click to open the first chapter, first person, flash person

Cut off the roots of worries with one knife, and step into the imperial gate with two feet!

The description is very good, I am looking forward to the next one.

Are Yuanying and out-of-body the same realm?

Come on, it's very well written. I've added it to my reading list. I hope I can stick to it.

Come on! It's really well written, a cultivation version of the Super Floating City.

Is it first person? Then there's no need to look at it. It looks very awkward.

If you see the first person, skip it directly. Regardless of quality

The writing is pretty good, and if it wasn't written in the first person, more people would definitely read it. In addition, the chapters should be separated a little bit. It is a bit difficult to read a long paragraph on a mobile phone.

It can be attached with a background and implanted depending on the situation.

Come on, update, wait and see ✊

As a reader of 15 years, the setting of this book is very good and worthy of praise. The problem is that it's too bad. I have read more than 20 chapters, and basically every chapter has problems. It is really difficult to read. I hope the author can take his work seriously. .

Very nice, support! ! !

Boss, will you continue to update? Or just do it casually?

It's a pity that I voted for the monthly vote. Only next month. Come on

I like this kind of novel where one person develops slowly, not too fast, not too slow, and has flavor.

I watched a few of them and it was okay, but I couldn't stand the first person perspective.

It's pretty good, but it's written in a magical style, which makes it feel weird.

You are too lame. It has been 3 years since you updated it

Collected first 🌹

Come on, author, 2018, looking forward to the second volume

The writing is still very good, and it is rare to be able to read it in this impetuous Internet literary circle.

Reading the introduction is what I look forward to 😍