Eye of Evolution

After this book entered the plane of evolution, I felt that there were many problems. I took out some questions to discuss with book friends and the author. This book is characterized by half reference and half originality, and the setting is a highlight of reading. But when you enter the plane of evolution, it becomes blurry, neither real nor digital. The first problem is that the setting progress of this system is too slow. It should have been rolled out quickly after entering this plane to facilitate the development of the plot, instead of rewriting settings over and over again. Simple spiritual power recovery has been discussed in detail in several chapters. Chapters 1452, 1557, and the latest chapter 1626 are all involved, but no clear data relationship has been established. The amount of natural spiritual power recovery, cultivation recovery amount, and absorption of spiritual crystal recovery amount should be clearly defined as the number of spiritual power rotations per week × a certain ratio × the current spiritual power value. The second problem is that the battle process is nonsense, and the whole process is crushed by priority. The battle damage cannot be understood, and there is no reference system for the battle damage at all. Book friends who follow the early data analysis flow must be in darkness. The lack of opponents with similar ranks is also a problem, and they are constantly on the way to defeat and escape. There is also the problem of too many skills, which are suspected of being used to save the situation, because for the protagonist's position, three or four skills are enough to use well, and it will not feel uncomfortable to win every time. Needless to say, when it comes to copying books, people have different opinions. Recently, there have been too many inner dramas about the protagonist being possessed by the drama queen. The author's writing skills are pretty good, but what readers see is not only the writing style, but more importantly the author's creativity. The inner drama makes the plot advance very slowly. This is not to say that there cannot be inner drama, but that these inner activities can actually be mentioned in a few strokes, leaving some space for readers to imagine. It is really tiring to watch too many inner dramas. Finally, I would like to summarize my opinion: It is better to complete the system setting as soon as possible, or to digitize it. After all, digitization does not affect the authenticity, and then shift the focus to the plot itself. The update progress should be updated at regular intervals 😭 Some people have obsessive-compulsive disorder and will keep updating 😭. It's too late to update and I think everyone can understand if I take a leave of absence.

I think the most disgusting setting in this book is the so-called punishment for cheating. Do we want everyone to be reckless? It's quite disgusting to have to write about the protagonist using strategies to weaken the enemy and reduce his disadvantages, and also to write about the so-called punishment mechanism. Is intelligence also a part of strength? Doesn't using your brain count as strength? Totally unreasonable. Then when the whole world is digitized, the judgment that is beneficial to the protagonist depends on physics. For example, the wolf's suppression judgment either has an advantage from behind, or it has an advantage if it is unable to use force in the air. All the benefits are taken by you.

Let's put it this way, this book is a book that new book lovers can read. But for me, a bookworm of more than ten years, it was a bit embarrassing. I skipped through it. The main problem is that the author wanted to write about a wise man, but he really didn't write much about the layout and strategy. Maybe it's because I've watched too much Infinite Streaming and my horizons have become too wide-eyed. This resulted in the supporting characters and villains being uniformly lowered in IQ. The four teammates were all tool men with no ideas at all. The villain is also the protagonist and does whatever the protagonist says, so the adventure part of the spiritual world is a bit awkward to watch. Of course, the author's writing style and plot are passable. Personally, I think the author should just write an invincible and refreshing novel. There is no need to forcefully write a wise man.

Whose mask is it and who will wear it? I remember that the last time I experienced this world, when the story entered a break, Werewolf was introduced. This kind of game has appeared in reality and is widely spread in the online world. Therefore, the game can easily bring readers into a higher perspective and produce a relatively calm and objective state of review. It will produce the same obstacles as mystery novels, that is, it attaches great importance to factual reasoning and multi-directional suspicion. Suspicion creates a sense of alienation. The method of deducing the story is to bury a great test of human nature in the dark line, allowing the reader to empathize with the characters and thus the story itself. However, the author did not use this method. Instead, he introduced a battle royale plot in the second half of the story, trying to cover up another weird perspective and emotion with a common tension. It is very thoughtful, but unfortunately it is not strong enough, brother. But what does this have to do with the skill selection on the heroine's mask? First let's look at them separately. The first skill is virtualization (turning into a ghost), the second skill is intimidation (turning into a masked murderer), and the third skill is summoning (turning into a goddess). Among these three skills, only the second skill fits the label "assassin" that the author has given us for a long time, so only the second skill is like a "person". That's the question. The author knows that the second skill can deepen and create a three-dimensional image of the heroine (imagine: the heroine appears behind the enemy in a shadow, takes off the mask, the enemy is shocked, eyes full of despair, scary music sounds, a scream, blood splattered on the floor...) Why not use it? I make a decisive guess here that the method is the same as last time, that is, the overlay method. The specific operation may be that after the third skill is upgraded, it can have effects such as possession and transformation, and it has the first and second skills. Therefore, the author asked the male protagonist if he could choose another skill. But he must be the younger brother, because once the old witch's clothes are put on, it is difficult to take them off. This is inconsistent with the assassin's calm and stoic image, and it is difficult to cover up. Here we falsify the logic that the third skill is better than the second skill. First of all, which skill is stronger depends on the author's words. He can give the second skill a very high priority, or he can give the first skill a long duration and do it casually. However, people's realistic impression of some skills cannot be changed. For example, there are two situations: (1) You went to rob a bank with a mask and a fake gun, and then threatened and controlled the staff loudly. (2) You went to rob a bank with a mask and real thugs, but without intimidation or control, you just did it in one sentence... I don't know if I can get money in the first way, but I am definitely not far away from the second way. Conclusion: Fearing and intimidating the enemy in order to obtain benefits is an efficient method and a common general cognition buried deep in people's consciousness. This really cannot be covered by replacement.                                                                                                                                                                                                                      by other good people, I hope other good people can recognize me, I feel that Bai Xiaowen is not good, it is too wide-open, I think he was possessed by the author, other things are okay, not causing trouble, civilian, pass. Oh ⊙∀⊙! Happy New Year to readers of this book.

The old-style online game novels are all leftovers, a bit messy

I think this book is quite good. Except for the fact that digitization may be a poisonous point for some people, there are no other problems. Although the beginning is a bit cliche, it is not unacceptable, and the protagonist is not as mentally retarded as the protagonists of other novels. I can't understand a lot of the book reviews that say poisonous things. Maybe my personal taste is different. Anyway, I think it is quite good.

After surviving the first 20 to 30 chapters (the author's writing skills and settings are a bit novice, the later period is similar to Zhutianliu), the pace of the later period is moderate (some copies are a little slow), and the three views of the novice are super correct (I love it) Confirm the fairy grass! !

This is my first time reading a novel. I have only read this one. But I fell in love with it! 😊

If this book was five years ago, I would think it was a good book, but now it seems that I have seen the routines of this book no less than five times in other books. If you are a reader who has just started to get into novels, I suggest you read it. If you are an old bookworm, you can make up your own mind. After reading so many books, you should have your own judgment. This book has a lot of pretentious plots.

Reading this novel gives me a headache. I can't leave women alone in the early stages. It's really boring. I suggest that the author remove it.

To be honest, before the job change, the protagonist's personality was okay, but after the job change, it completely changed. It was like a different person was writing this book. It became frivolous, sentimental, childish (I personally didn't like it), very abrupt and embarrassing. And the emotional drama too! Before you changed jobs, you only had a casual acquaintance with Shuyi, right? At most, they have helped you, and they are just friends, but as you wrote, "after changing jobs," it's like the heroine was bewitched, and her relationship has grown by leaps and bounds! I really suspect that this book is written by a different author! It's too abrupt...

When can we resume three updates a day🌹

It feels good, and the updates are very stable. I personally prefer this type of book. As long as I don't watch too much, I will read the last 🙂

Author: I have a problem here that makes me feel uncomfortable. What you wrote dozens of chapters before and after 750 is still on the level, but you yourself said that the martial arts characters are brittle, but judging from what you wrote, it feels like the blood is as thick as the previous lords of other planes. He died after fighting for a long time. For example, Qiu Huan, the boss, look at how many hits he took. Also, I feel that the Butcher's poison is effective when fighting the boss except for the side effects such as reducing double resistance and so on. The nature of the poison is not very useful. The poison damage written when this skill was first introduced was not low. Why didn't you include it? Did you calculate the damage when you wrote the boss? Don't write like this just for the sake of word count. Really, you have weakened the protagonist in many places. There's really no need to do this again. I know you don't want to make the protagonist too invincible, and there must be a limit to the order. You write how powerful the equipment he gets, how powerful his profession is, and how powerful his teammates are. This is digging a hole for yourself. If you can't fill it, you are not trying to bury the book. Make persistent efforts. Generally speaking, I can't find too many faults. There is no brainless showmanship or routines. The pattern is large enough and the story is not monotonous.

Even at the beginning, a *** supporting character appeared, as well as a childhood sweetheart. Both parents are dead and my sister is missing. A poisonous batch. The childhood sweetheart also fell in love with *** the supporting actor. Oh, by the way, the protagonist is reborn in high school when he is preparing for the college entrance examination. What were these authors thinking?

I saw Chapter 2 a year ago and Chapter 3 a year later. The author of "Fat House Attack" travels back in time to a handsome boy with the same name who lost both his parents and brought up a younger sister. A powerful male classmate beat the original body owner to death for the school belle. The protagonist is a top student, but later he didn't do well in life. Is it really useless to study? The powerful second generation will hurt someone because of a woman, and tease a beautiful woman when they see it. Do you really think that the parents of these people have no sense and that their children have no sense of government? The beautiful school beauty knew that the protagonist was being targeted but still helped her. Do you really think that the protagonist's death was not tragic or fast enough?

Henniubier

Lao Ya, don't let the quantity go up and the quality go down. Come on! Come on＾0＾~

Why do you feel that after being promoted to Evolver, it is still the same as Awakener, just in a different place to start the plot and refresh the map? It's so boring.

There are a lot of trolls, Lao Ya, come on, because I am a student, I read it on **. I heard that reading ads there can make the author earn money. I don't know if it is true. The tone is a bit flat now, and I don't have the completely immersive reading experience before. I hope Lao Ya writes better and better.

After reading about 300 chapters, I feel like the protagonist is like a dog-licking novel. Sometimes I clearly don't have the equipment for this part, and my girlfriend also has it, so why should I give this thing to Shuyi?

Three chapters: The protagonist hit a meteorite in the eye and traveled through time. There is a sister who can only cry and tell the protagonist that our family has no money and cannot compete with others, so we should give up martial arts. I recalled that the person who was penetrated was beaten to death by his classmates, because the school system will not punish him even if he is beaten to death as long as it is not intentional. Then a classmate went to the hospital and said that you were so lucky that you didn't die (when I watched it, I was thinking, is this intentional? An attempted murder?). The reason for targeting the protagonist is because of the school beauty. Then in the next chapter, the school beauty comes and uses her own industry to help the protagonist find a profitable job. When the protagonist goes there without reporting the name of the school beauty, the junior supervisor starts to ridicule him. . .

Come up with some ideas. Will the evolved eye be the eye of death? This eyeball was given to his son by his father, saying that there was a chance he could resurrect his sister. But there is still one person missing in his family - his mother! ! ! I guess his mother died unexpectedly, and then his father heard that collecting the relics of the God of Death can resurrect people (or he can become the God of Death to resurrect people), so he found a way to get an eye. Because his goal was too big or for some reason he gave it to his children and asked them to collect it. (Maybe her sister also had an eyeball that was robbed) This is purely personal, don't criticize if you don't like it!

It is a very interesting book. Although the routine may easily turn off a large number of people, you can see that the author is very careful in writing, and the story is quite thoughtful. You can even see that the author quoted classics, quoted the source and research of the story, and in order to be rigorous but also joyful, he did not hesitate to transform himself into the author of the happy Pipi Monster 😁. It took me four days to read the latest update from the first chapter. Although it is very time-consuming 😵, this book makes me feel that it is worth it. Come on^0^~ Author!

Thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, the author doesn't have to watch other people gossip! We have a group of fans to support you! If you have anything to say, let's talk about it, and we can all shoulder it together! The work is really good!

For novels of this type, it would be much better if the setting is influenced by laws, causing technology to weaken. Really, many novels only know about nuclear bombs. To be honest, as long as you can't reach the level of crossing the void, technological weapons can teach you how to be a human being.

Is it possible that the setting of this hidden sect is a powerful lord territory hinted by the author 1 It may be a foreshadowing for a great unification 2 There may be no such thing as a great unification in the evolutionary plane, which is closer to reality. This plane is equivalent to being held captive by that powerful lord 3 It is really a background of this plane, but the possibility is very small. Because there is no check and balance, and there is no rule, it means that the main energy of this sect is not focused on this plane. The above is purely personal speculation, the author is the biggest, big big! ! ! !

The real protagonist: There is a heroic boss brother and a heroic boss sister-in-law. Even before awakening, there are dark gold equipment waiting for you, and the high-level rare leader Erha is always ready to lead the way. False protagonist: Just after time travel, the rich and powerful second generation comes to provoke him. His parents and sisters are all missing, and he still has a younger sister to feed. You have to rely on yourself for everything, being angrily attacked by elite monsters in the wilderness area, and embarking on the awakening mission in embarrassment with the most useless mental attribute for awakening. 😁😁😁

I ordered it for five yuan because of the review, and it was extremely poisonous. Why did the book list recommend it so much? I took it.

I found a strange phenomenon, those who commented on this book are not good-looking. Those who say bad things about abandoned books are basically those who read pirated copies. Then spray here.