Life and Death Game Battle Royale

I tolerated the innocent and cute attitude at the beginning! I can't bear to think that someone else is invisible and taking away your ammunition! Chapter 4: After eating chocolate, I was still thinking about not being discovered by others and eating the food secretly! I 😡😡😡 Chapter 5 I was awakened by the sound of gunfire in the middle of the night. The ceasefire outside took more than ten seconds and you ran out to pee? Even though the gunfight was in a distant city and down a hillside! But you know that no one died without a notice. Do you know if others will come to your place? If you want to pee, can't you find a corner? Can't you drink the remaining bottle of distilled water from yesterday? Go to the toilet at your own risk? When you come back, you only have two bottles of mineral water left and you poured half of the bottle to wash your hands! ! !

This is the game of chicken. If you play the real game according to the gameplay of chicken, you will die faster. The author made it simple. In reality, ambush and killing people are much more powerful than chicken. Can chicken dig holes and lurk? Can a chicken climb a tree to hide? Can chicken eaters use a lot of garbage to create trap defense facilities? What's more, the setting of attribute points I hate is simply inexplicable. Maybe strength and agility can be summarized in general numbers, but how to calculate intelligence? Either a college student is better than a junior high school student, or a doctorate is better than a migrant worker. Intelligence cannot be calculated numerically, including endurance, dying struggle, gritting one's teeth, firm belief, etc. The endurance shown is different. How to calculate perception is inexplicable! The skills are also strange. According to this arrangement, in fact, the first people entering this game should be soldiers. The battle for first place will only be a matter for war professionals, and others will not be able to grow up at all! No one can compete with soldiers, not even special forces, mercenaries, professional bodyguards, and killers! The author doesn't know why he thought it was all based on eating chicken. The more I read, the more I feel sleepy!

I don't understand what this book is trying to express. Battle Royale. If you kill someone in Chapter 20, you will obey. And you can obviously beat him to death. Why do you insist on making someone fat and then chop him with a knife? What do you want to express, author?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is so verbose that it made my whole body hurt when I read it! The protagonist looks like an idiot but is proficient in firearms knowledge? You appear inexplicably in an inexplicable place, and someone inexplicably tells you that you are going to play a battle royale in the inexplicable main god space where you will die inexplicably. The protagonist is not surprised at all? Some people were thrown to death, some were beaten to death with fists, and some were shot in the head with a gun, but they weren't surprised? Although I have only read more than 10 chapters, and although I complained, I still want to say that the author should start again, and explain the antecedents in a flashback way from the protagonist to about 60-30 people, and then combine it with the details in your current book, such as discovering the traces of the enemy's life to carry out assassinations and storming.

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Cold, cold-blooded, no emotions, only killing

In an environment where you can die at any time while participating in a mission, the protagonist's unhurried attitude is enough. If you don't train enthusiastically and don't hold your thighs, is it really a good idea to exchange injections for tickets?

This is the most poisonous book I have ever read. If you can persist in reading 15 chapters, you will be immune to all poisons until you finish 10 chapters.

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