The Adorable Artifact Immortal Is the Villain

This is the first time I have read a novel in which the heroine is weak from beginning to end. She obviously has various inheritances, but towards the end she is still a foundation-builder. It is common for her to be suppressed by powerful villains, and she is also plotted by rats. I thought I would be released after being tortured for a long time, but it turned out that I felt like I had eaten a fly the whole time. The first time I commented, it was really because the feeling I felt after watching it was indescribable, impressive, and I couldn't help but feel unhappy. Maybe this is abuse.

I think the heroine was beaten all the time. It was really upsetting to watch. She kept being beaten so much that I even suspected that the author was not her mother.

Is this heroine sick? Find an opportunity to reveal your qualifications and win the family's help. You have to repay the family anyway. Is it so disgusting to use it? ? ?

This book is very exciting. Judging from what I have written so far, it is different from the enchanting little goblins in the revenge-type of rebirth, time travel, and cannon fodder return. Although the heroine has a prophet, she has gained it by going deep into the tiger's den and giving up part of her soul. Her physical training skills are also something that others should not let others know. When she enters the secret realm, she relies on her skill and resourcefulness to gain opportunities. The heroine has a decisive personality, dares to fight and break out, and has a ruthless spirit. She is ruthless to herself and others. She still does not give up in desperate situations, survives in adversity, remains vigilant and does not rely on others. It can be said that the character of this heroine is very likable. If the heroine is well portrayed, it can be said to be an excellent female protagonist who cultivates immortality. Let me talk about some of my own insights from reading the book so far. The heroine has her own character strengths. She dares to fight, venture, and gamble. The luck given by heaven is very good, but it is too dense. Although danger and opportunity go hand in hand, the heroine should be given some appropriate failures. After the storm, there is a rainbow. Don't stop. A bigger storm is brewing in the rainbow. Anyway, it's a drowned rat. It's okay to struggle again, otherwise how will you know that you have tried hard. It is appropriate to give some opportunities that cannot be obtained even if you work hard. If there is an opportunity for every danger, it is easy to write the ups and downs of getting the treasure. If the dangerous treasures of luck are too dense, it is easy to write a tutorial for clearing the level and defeating the boss. On the other hand, the article should be left blank, dig some holes, and make some foreshadowing. Otherwise, readers will suddenly have different ideas and easily abandon the article, or stop for a while. Reading it again from the back will not affect the reading. It is not good to read smoothly without lingering after reading. Also, the most important thing is logic and loopholes. Writing must withstand scrutiny. Since the heroine has read the past life memories, the concubine's past life and the past life of the time traveler, she should know that wealth in the world of immortality is not disclosed, and children are not afraid of telling honey if they give it away. A powerful person can directly search for souls. The cruelty of the world of cultivation is brutal. The heroine is not conscious yet, but you still let you ignore me a thousand times. I treat the world like my first love, and I am cold-hearted towards my family. How do I know these children? I don't know what kind of life the heroine has lived. The heroine's character is still easy to be subjective and take things superficially. The same is true for He Bailian. She has never thought about why she fell into the volcano in the first place. The heroine trusts others easily and is too forgetful. She is unprepared for the world of immortality. She has a character that will take out her heart and lungs when others give her a piece of candy. If it weren't for the heroine, she would have died hundreds of times. The supporting characters are also created with great care, and so far it looks pretty good. There are several types of supporting characters, each with their own characteristics. For a good article, supporting characters are indispensable. If the supporting characters are well written, the article will be more brilliant. The supporting characters must also have IQ, personality, combat ability, opportunity and scheming to be comparable to the heroine. The villains are not necessarily evil people, maybe they have different positions. , A turning point changes the direction. We fall in love with and kill the heroine. If you cut off my leg, I will take off your arm. There can be more types of villains. Villains and villains can also be enemies. They don't necessarily have to fight to the death with the heroine. The villain in the Wuxin Master online drama is very outstanding. The black-hearted little loli is very cute, and she can also be a little silly. In novels about cultivating immortals, the pattern is very important. I haven't seen the pattern of this novel so far. The methods and means are different between fluttering in a basket and seeking death in a sky. For female protagonists, the pattern of Slowly Journey to Immortality and Rebirth of a Female Immortal is quite good.

I almost got depressed while reading this novel. After reading more than 30 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt like the whole world was full of bad people.

A good plot of cultivating immortals is like a bloody house fight between rich and powerful families. Is it interesting? Feeling tired.

Well, were you frustrated until the end? What's so good about that?

It's so brain-burning that I can't stand it anymore. It seems I'm not suitable for reading this kind of novel.

To kill the female protagonist and seduce the male protagonist, is this writer a misogynist or a prostitute?

After chasing it for more than half a year, I finally finished it. The ending was not interesting enough. It would have been nice to write more about the relationship between the two, and the male supporting character didn't have a strong sense of presence. Generally speaking, the author has a great imagination, unconstrained imagination, and unique ideas. The novel is worth reading.