Immortal Ni's Clear Water

Like the title, build a small building. If you like it, you can leave a message below. Please refer to the sample format and write it simply. Of course, don't be too outrageous, such as Long Aotian, Super Promise and the awesome Dafa... Laosheng will often come here to choose characters~ Example Name: Qingshui (Male) (Male or female, or a eunuch like Xiao Guizi, as long as you want...) Faction: Demonic Path (also the Immortal Path, Buddhist Path, or casual cultivation, or specifically the Ghost Path, the Fire Path, body refining, elixir refining, etc.) Sect: Sword Forest Sect (you can refer to joining an existing sect, or you can make up your own. If you make it up well, I will give you the awesome status of the sect leader and elder etc.) Weapon: Black Sword (make it up yourself, don't be too outrageous) Exercises: "Zuo Forgetting Sutra" and "Ten Thousand Swords Returning to the Sleeve" (make it up vigorously to save old students' brain cells) Mount pet spirit beast: Xiao Guizi's kind can also be counted, or the big oriole (I don't really like dragons, phoenixes, etc., They only appear in the later stages, and there won't be such perverted spirit beasts in the early stage.) ———— Ps: If it's too troublesome, just give a simple name, male and female, and camp...🙏

The book "Xian Ni" is probably a memory from my junior high school days. It was written many years ago. When I saw the title of this book, because I couldn't remember who the author of Xian Ni was, I stupidly went to Baidu to search for it. I almost thought it was a side story by the author of Xian Ni! Although I can no longer remember what was said in "The Immortal Rebellion", but because the author chose the character of Qingshui to write his biography, I am very curious and want to know how the boy in my eyes turned into the man lost in the killing after reading "The Immortal Rebellion". The introduction reveals the flavor of a great god, let's worship him. When I read the opening paragraph, I felt that this book must be an excellent work, because if you write it with your heart, it will be like a precious treasure in the world, created only by you. This gave me a very deep feeling, because I can feel the meaning of this book and your seriousness, just like me. The sentence that touched me the most was this sentence: "I think he must have been innocent and had clean water splashed on him." What exactly happened, and how miserable and unbearable his fate was, made that innocent boy turn into a murderer in despair and hatred, vowing to destroy the world. This character must have many, many stories. However, objectively speaking, as a reader who wants to read this book, I don't particularly like this cover. It does not reflect the fall of the Qingshui Kingdom. The young Zhu Junbai changed his name to Qingshui. After years of hard training, he became a different person in despair and hardship and became the God of Death. It also does not particularly reflect the emotional tone revealed in the entire article. So I hope to find a small fault and hope that the author can improve his cover. I have to say that the main purpose of book reviews is to find faults before I go back to take orders. However, there are many wonderful masterpieces by great masters. Due to my limited ability, I really can't find where I can make some suggestions for reference, so it's really exciting to click on one chapter, and then the next chapter, and the next chapter. All the words turned out to be compliments, and it felt like kneeling down and hugging her thighs. So I hope you don't hit me. I really feel that because of this masterpiece of "The Immortal Rebellion", I especially want to see the ups and downs of the character Qing Shui, his road to revenge, and what kind of story his death-like killing brings about. So she looks exactly like a little fan girl, looking down.

The introduction at the beginning is very strong, and the contrast is very clear. First, the good news is delivered, making people feel happy for the victory, but the next second they fall into hell. The good country will perish at the drop of a hat, and it also makes people feel particularly eager to know where the black rain and the people coming out of the ground come from and why they do what they do. At that moment, I actually predicted that this young man's fate would change from now on. The tension that followed, the ruin of the country, the ruin of the family, and the despair of having no other way out, are all reflected more and more clearly and profoundly. In fact, the whole article made me feel very nervous, with a sense of crisis and oppression, repeated disasters, the growing desire to kill, death, revenge, such dark words. But in addition to liking the protagonists, I really like Xiao Guizi. Is this a deviation? I don't know why I think Xiao Guizi is so cute. Without explanation, I don't think it's strange. After all, Xiao Guizi really has a lot of things to adjust the atmosphere in her interaction with Qing Shui. The whole article feels relaxed and relaxed. Anyway, I have been writing book reviews for so many months, picking so many bones in the eggs, but I still haven't found the part in the article that makes people shake their heads and say no, and make people choose red crosses to close it and stop pursuing it. I really like the plot, and I actually like Qingshui as a person. I also like that the author seems to be not writing a story between the lines, but creating a living person. A boy who was once as clear as water, his revenge, his killings, his destiny, and his life.