Transmigrating as the Big Villain

He dies from poisoning in the first ten chapters. As the Holy Son, his authority is challenged time and again. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is practically zero! How can he remain the Holy Son with such incompetence? The sect's morale has long since crumbled; how can the group possibly survive?

The game starts with enemies everywhere, which doesn't feel like a villain at all; it's more like the protagonist... The main villain should enjoy the admiration of others, befriend them as brothers, politely bow down when there is conflict, and then secretly kill them, so that others will still think you are their good friend until the very end...

If you can't write villainous stories, don't write them. This is just a bait-and-switch. The description of the holy son as incredibly powerful is ridiculous; in reality, anyone can step on him. Is this what a holy son is? What a trashy holy son!

This villain is such a saint! His own Blood Guards were wiped out, so he went out of his way to exterminate the entire clan, only to hesitate and kill a few people. It's laughable! The Zhou family is even fighting alongside the protagonist against him, and he's still acting like a saint. He's a disgrace to villains!

It's finished! I feel a little melancholy. To be honest, towards the end, I really didn't want to write anymore. Actually, I quite liked this book; it wasn't full of clichés, and it was refreshingly original! In the very end, the Holy Lord died, Ah Gou died, Mo Sheng died, Jian Zi died, Qin Huang died... And finally, Jiu Ge also died.

A major villain? He's just a sanctimonious idiot. As the author, he didn't even know about the various plot twists and opportunities in his own novel? Didn't he know how to preemptively steal plot points? In the fantasy world, human life is the cheapest thing. He's indecisive in killing, doesn't he know how to eliminate threats completely? Always leaving them for others to take revenge on? Trash, so much nonsense.

I feel like this book is better than "The Strongest Senior Brother in History" 😱

A struggling writer transmigrates into his own failing novel, forcibly kills the male protagonist, and makes the book in this world even more of a flop.

There's a reason for the poor grades: you wrote a villain story, so why not just be ruthless? You're so slow and indecisive, always trying to maintain some kind of image: what's going on here?

To be honest, the best villain novel I've ever read is "The Villain Arrives," though I'm not recommending it, just expressing a sense of regret.