The Never-Falling Pirate Flag

If you don't do evil things, you won't call them pirates or adventurers.

I would like to ask which chapter everyone started to abandon the article? I am revising the article now, and I know that there are many problems ahead, so I want to know where a friend who gave up the book saw what made him give up. This will also make it easier for me to find the problems in time. After all, I have already written the entire outline and details of this book from the beginning to the end. Many seemingly unreasonable places are actually pitfalls I deliberately dug. Just because I know the follow-up content, I instinctively do not think there is a problem there. However, this can easily misunderstand the readers' senses. I hope you can help me put forward your own opinions. It's not easy for a new author, and many aspects are not as comprehensive as those experienced authors have considered. I don't want to just earn perfect attendance every month, so I hope to get help from everyone. I don't ask for direct subscriptions, but I just ask for your valuable opinions when the quality of this book is not good. Here, I would like to thank everyone who has helped me

The protagonist is Long Aotianxiang, who is willing to work hard and has talent, but he is not favored by God. The slightest dissatisfaction will make him defy heaven. The opponent is not only a mere sidekick, but the character's IQ is not weak, at least not so much that just a plan full of loopholes can make everyone praise him after seeing it. It looks very smooth, especially in the later stages. Coupled with the plot setting of 'pirate flow'. It reminds people of the passion of student days and the flying days of youth. . . For a new author, what more can you ask for! One word, come on! Two words, worthy of appreciation and encouragement!

As the title states, I am a new author, and I have a lot of shortcomings in controlling some content. I also ask that you please bear with me and leave your valuable comments. Thank you.

I haven't read the book, but the author said that many readers like dark protagonists. Oh, if it's really dark, I'm sorry, I'll spray you to death. I read a novel where I felt happy killing a little girl. Oh my god! I can understand the protagonist and the author, because no matter how big the pit is, it can be filled, and no matter how bad the protagonist's character is, it can be explained. What I can't tolerate is why readers become happy one by one. Slowly, this chapter is full of fun. I posted a comment to refute, hehe, how many people greet my family. The people at Qidian are becoming more and more amazing, really

Looking at those glorious pirates at the starting point makes me want to vomit. A pirate does not kill, rob, smuggle, or kidnap. I also like to do reverse operations, uphold justice and take risks everywhere... Why don't you call yourself an adventurer?

Does this kid have a problem in his head? To put it bluntly, his mother and sister died because of him. Why do you hate his father so fiercely? When manpower is finally exhausted, hate yourself with so much hatred. He committed suicide in front of his mother's grave. He is insane.

Why does it feel like there is a shadow of the pirate system? The pirate system is an old book from 2011. I just finished reading Pirate System and was looking for a pirate-type book. I saw that the plot settings in this book are quite similar to Pirate System.

It can be seen that Chen Cheng, this arrogant thing, will be killed, otherwise Sawdgers wouldn't have that weird smile at the end. However, as a novel, the first chapter is a bit slow before the protagonist is completely clear, but it is still within the acceptable range. Since it is a pirate, will it turn into a fantasy novel in the guise of a pirate? For example, One Piece, although it is called the "Pirate" King, the main battles take place on land. Moreover, pirate novels are different from other novels in that they require a huge world view. The world view of Pirates of the Caribbean is relatively small. However, this work is a movie after all. The plot of the movie moves quickly, so if the world view is too big, it will become a series. This is not the case in the novel. The pirate world in the novel must have this huge world background. The world background is too small and it is not satisfying to watch. Even if the protagonist really becomes the pirate king, it will not be that great, but the world is too big and cannot be grasped. Therefore, I look forward to the follow-up content. If the above four problems are solved, then this book will be a masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's a very attractive book. I hope the author can continue writing. I'd love to read the follow-up content.

Can a world without Captain Jack Sparrow be called a pirate? Let the author keep it to himself

Damn, the ghost ship here is much more powerful than the one in Pirates of the Caribbean. If we were to fight in a group, who would be the one? 😓

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. What can I say? If you are writing a Western fantasy, you must first understand the context of the Western fantasy. The dialogue seems to be particularly dramatic.

I think it's okay. The author's writing is good. In fact, the main writing style of a book must be good, otherwise it will be easy to get into trouble. The author has skipped the first few chapters, so it's okay so far, especially for novices. So, cheers, author 🤓

Like the title, there are really too many reasons. The profession system is very complete, including swordsman, fighter, warrior, elf archer, gunner, magician, dark mage, necromancer, dragon fighter, priest, war chanter, there are already many. In addition to the orcs and beast soul warriors, and the recently introduced beast soul sacrifice, I guess there will be unique professions in Longyuan Kingdom. With the occupation system and the magic system, each occupation (player) has a wide range of development directions, and its positioning is not limited to occupations. There are also world settings, with a total of nine sea areas, seven large empires, and several small countries. Each empire has its own unique environment and professions. The Alonso Empire has dark mages and dark fighters, the Corte Empire has multiple mages and multiple magic ships, the Saint-Quentin Empire has priests, the Longyuan Kingdom has unique professions, the Winter Country has ice and snow mages, the Fran Empire has sea beast knights, and there are multiple underwater races and special professions. In addition to these, there are ships. It is not an exaggeration to say that the magic ship that I saw in the book does not require the designer to spend any more effort. There are really too many special ships in it, and the systems and levels are all divided. The most important things in the maritime era are all well designed. At least if this one is adapted into a game, it will not be like One Piece, which only focuses on people and not ships. To put it bluntly, it is selling sheep over dogs. If you add the territory system, the content will feel richer. Players who choose pirates can attack the territory themselves and expand their power bit by bit. Finally, several powerful pirate players will compete for the titles of the Six Pirate Emperors and the Eight Pirate Heroes. If the player chooses the navy, they can also have a merit system. They rely on merit to upgrade from soldiers bit by bit. In the end, the strongest navy in each country is the commander. Whether it is the commander or the six pirate emperors, there are benefits. Personally, I feel that there are really many types of online games now, so many that they are already bad, but there is a lack of strategic online games. Although there are such online games, there are really very few. If this book can be changed into an online game, I feel that even if it will not be a big hit, it will at least be regarded as a milestone work. ✊

Is there a group? Is there a group? 😁

Sigh:-(I just read Chapter 11 and it feels quite poisonous. Although the elf knows the protagonist, he won't bow down and swear allegiance to the protagonist for the first time. It makes people feel like Long Aotian. Will he die after a little foreshadowing?

Is there a female protagonist? I want to see one with a female protagonist

Build a luxurious wedding boat for [Jacob and Sister Via]. I really like the male and female protagonists, and I became fans of them immediately. My girly heart is bursting with excitement, so I quickly came to call.

The first thing in another world is that there is always discord

Old man, you have over two million words, right? Good 6, good 6...

So it's not easy to say that this is a nautical one. I've been looking for it for so long but I still haven't found one.

It feels different from what I've read before. The first few chapters