Endless Total War

Although it's good, is it wrongly classified? It should be divided into romance.

Why do I always feel aggrieved when reading this book? ——The author must give him two swords in front of me. Summary: There are too many foreshadowings, and the character development of the protagonist fails - I always think about the woman I regretted in my previous life and then think about how I can't regret her and marry another woman. It's a very awkward character. This book is still readable overall, but it feels like reading a romance novel—did the author assign this book to the wrong category? ! !

It looks great, but why is there no one there?

Shang was not ruined by the game among the gods, but was ruined by Chen Xiang

It looks good, but it's just waiting to be fattened up. Collect first 😁

Eunuchs during the Shang and Zhou dynasties did not need to be castrated, and eunuchs were all children of nobles.

By the way, I don't think Goldfinger has any sense of existence.

What do you think of the last few chapters?

What do you think of these recent chapters? Do you prefer more dialogue or more psychological description?

The collection has been reduced a lot recently. Can you tell me which chapters are not well written or have errors before I leave? Format: Chapter + Question

Feedback building If you have any suggestions for this book, feel free to write them down here, and I will humbly adopt them. It is really difficult for one person to write about the Shang Dynasty, which included more than a thousand vassal states, and to correct the bad parts of what he wrote before. T^T