The Uchiha Clan's Tank-Build Swordsman

Hehe! I'm going to be bored from beginning to end, Itachi! Return to the Weasel God! A person who eats relatives.

The protagonist is too childish and naive. He still wants everyone to be equal and abandon the nobility. It feels like it is the world's fault and it is up to the protagonist to correct it. Alas, it is untrue to say this in a world where personal force is against the will of heaven. In current novels, it feels like whenever the concept of equality for everyone appears, most of it is abandoned. Except for the history and red literature, it is suitable, and the rest is just embarrassing.

Confidence to Uzumaki Mito? ? ? I'm afraid you took the wrong medicine

I feel that the protagonist is very naive, and real society cannot be equal, not to mention that your ninja world is so naive that I don't want to watch it.

And can Jiraiya and Tsunade really do CP? Is it really suitable? 1: Can you accept your wife hanging out with some unscrupulous men, coming home late or even not coming home at all? A bunch of scandals? 2: Jiraiya's lust has been shown since childhood# Kato Dan is much stronger than Jiraiya!

If you are not in your position, you will not seek to achieve your goals. It is a very simple truth. Aoki Kumaichi was killed because of a thief. The protagonist wanted revenge so the thief hired a large number of ninjas to eliminate the thief. Even the famous names of the Fire Country don't care about you interfering in such a big thing? And you don't even know if the thief was raised by others. If the robber is gone, will the ninja go to eat the northwest wind?

Now the more I read this book, the more frustrated I feel. The more I read, the more unhappy I feel. Author, you should really tone down the cheats a little bit. You made the protagonist's cheats so strong. As a result, any character can bully the protagonist so far, but the protagonist hasn't resisted much. Either follow the story to the end, or give it to a weak character. A little cheating and slow development, even if you are bullied, but a small cheating, slow development, I can barely accept it, but if you give the protagonist such a powerful cheat, he has never used it. Basically, 90% of the difficulties are not overcome by strength. So tell me, what is the use of such a big cheat? Does it disgust me? To be honest, when I first saw your awesome plug-in, I thought it was an invincible novel. I also like elements such as doing business, developing power, and magic transformation. But now, the more I read, the more frustrated and unhappy I become.

The protagonist has always been so naive, he has to bear the loss of whatever he wants to gain! So what if I have a hangup, are I still planning to become a saint? ?

While saying it's safe, he's going ahead with it. What the author writes is contradictory. I can't see it. Old book fans with a little bit of intelligence will be persuaded to quit by the first few chapters. The opening is not written well, and the system is not written in detail. Are you cheating or lowering your IQ?

That's it. I don't have any objections to the protagonist's ideals, but the protagonist is indeed a bit of a virgin, and likes to take care of everything, and forcefully carry things that are unnecessary; And the intervention of Tsunade and Jiraiya is also very strange. I also like Jiraiya, but isn't Kato Suan more suitable for Tsunade than Jiraiya? How are you sure that Tsunade must like Jiraiya instead of friendship and affection? It is known that Tsunade really loves Kato Dan, I don't like such a forced and subjective split; There is a problem with the plot arrangement. The protagonist wanted to hide in the early stage, and then killed the ANBU of Shimura. He also wanted to cover up some traces and wanted to pass the blame to the fictional organization, so he killed this one. He was the one who had just had a conflict with the protagonist. Anyone with a brain can guess that the character is a bit out of character; Also, the protagonist is too friendly to the non-villain characters who appeared in the original work! It's a bit like the original character. If Matt was moved by his youthful passion, what about Mito Uzumaki? Tsunade? I don't like Uzumaki Mito very much, with his elbows turned outward; And the so-called Higashino sisters' thing, Uchiha Momoru's thing is also very strange; It doesn't mean that the protagonist must be so cold-blooded and decisive, he can be kind but cannot be without principles. The protagonist is sometimes overly kind, and sometimes he does some strange actions to highlight his decisiveness and decisiveness. With all due respect, if it weren't for the character's intelligence and the protagonist's failure, he would have been dealt with long ago; If kindness and desire for fairness and justice are the protagonist's settings, then the author's writing has inadvertently covered the protagonist with another layer of color - self, which is too self-centered. Whether it is the advice and persuasion from his father or Suzuki, the protagonist's attitude has been ignored from beginning to end, regardless of its rationality. His eyes have been blinded by the sense of superiority brought by time travel and the overly powerful golden finger. Of course, the protagonist's aura characters Jiangzhi and Goldfinger will protect the protagonist throughout the journey, but it is too unrealistic It only represents my personal opinion. I typed so many words to express my opinion because I really enjoyed reading it. I typed it mainly for the author. If the author doesn't like it, you can delete it. Come on!