There Is a Bug in My Body

First of all, let's talk about the advantages. As an online novel, an online game type novel, it has a unique setting and story, which makes the early stage of the novel sufficiently attractive to readers with related preferences, and the early stage is indeed very good. However... The novel began to decline seriously in the middle period. Some of the loopholes in the previous article accumulated and exploded directly. I analyzed it. First, the writing is not good. Writing requires literary background and cultural connotation. If you can tell the plot in detail, concretely and fluently and describe the story wonderfully, it is a good work. If you can incorporate your own unique characteristics into the work, that is, put your personal mark on it, it will be a superior work. However, this work does not meet this requirement or is even far from it. For some people with literary mysophobia, the viewing experience is even more uncomfortable. Second, logical loopholes, simply speaking, are unreasonable. In this case, you can only lower your IQ to keep up with the rhythm of this book, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Third, the plot is deliberate. Some plot arrangements are too deliberate, giving people a stiff feeling, making the whole text more unfluent, and also lowering your IQ. The viewing experience is extremely uncomfortable. This is the main reason why I abandoned the article. Fourth, I don't like the literary design. The story is too routine and deliberately rigid. There is a huge gap between various settings. The full text cannot be penetrated, and it becomes more obvious as it goes on. This directly leads to the failure of this book. ……

This book is really good, with plot, characters, and plot. The later stages make people want to stop and can't bear to release the book. Troughs, highs, transitions, ups and downs. There are just a few golden cliché plot points in the early stage that need to be paid attention to in the future. I hope the more I write, the better. Finally, I would like to urge you to update. Although there are still many chapters left to read, it is very uncomfortable to read the chapters after that. It is said that the author is still a fan of updating.

I've been keeping it for a long time, and I've killed a wave, waiting for the next wave on 19.4.17, 21.17

Too bad, this is the book-burning trap for the author, right?

There are a lot of typos, the writing is a bit sloppy, and I can't even feel that there is any trace of the plot after reading ten lines and skipping chapters. I still won't subscribe.

Rare fairy grass! ! A relatively new online game with unlimited streaming content . The protagonist and supporting role are both online. Not abusing the Lord, not a Virgin Character creation, behavioral reactions, plot facilities, all top-notch. Also... Ahem, the protagonist is so lewd but not obscene. There is an ambiguous plot...(Crazy exploration on the edge of the mythical beast... In terms of plot, there are two poisonous points... 1. The elf part is a bit boring 2. The protagonist does not keep his real identity secret in the game well, and the secret is leaked inexplicably... But the flaws are not concealed, and he can be a god. ←↙

I can't stand watching Vice City anymore. When I see how difficult the mission issued by the female boss is, I just want to give her a slap in the face.

Some games are opened every once in a while. Why is there always someone trying to make big news in every game the protagonist goes to? Obviously those games may be played once a week or once a month, but by chance they all happen to be encountered by the protagonist? Those villains are waiting for the protagonist to enter the game before causing trouble, which lacks rationality.

I really like the author's online games (can you tell me about the amazing website???), There are a lot of jokes~🤭🤭🤭

The game is so advanced, there is no video recording, event recording or anything like that?

I abandoned the book after more than 200 chapters. This is my first time to write a review. I wrote a good online game article like a stallion. Can't I live without women? Isn't one woman enough? Is it interesting that so many chapters have been deleted?

This book was a masterpiece back then, a real masterpiece. I used to read it every day, and those people who commented that this or that didn't work have been there for so many years. Do they need to criticize it? Why don't you watch those masterpieces handed down from ancient times to the present? I just want to lament that Internet trolls are everywhere. It can be said that in reality, I am submissive, but on the Internet, I attack hard.

I have just read dozens of chapters, and there are so many typos that it's hard to read without seeing the lines at a glance. In terms of plot, how should I put it? It's basically a fun journey. The content is quite watery, and many things fall apart if they are even slightly realistic. It often seems like dozens of chapters have been missed. For example, at the end of the Evolution Island plot, a bunch of bosses suddenly come out to torture the players to the point of death. Did they eat the whole process? The Heaven-defying Hero Slime, which I created after so many chapters, feels useless. I used it for just one game and then left it at home to eat dust (I just saw Food World). Well, it's Long Aotian's routine, but judging from the current content, Pig's Knuckle will not have a girlfriend. Even if he wants it later, it may be an NPC. Just read this book to have a good time. Pay attention to the party, be serious about the party, old bookworms, and don't join the actual party. It will kill you every minute. The game content in it is extremely imprecise, and there are many loopholes. I don't know if the author will continue to read books in the future. Alas, it was originally written for slimes, but the results were not satisfactory.

Seeing this, I am sure that I am trying to bring Stana back to China.

Seeing so many people talking about stallions, I felt relieved and started watching🤤

I would rank this book T1 among online game novels in the past two years, but it's not too much. I painted it for the third time in 5 days, and it looks really good! It's a pity that the author has changed his career and no longer writes about online games. . .

Fuyun has persisted in writing online games for so many years, with more than 10 million words, but it has not yet become a big hit. It is really difficult to get ahead in online game novels. 😓

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the writing style is too colloquial, the subject matter is very good, but the writing style is flawed, and the self-exciting points that pop up from time to time are difficult to get, and they slip by.

Not to mention that the protagonist has bugs, the first time I opened this book, the software crashed...

The author really should set it up so that fans can only speak if they have enough fans. The comment section was a mess. It's really a pity that this unlimited streaming online game article is written.

Alas, it's been 26 years. This book seems to have been written almost ten years ago. I recently picked it up and read it again, and found that even after so many years, it still suits my taste. When I first came into contact with it, I really liked this book. Although it has such shortcomings, the biggest shortcoming is that there is too little written and it is not enough to read. There are many pitfalls that have not been filled in, and the game ended without playing a few games. Of course, the most disgusting thing is that the author no longer writes books. Byd can't find any books if he wants to read them. Sometimes I can still understand those authors who have been chasing after others for a long time. I am really willing to pursue them even if they are ignored. It is really a pity. I have been reading books for so many years. No matter whether they are good or not, there are not many novels that I can remember and want to come back to read. This one is definitely one of them. Sometimes I go back and read these old books from more than ten years ago. The books I read when I was young are quite interesting. The poison resistance is much higher and they have different perspectives. Of course, in the end I still want to say, come back soon and write another game article, author

I would like to ask, is this book a pure online game or is it time-traveled into the game? Or can skills in the game bring reality? I haven't started watching it yet, so I'll ask about the genre. Thank you.

To sum up, it is a pity to throw away food that is tasteless.

Well, Fuyun paid off the debt in a timely manner! Although I will owe you more updates soon next time 🤭

I just read the novel, I'm going to order it now

When I came to the author's homepage, I realized that I had read several books written by this author! ! !

What are the points and home coins used for? I give them a bunch every time and then never use them again.

I just watched it. Is it good? ⊙▽⊙

In fact, the previous part where he was a bit of a stud was not a big deal, and if he was a little bit poisonous, it was still watchable. The part where Jiang Biyan was so poisonous that he actually engaged in NTR. Jiang Biyan was a college classmate and got married. He can write about this. What the hell.

Complaints, this book is okay and can be read, but there are some unreasonable parts. I have read more than 80 chapters so far. 1. The protagonist has completed the first game as a novice. The game introduction says that it is not recommended to bring pets. Please note that it is not impossible. But so far, only the protagonist brings pets... It's understandable, but in the game, the protagonist gets an item with two effects: 1. Increase the attributes of pets and monsters by 20%; 2. Increase the probability of pet fusion. Isn't it not recommended to bring pets? Why are there props for pets? Wouldn't it be bad if you kept 1 just for the protagonist? (Co-authored it specifically for the protagonist?) And where did you get it from a player who doesn't have a pet? (Why did you keep it, and you can't take it back home to provoke the protagonist to give props?) Of course, players in subsequent monster forms can also use it, but only 1 effect is useful... 2. In the city defense battle, the protagonist once again obtained pet-exclusive equipment... Understand that pets contribute the most in battles. Later, I came to an alchemist's island. Guess what? Hey, the protagonist once again strengthened himself through the monster mutation machine... First, he strengthened his pets and then wanted to strengthen his own monster form. He found that Note 2 has a high probability of failure and must not be strengthened. Then the protagonist tried it and of course it succeeded. The reason is because it was recorded when the pet was strengthened before, so it was successful. (It's not that the actor is no longer acting, others can't use it, only the protagonist with pets can use it) 3. Chapters 63-64, what is the main story about, the gold coin resources obtained by the protagonist with his intelligence, it is recommended to read the original text (You m, you are obviously crushed to death by force, you have to be crooked for a long time. Obviously you can directly force him, but he really makes me cry to death). To summarize, the author insists on cheating the protagonist, but that's okay, but can you rationalize it? Isn't the protagonist the first to participate in the game? None of the previous game bosses discovered that bringing pets is more profitable. The genius protagonist discovered various pet props and used them. Accepted