Rebirth: I Am BOSS

First of all, what I admire the most is the author's imagination. I won't go into details about the biggest foreshadowing - memory rollback. I was really surprised when I read it for the first time. Just the setting of a player turning into a monster boss and beating up the children is very interesting. Not to mention the various mission settings, game activity plots, stories, and dungeons, which opened my eyes. The second advantage is that the writing is smooth and does not feel too stiff when reading. It sounds ridiculous, but this is the most basic requirement for writing novels. In this era when writing is popularized, entertainment-oriented, and popular, it has become a luxury. When I pick up many books by so-called great masters and read them, I always feel that the description of the protagonist has some indescribable weirdness, such as "the corner of the mouth twitches." Many people are good at making up stories, which only requires imagination. Only a few of them are also good at telling stories, and can tell the stories perfectly, not to say fascinating, but at least they are pleasant to listen to. The third one, which can be said to be an advantage or a disadvantage, is the characterization. The two or three core characters are well portrayed, not much ink, but impressive, such as the elegant yet cunning and lovely Deep Sea, the strong and capable yet stubborn and naive Long Ji, and the lazy yet powerful Sarona who loves her sister deeply. However, there are too few successful images. Except for the protagonist and a few heroines, the other supporting characters come and go, just for fun. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. First of all, on the whole, the author does not have a fixed outline, or he did not write the outline carefully. At the beginning, the protagonist vowed to look good to the three major guilds. However, as soon as the three-minute heat passed, he began to feel that there must be something fishy about the matter. Then everyone started to develop independently without interfering with each other, and then it was just the two brothers. It gave people the feeling that there was no clear logical context, and he wrote whatever he thought of, not to mention that he returned to reality later, which was purely a forced drama. In other words, the description of contradictions and conflicts in this book is not profound and comprehensive enough, and it is not reasonable enough. Secondly, the first half of the book can actually be seen as several sections spliced ​​together, lacking necessary transitions. Although the pace is fast, it makes people feel that the story is like a tornado, coming and going away as soon as it comes. The first half of the book basically sets the plot according to several game chapters for the players. Each chapter has an activity and a story link. After participating in the activities, you can directly skip a few months and enter the next chapter. In fact, this book can completely set up some small plots other than the big scenes in the game to play a lubricating role, instead of making people feel that the author is making a documentary, and one shot goes directly to another shot. Finally, like most online works in the post-silver age of online writing (which I personally classify), this book could have been completed in one million words, and it would still be a good book. When a book reaches one million words, the routines are basically exhausted, and the plot is almost narrated. If you continue, it is nothing more than more water and less water. Although it is not easy for the author to think of a subject, write it smoothly, and achieve certain results, all hope to make more money from this cash cow. But if you write an online game article in the middle and late stages, most of the people who can stay will be for online games. You suddenly return to reality. How many people will leave at this time? How badly will the remaining loyal fans be deceived? How much damage does this do to an author's reputation? Even if you are in the previous online game, the plot of the game is much better than the plot of returning to reality. This is like a book on cultivation. The protagonist is a mortal cultivating immortality in the world of cultivation, killing everyone. Everyone enjoys reading it. It's time for the protagonist to overcome the catastrophe, and the book should be finished with a happy ending. But at this time, you suddenly write the plot of the protagonist ascending to the fairy world, and then follow the routine of the mortal world and do it again. Who can bear this? (There is a great god who was launched from the starting point. He likes to do this. After writing about the human world, the fairy world, the fairy world, the divine world, and the God of Creation, or the earth, the Milky Way, the Milky Way, the low-level cosmic kingdom, then the intermediate cosmic kingdom, the high-level, and then breakthrough the universe, but he is a great god, he debuted early, has a group of die-hard fans, and official support. No matter what he writes, people will applaud him. Okay, ordinary writers dare to do this, I'm afraid the effect will not be ideal) I give this book 20 points for creativity, 18 points for wording, 14 points for characterization, 12 points for cohesion, 15 points for richness of content, -5 for unclear contradictions and conflicts, -10 for superfluous words. Finally, the overall impression is +5. Overall, I give 69 points. If a score of 80 or above is considered a masterpiece, this book is at least worth reading.

If you say that the recycle bin has polluted/assimilated the system, I feel like a starfish. You say that the server has actually been restarted infinitely and I can still read it. But if you directly write to the universe, the writing is still sloppy, a fantasy wind, and a good tree will become crooked after it grows. Can you bear it? In fact, the plot of having sex with a girl after seeing a demon is already a bit poisonous. The context and context are not consistent, and the outline is half written? I originally felt like starfish after reading hundreds of chapters two years ago, but then I couldn't stand it after reading it on a pirated website for a while, and I just started complaining about it.

He stutters when he sees a woman, or he kneels and acts like a licking dog. Have you never seen a woman? I can't stand this kind of novel until I die.

During the book shortage during the epidemic, I found this book again when I was looking for books. The first part was really good, but after more than 600 chapters, I started to stall? It's such a shame, I originally planned to book it all, but I just can't stand this kind of stallion. It's okay to have more female protagonists, but it's disgusting to recruit people without any thought.

I was extremely unhappy with it in the early stages. Let me tell you why. Many skills and equipment are used in a fight until you are about to lose. You suddenly say "Actually, the protagonist got it as early as..." And then forcibly cheat to win. This is as stupid as spending half a word of a mystery novel researching how to crack the secret room, and then telling you "In fact, there is a secret passage in the house." Forcibly cheating and adding skills. As soon as you find that you can't beat them, you will be told that there are new skills, and you will be told how to obtain them. It is really uncomfortable to watch. The cheating is too obvious.

The biggest poisonous point of rebirth in online games: meeting someone who was a big boss in his previous life, and then describing how awesome he was in his previous life, what's the use? After three chapters of the opening chapter and two chapters of failure, can you be popular?

The liquid BOSS released at the beginning and the "big man" who sealed the petrified ruins have not been mentioned for a long time! Will they all be released together after the war this time...🤐

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The first issue was good, but when they saw the protagonist abducting a beautiful NPC and having sex, female readers expressed that they felt extremely uncomfortable. The protagonist was just a man and could not become a male god.

Which platform is more "popular"? I skipped over 300 chapters when I started the book. After reading a little bit, I found some "glitches". Putting aside the stallion, the whole world is targeting the Huaxia District. All the people are over a hundred levels, and there are quite a few who have reached level 120. The total number of people over level 120 in each district, it is no exaggeration to say, can form an army. And the Huaxia District will give you more experience and explosion rate starting from level zero. What do you use to fight with them? As mentioned before, as long as a player reaches a certain level, the national war is forced to start. Even if you open the national war level, how much higher is their level than yours? What do you use to fight? Not to mention level suppression, let alone other people's equipment and skills, can you beat them? Let's take a real-life example: DNF, where the players are at level 100, and the national war is forced to start at level 90. The players here said, we will understand when the time comes, and we will take revenge. However, they are all at the Three Enlightenment Forbidden Curse level and have all epic equipment. How can you fight them? ? ? If you are making progress, will others regress?

Loli beauties like this are the most annoying thing when reading novels, especially those about online games. As disgusting as it is, not only the protagonist licks it, but I suspect the author too? Hehe

I gave up on the one called Deep Sea as soon as it came out. It felt too abrupt. The readers have no understanding or intention of this woman, they just see how she was with the protagonist in her previous life. There is no sense of immersion at all, it's like the protagonist suddenly rips out someone's heart and soul. Anyway, I feel it's very inconsistent.

The three major trade unions have chosen the second option among those who would rather live in ruins or risk their lives.

Writing a plot that's too complicated won't make you attractive, it'll just make people tired.

It's over until the national war. The plot settings are good. If you insist on making some universe, it's superfluous (눈_눈)

After reading more than 60 chapters, I feel that the biggest flaw of this book is that the author writes about bosses, and the result is no different from ordinary level-up and monster-fighting articles. Change the boss to a minion or a player, and the story can still be told.

Some people say that there is no need to read it after 200 chapters. In fact, it is not interesting after 150 chapters. It is not a good BOSS. I try my best to be a player. When I am a player, I am a player. It is the same as the previous books. It is a pity that a good subject is obviously a BOSS, but no matter how you look at it, it is a story about a player playing an online game.

The books written by this author are basically full of cool writing, I hope everyone knows it!

From the introduction, you can tell that this is a very poisonous book that does not describe reality until it is offline. Everyone reads it as if it were from another world. The last story you read is purely fictional. Everything happens in the game. Do you think Dou Po Shang Qiong dares to write this? You are going to heaven.

One day, a man asked a woman to go on a blind date. They were in an awkward situation. Suddenly, the man asked, "Do you like Western dramas?" Then the woman slapped him and called him a gangster.

I had a hunch when I saw Melissa being deceived. If I could write such a plot, I would be very likely to be a stud, and then I would play artificial respiration with Long Ji not long after. There are no male friends among the protagonist's friends, and the ones who appear when something happens are all women. It's accurate to catch them all.

That Melissa has no fighting power, no memory and knowledge, and she wants to rebel at every turn. She just refused to kill her several times and insisted on keeping her as a vase. She also made the male protagonist a eunuch with no desire. I really disgust this turtle man.

I didn't know Fuyun that you had published a new book, so I'll support you as always By the way, I'm still looking for a supporting role 😚 The name is Chopin Solo Any supporting character is good, but it's best to have one that can be used throughout the entire book.

The Robber Boss is four meters high According to the average person's height of 1.75 Meters, Long Ji can bear it Length 17*2.29 Radius 2.5*2.29 Diameter 5*2.2.29

It's so poisonous. Why do you want to write about the deep sea? Isn't this seeking death?

It's a good book, well worth reading

He really regards the collective interests as his own interests. Someone rebels against the higher-ups, but the protagonist himself is still at the bottom and yet he has a climax, killing everyone indiscriminately.

Return to harass the three major guilds Reason 1. The three major guilds cannot be allowed to continue to be strong. 2. The other two BOSS cannot be allowed to die. Although the protagonist's current state should not be solved by the two BOSS, unnecessary conflicts must be avoided. 3. Continue to recruit younger brothers

I couldn't take it in at all. I didn't even understand anything written in the first chapter. I was totally confused.

Is this a series without a female protagonist? Again, does anyone recommend a series of novels without a heroine?