Taixuan Immortal Way

It's been a long time since I've seen a book about cultivating immortals that suits my taste. This is the second book I've rewarded with over 10,000 yuan. The previous one was The Illustrated Book of Destruction of Luck. The protagonist is very Taoist and his personality is also very suitable for Taoism. I hope to be a little harsher on Bald Donkey in the future. After all, the protagonist left his hometown. I just hope that the protagonist can return to the sect as soon as possible. The plot of the sect is better.

The writing is okay, but there are two problems. First, the writing style is not good. Although it has a bit of a fairy tale, overall it is half-written, and sometimes there are some language problems. It is very tiring to read, and overall it has a bland taste. After reading it for a long time, it feels very boring. Secondly, the plot is too abrupt, and other people are not good at it. But when it comes to the author, he is not good at it. This is only a few chapters, and the pill is returned in seconds. According to this trend, there will be few chapters to end. There are also some places where the writing is too sudden, like the part about Sword Intent. What's the meaning of it? A bunch of people watching the protagonist show off?

Not a eunuch? (ಡωಡ) (Insidious)

It's okay. For now, don't have a heroine in the back. Most of the books that are okay are ruined by the heroine. It's undeniable that a good heroine written by an author with strong writing skills is the finishing touch, but more authors are not good at writing. The heroine they write is like rat shit that spoils the pot of soup.

The writing style is too stiff. It writes about the spirituality of Taoism. It feels like the plot is as mechanized as an assembly line. The plot is good but the writing is too poor and the descriptions are not in place.

Not attractive at all, let's go

Too young, the author's own poisonous milk

I like pig feet with indifferent personalities, but indifference is not indifference, so this book is not to my liking.

Very well written. This is the way to cultivate Taoism and immortality. Unlike some books, I don't know whether it's about cultivating immortals or nuns.

When I read Chapter 34, I felt a little headache. The book itself was pretty good. I thought it was pretty good at first. But when it came to Chapter 34, did you feel that you had to create some contradictions to increase the reader's enjoyment? In particular, the sentence about one person breaking a country's destiny, or the strength of the foundation building approaching the late stage, always made me feel a bit deliberate. Since I have devoted myself to writing a novel that is different from the pretentious and slap-in-the-face novel, I shouldn't make it too exaggerated. Of course this is just my personal opinion.

Um... Just build the foundation and slip away.

After returning the pill, I feel that the protagonist has changed a lot and is not as good looking as before.

Starting from Huan Dan, the novel has been on the road of Shuangwen, getting further and further away.

When will you go back? Don't let the master die by then.

To be honest, your novel is a bit strange and has quite a few language errors!

I think the fight with Cheng Xiaoxian was too exaggerated. One was a nine-turn and one two-turn, even a disciple of a big sect wouldn't have been so exaggerated! ********* Is an amazing protagonist!

Why does the protagonist keep running to other worlds? I was caught up in the turbulence. I thought I would go back soon and skip to read it, but I didn't go back for the next hundred chapters. Don't you think it's too out of rhythm?

The writing is very tasteful. I am used to seeing routine articles, so this kind of freshness is also good.

I like the genre very much. The author should not give up. In the later period, all channels will come back. .

Although I almost gave up on the first chapter, I thought the progress was very slow, but I didn't expect it to be quite fast. I was able to reach the ninth level of Qi training in no time. The fights and dialogues were very interesting, and the pretense was calm and powerful. Added to bookshelf 😌

Question, will there be a heroine in this book? Judging from the protagonist's character and background, the heroine is simply poisonous. But there's a man and a woman on the cover, so I'm a little panicked